MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
passionate n romantic ud ☺️
hayeee yeh maan bhi na nt keaving geet for a sec 😆😳
awww geets wants to go back as she sensing annie hiding smthing frm her
omg maan is so naughty 😆ek saal k liye room k andar ☺️ 😆😆 😆😳
omg annie love ranbir bt he denied it bt geet promising her that he will make him agree n dadi also happy knowing abt it 😊
ailaaa maaneet k romance office mein bhi shuru 😆☺️
cont soon 😉
Edited by ashmaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
msk ki shamfulnes khatam nahi horai 😉😉😉
anie distrub hai geet want to go back
hahaha maan u made her embarrass with ur passion
anie ranbir mera ko laga tha
yyy every men is budhu in love aahahah
ab kiya kare gi geet
kase manai gi ranbir ko aur maan ko

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update
Maaneet office romance nice
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
lolzzz maan not getting enough of her and his threat for one year
poor geet but ha she too enjoying that na

aniee was rejected by ranbir haha so maaneet will became match makers here??

haha geet you are missing dadi and aniee so fast huh

ohh i pity that girl but she deserved that and geet is so sweet she wants that girl away from that

i loved this part

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Posted: 11 years ago
datz awesome
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry dear for late coment
i love this
sooo maaneet r back
anie n ranbir
geet said true 1st anie brother now her bro all man are stupid in matter of love
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL
Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BANNER..LOVE U)



H2 -48



It was early morning, Maaneet were sleeping in their bed, Geet was staring at ceiling thinking how to solve Anni's problem, caressing Maan's hair, Maan woke up nuzzling his nose on her neck making her to cum back to her sense

Geet :gud morning Maan,

Maan peck her lips : gud morning jaan

Geet : Maan I want to talk with u

Maan nuzzling her skin with his nose making her to shiver : hmm

Geet : Maan wat u think abt Ranbir bhai

Maan : Geet im not gay to think abt another guy while lying on my wife

Geet smack his shoulder : Maan be serious

Maan : yes Geet im, see im busy with ur , he bite her curves

Geet : Maan ahhh

Maan was licking her curves were he bite it

Geet : Maan pls


Maan sensed she want to talk abt some thing, he raised himself and stare at Geet , slowly pushing her hair behind her ear : hmm wat to say abt him

Geet : how is he

Maan : hmm nice

Geet : u know he is living alone, he don't have any one

Maan : hmm

Geet : then he is looking after his family business ,

Maan : hmm

Geet : he is very nice

Maan : hmm

Geet :wat Maan hmm hmmm

Maan : then wat I have to say

Geet : Maan say abt him, how u feel abt him

Maan : Geet wat u want to say just say it

Geet pouted :I want bhai for Anni wo,

Maan got shocked and stare at her,

Geet : Anni loves him

he didt say anything, he got up to sit, Geet holding te sheet to her bare body, too got up and sat beside him

Geet :wat happen Maan

Maan : nothing

Geet : Maan

Maan : u have already decided?

Geet : no Maan I just want u to accept

He didt reply, just abt to get up, Geet holds his hand


Geet : Maan

Maan : how can u think him for my princess

Geet got confused : why wat wrong in him

Maan : nothing but I cant give my princess to an orphan

Geet got shocked :wat wat u said orphan,

Maan didt say anything , he know he utter wrong words but in his gussa it came out,

Geet got angry and look at him : then don't forget Maan im also a orphan,

Maan yelled : GEET T T, he pinned her on bed, pressing his whole weight on her, he said wrong but tat didt mean she will say like tat


Maan : how dare u say tat ur mine, samje tum, ur mine, he came close to kiss her, but she turn her face , Maan pulled himself away from her, Geet rush to washroom leaving Maan who was feeling guilty.. he didt mean tat word but as a brother his heart didt accept it and after so many years he got his princess he wants best for his baby sister..

Geet got ready and went to kitchen, Maan know she is angry on him, he got up and went behind her, She was cooking , Maan came and hugged her back.


Maan : Geet I didt, he placed his hands inside her sari, tracing her tummy, Geet was melting with his touches but she know she have to avoid him how can he think like tis..

Geet snapped his hand and went out ,

Maan hit te counter:damn it


Te whole BF Geet didt give a glance to him, he was trying to gain her attention, but she was talking to dadi and Anni avoiding him completely

Maan : Geet cum lets go

Geet : Im leave today

Maan didt say anything as dadi and Anni was watching them, he went out to get into his car, Geet saw him going, after he wet she left to her school..

For past two day Geet was avoiding him,wenever he try to talk with her, she just moved away and at nights she was sleeping with Anni, he was frustrated with her behaviour, he is craving to hold her.. after their confession he didt let her to stay away from him for a sec too , but now.. he know he did wrong, but for tat how dare he will avoid me , I will see how long she will avoid me..

Maan (st) : but I cant be without her, damn tis womens

Geet was going to school alone and her ignoring Maan made him mad,.. his staffs have to bear all his tauntrums..till now they were happy to see calm Maan singh khurana but again te devil is back, everyone are scared to near him.. Adi thought wat happen and called to Geet

Geet who was having her coffee with dadi , saw her phone ringing

Geet : hello Adi bhai

Adi : how r u Geet

Geet : im fine bhai how r u

Adi : we are not fine Geet

Geet got confused : we , wat happen bhai

Adi : wat happen to Maan sir, he is again back to his devil avatar

Geet : wat happen to him

Adi started to narrate wat happen in tis two days,

Geet smirk (st) : so my hero is showing his gussa on his staffs and smiled Dadi was watching her conversation ad sensed something is crooking between them, she smiled at her

Geet : bhai don't worry only for two days u bear him, after wards u will see my Maan


Adi started his usual gesture : he he he two days here we are living with hell u r saying two days

Geet : wat to do bhai, u have to

Adi : Geet r u planning some thing

Geet : hmm, but I will say u later

Adi : ok Geet , im leaving ur hubby Is calling me

Geet : hmm the run bhai run

Adi : u r laughing at my plight

Geet : no

Adi : ok bye

Geet : bye and smiled

Dadi sensed they distance..

Dadi :wat happen Geet, some thing wrong between u both

Geet : nothing dadi wo, she narrated wat happen

Dadi : so ur angry with him,

Geet burst into laughter making dadi to open her mouth like O

Dadi : Geet

Geet : dadi u too believe my acting, so Geet is acting so well

Dadi : wat ur acting


Geet : then wat dadi, some one have to break his big ego naa, always he thinks he is correct others all wrong, so I want to teach him a lesson

Dadi : omg bechare Maan

Geet : he is real dust

Geet and dadi hifived each other

Geet : don't worry dadi, only for two days

Dadi : why two days

Geet : dadi u forgot wat is day after 2mor

Dadi : oh god, hmm, so ur planning surprise for him

Geet blushes and nodes yes ..

kc

All started to leave, as it was 5 clock, Adi was sitting with Maan in his cabin and discussing some projects.. they finished Adi was abt to leave , Maan stopped him


Maan : Adi

Adi : yes sir

Maan : wo , wo , he was struggling to form words

Adi was shocked and surprised to see Maan for first time stammering

Adi : sir

Maan signed : adi if pinky was angry on u wat u will do, like asking sory or some thing

Adi now know some thing wrong between Maaneet, Geet was angry on Maan , so tat he is showing his frustration on us,

Adi started to laugh in his style : he he he he

Maan shouted : Adi

Adi shut his mouth : sory sir

Maan : hmm, wat u do

Adi : sir u mean to manofly

Maan : no not tat but to ask sory, straightening himself


Adi :tat only im saying sir

Maan glared at him making his to gulp his saliva..

Adi : sir if Pinky was angry o me, I will take her to restaurant and fill her stomach or buy so many teddies, she will get cooled but Geet is not like tat sir

Maan : I know tat, he realize wat Adi said

Maan : how u know I mean

Adi smiled : I know Maan,

Maan : hmm, then say some thing

Adi : Maan if pinky didt accept my sory naa, one last option

Maan came forward to listen to him : wat is it

Adi blushed : wo wo


Maan look at him : Adi stop ur blushing and say me

Adi : wo I will fell on her legs and she wil accept

Maan got shocked , his eyes pop out :wat

Adi : yes

Maan : Adi get out

Adi run out seeing his glare

Maan thinking: me or falling on Geet's legs no way, he went to his imagine how it will look to fell on her legs, he at once snap his thought, straightening his tie no way , im MSK, but Maan wat if she ignores u

Maan : Maan think think u will get idea..

Two days he is thinking to manofly opps sory in MSK ki language want to ask sory.. but Geet didt give a glance to him.. and more his work took his time more , mainly, his work in goa and he came late .. he was lying in his bed on Geet's side and caressing her side missing her so much,


Maan thought once u cum here, i wont leave u Geet.., u have to pay for every secs for making me mad, he slept thinking Geet

It was midnight Maan heard some one screaming,

BHAIII BAHIII

Maan got up and got panicked hearing anni ki screams,

Maan : Anni, he rush out to see wat happened

It was so dark, he rush shouting : Anni Anni, he reached to te hall, suddenly lights came and he heard a huge applause

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN, BHAI


Maan got shocked to see Dadi, Geet and Anni standing with huge smile, te whole hall was decorated , he got angry , keeping his hands on his hips , glaring at them,he thought some thing happen to her but here , they playing with him, before he shouts, Dadi hugs him and kissed him on his forehead

Dadi : Maan today no gussa , its ur special day, so we all want to celebrate In our style so chup chap , listen to us

Maan didt say anything, Anni hugged him and wished him HBD, he kissed her hair and smiled at her

Maan : thanks princess, so tis is ur plan, hmm

Anni smiles : I want to celebrate ur b'day but tis plan was Geet's

Maan's gaze turn to Geet who came with his b'day cake, Geet brought te cake in front of him,

Dadi : now cut te cake Maan, Maan took te knife looking at Geet who was avoiding his look

Maan was abt to cut but Anni stopped him

Anni : bhai first wish something

Maan : Anni I don't know to wish

Anni : hmm ok I will wish for u, she closed her eyes and wished , now cut bhai


Maan kissed her forehead and cut te cake, first he fed to dadi and anni and then to Geet, both were looking at each other.. their eyes shows how much they missed each other, Geet as drowning in his eyes which were piercing her soul, both looking at each other, Anni coughed to again they attention, Geet pulled her hand back , tilt her head in shy, Maan stiffens himself

Anni : now its rituals time

Dadi got confused : ritual

Geet giggled , she know wat she meant

Anni : yes dadi u don't know

Dadi nodded no

Anni : its simple dadi, take te cream in ur hand and apply to b'day boy's face ,, she applied to maan's face he was shock and glare at her, anni back offed seeing his gussa , she got scared,


but suddenly Maan smiled at her showing his another side, Anni jumped in joy making Dadi and Geet to open their mouth to ground, Anni applied te cream on his whole face , Dadi too joined her, Maan suddenly took cream in his hand and applied on Anni and Dadi's face making them to pout

Maan : why only u have to do te ritual not me,

Anni : bhai its only for b'day boy not for us

Maan too joined them, yes tis is te first b'day he celebrating after his parents left, he was overwhelmed seeing all tis, he started to live his life.

Geet was watching them, she was happy to see Maan like tis, she wished to her babaji to keep her family like tis forever, Maan notice Geet and Geet look at him, but he turned his gaze he was angry on her for not wishing him, how much her wish meant to him but madam was angry on him, today also she have to do tis,

Anni took some cream and apply on Geet's face making her to open her mouth to ground..

Geet : Anni ki bachi I wont leave u, they both started to chases each other..

Maan : dadi I will wash my face

Dadi : hmm ok im going to my room, im tired, 2mor we have to leave to goa

Anni : me too,

Maan look at Geet and went to his room, all left to their rooms, Geet look upstairs

Maan was in his shower , standing and washing his cream, he was standing nude , suddenly a pair of hands engulfed from behind, he don't need to see who it was, he stood still with out reacting


Geet kissed his bare back, : HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAAN

She slipped her hand around his bare back. Showering kisses along his wet back. Her hand making up the abs to his chest.

Geet's wet body was sticking to Maan's bare body.. her hands were roaming, on his front , caressing his tone muscles, he was groaning but he want to control himself ,as he want to make her carve like him.. Geet know he is controlling himself, she slowly traced his back with her lips and her fingers doing magic on his front,

her fingers went to his small nipples and pressed it, tats it Maan's control all flew away, he turned pulled her, smack his lips on her soft petals.. The minute his mouth lay claim to hers it was as though a fire let loose. He heard her moan against his mouth as he tugged her closer until their bodies were flush against each other the heat of hers pressing intimately against him. She cried out her complain in that kiss wrapping her arms more securely around his neck tugging his head closer.

She squirmed with his hard body pressing her , trying desperately to adjust to this new sensation of invasion. He cupped her back & lifted her tighter against his body


He tilted her further to get her whole mouth inside. She felt her self drowning in his arms.

He instantly brought both hands to the back of her head, tugged her close & slid his fingers beneath her hair. tilting her head in a angel, he was harsh, he was carnal.. he was violent.

he pinned her to te wall, pressing his whole wgt on her body ..he lick te blood tat was flowing from her lips, he didt leave her lips , she gasped and Maan enter her mouth , tracing her every corner of hr mouth..


Geet leg's became jelly, she cant stand, she was abt to collapse on te ground but Maan hold her, he left her lips and slid down her body until his face was level with her b*****. he cupped them lushly, his tongue swiped out & wetted her n**** with his saliva. biting them leaving his claim, making them bleed, she wiggled & whimpered beneath him


He bend further and started to taste her tummy, he kneeled down and spread her legs widened giving him easier access to her, dipped his head inside her lower part, making her her legs jelly, but she hold him and leaning on te wall, he was licking her . after tasting her core, he came to her lips and started to attack her lips .. he wrapped her legs around his waist Her breath came out in a long hiss when he began to enter her body in love, passion, pleasing her claiming her. He pushed into her covering her body & claiming her mouth pressing his tongue inside deep ..,Gliding her body trying to be sync with his rhythm, but he was far too passionate today..te whole bathroom were heated with they passion

His thrust gradually became faster and slightly more forceful, taking her to climax

Geet yelled : ahhh, as she felt her muscles contacting around him.. both collapsed , after hitting their climax..he was still calming her lips


He lifted and carried her to the bed without leaving her lips, He lowered her on the bed, gently letting her down covering her body with his.she wanted him as much as he wanted her, they wet body wetting te bed, but he care damn abt it, he was showing his longing on her, his frusturation, .. he left wen he felt she is struggling for breath.. he came down to her neck,

Geet moaned : Maan,

But he didt reply to her, today he want to explore her more, his one week fasting made him to ponch on her, like hungry lion.. they made love her to till early morning, he didt leave her for sec too..

She woke up and saw he was sleeping on her, he was angry on him, he didt manofly nor asked sory to her and she too melted with his passion.. she went to washroom, her whole body is burning with his marks, she was standing in front of te mirror, she saw her skin became red and blue, there is no place he left in her without touching...

Suddenly a hand hugged her behind

Maan : wat u seeing

Geet didt say anything, he pretend to be angry and try to snap his hands, but his hold became tighten

Maan : Geet dont act tat u are angry on me, I know u r not,

Geet look at him thru te mirror who was smirking, Geet felt shy and smack his hands , Maan nuzzle his nose on her bare shoulder..


Geet : Maan leave me

Maan : no way

Geet : tis is too bad Maan, im angry, u have to manofly me, but u, DUST DHANAV

Maan :wat wat u said

Geet : dd

Maan : Geet how dare u say tat

Geet : then wat still u didt manofly me

Maan : I don't know to do tat all, tis is my style to cool u, bitting her neck

Geet : Maan , ahaa, leave me,

Maan : no

Geet : but better learn how to manofly, u have married, today ur b'day so tat only I have accept, but some other time naa, I wont have cum near u without a proper manofly

Maan : if u have not cum to me , today I have kidnapped u

Geet : chi beshramm, wat u will do after u kids came , u cant show ur style to them, she frozed wat she said, she look at him thru te mirror who was looking at her with shocked all over his face.. both are looking at each other


First time , their were talking abt their baby, his hands slowly slide down to her tummy, caressing it, Geet closed her eyes and leaned on him, pressing her back to his front, both stood for sometime feeling them

Geet : Maan wo

Maan : shh let me fulfill ur wish


Geet open her eyes : wat

Maan smirked : u said u want baby naa so I want to fulfill it

Geet snap his hand : enough MR MAAN SINGH KHURAAN, already u had enough see my skin, today quota is over

Maan : no MRS MAAN SINGH KHURANA, u had made me too starve for past one week, so I want to make up for all te days

Geet open her mouth : chi

Maan : wat chi, u know how I felt without u, dare u sleep in anni's room, again naa see me


Geet : so u showed ur gussa on bechare ur staffs

Maan glared at her : so u know wat I was going thru still u playing with me

Geet smiled at him showing her puppy face

Maan : tis wont help, u r gone today, she started to run,

Geet : no maan pls, no

He got her and both fall on te water tub, soon both got lost in their passion..

They both came out of te washroom, Geet was all red , Maan was smirking at her.. Geet open te cupboard and took a packet, gave to Maan

Maan : wat is tis

Geet: gift open naa

Maan opened a packet and saw a suit

Maan : thanku

Geet : hmm one more, she gave him a box

Maan watch her expression she was so much hesitating to give te box,and nervous, he took te box and open it there was a watch in it, .. he look at her

Geet : wo I don't know u like it or not , but with my first month salary I brought tis, he rasied his eyebrow,

Geet : no i had savings too, he glared at her

Geet : Maan i want to gift u, and i have full right on u

Maan smiled and open te box


Geet I know tis is not upto ur status but, before she complete, he capture her lips for sour sheering kiss, she got shocked and gasp, Maan enter and started to trace her every corner of her mouth, he left her after some time.. Maan was touching her forehead with his forehead

Geet : Maan

Maan felt overwhemlmed : past 20 years no one gift me like tis, on my birthday

Geet felt sad for him and hugs him, tightly, he too hold her ..


Maan : Geet if u want to stay , I will

Geet pushed him and , pouted

Maan : ok tis is for u

Geet : wat is tis

Maan : open

Geet opened and saw a pink sari and smile at him


Maan : Geet we do one thing how it will be wen we both dress each other, with innocent face

Geet : it will look horrible

Maan : lets see, he came near, but she pushed him

Geet : pls Maan

Maan :ok ok now im leaving, at night he bite his lips and went to washroom to get change, leaving blushed Geet..

Geet smile , he took te sari, but suddenly she felt dizzy, she hold te bed post, she took water and drank it

Geet : tis Maan naa making me exhausted every day, dd one week im free, but now, hmm and smiled at his carziyness..

They got ready and went down, Maan took blessings from dadi and all gave him gifts, then all got ready , and took their flight to goa

PRECAP : SAME PRECAP

NEXT PART: 49, PG 47




Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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awesome update😃😃😃😃😃
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thanks fr the sissling update
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