MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago


(THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BANNER..LOVE U)






H2 -49


They all reached goa.. they saw a very big welcum for them with banners wishing Maan,


" wish u many many happy returns of day Maan bhaiya "..

Maan was overwhelmed seeing all te decoration for him.. Geet saw him and chuckled seeing his face , and she straighten himself

Geet : dust dhanav , Anni and dadi giggled seeing them

Father welcomed them : happy birthday Maan, hugging him


Maan : thanku father

Father then hugged Geet and Anni, wished dadi..

All went inside, small Maan gave Maan flower, Maan bend and took it from him

Small Maan : happy birthday bhaiya, and kissed his cheeks

Maan : thanku and kissed him, making three ladies to drop they jaw down to ground


Then kids brought cake , Maan stood and cut te cake and fed everyone, they had little photo sessions.

Father : Maan everything is ready

Maan : just a min father, he went and stood in front of Gurmeet's huge photo


Maan : HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURU, and kissed his frame, tears were clouding in his eyes.. Guru after our 5th birthday , we are not together for our birthdays nor any other moments .. u know Guru how much I miss u.. why god did tis to us, I hate him for doing tis to our family .. once we were living happily but our destiny made us to distance.. after some years I saw u and got u . u know how much happy I was but I didt express as I don't to know to express myself after u left.. but tat too did long last u left me.. why u left me.. why

Tears were flowing form his eyes,


Maan : do u know Guru after 20 long years I m celebrating our birthday, hmm after u left I didt live my life, now I started to live.. but still I know im lagging in some thing , I cant be a perfect grandson for dadi and prefect brother like u for Anni, im not.. pls cum to me pls, he fall on his knees

Geet, Dadi, Anni who came inside saw Maan talking to Guru's pics and know how much he is holding himself, but they cant stand wen he broke, all ladies rush to hold him

Dadi , Geet : Maan Anni : bhai

Dadi hugged him, Anni too,


Dadi broke te hug and wipes his tears: Maan how can u say ur not prefect, u r my best grandson , none will have.. ur parents will be so proud of u

Maan nodes his head like no

Anni hugs him : yes bhai how can u say tat, u know u didt let me too feel tat I miss our mumma and papa, u my everything Bhai.

Geet was watching them with tears in her eyes, Maan saw her and smiled

Dadi and Anni stood in front of Guru's pic : happy birthday beta, miss u, she kissed his face , tears welled up in her eyes

Anni too stood : happy birthday bhai , Maan hugged them and gesture Geet to come near, she too joined in their hug


Dadi : ok now stop all ur rona sona and cum lets go, all are waiting

Anni wiping her tears : waiting why

Dadi : surprise

Geet and Anni got confused and look at Maan who turned his face

Anni : ok dadi

Maan : dadi u go I will cum

Dadi and Anni left leaving Maaneet alone

Geet stand in front of Guru's pic : happy birthday Guru, she was crying for him.. he was faithful to him she gave her a new life.. he did everything for her like gaurdain and left her in Maan's hands

Geet : thank u Guru, for giving tis life to me

Maan hugged her side way

Geet : dare u say u lacking, u perfect in everything

Maan smile and look at Guru : thank Guru for sending tis angel into my life


Geet was shocked and surprised to see first time with so much emotional.. : Maan

Maan : Geet thanks for cuming into my life, Geet hugged him, he to hugged her and kiss her hair, he look at Guru's pic who was smiling at them

All stood in front of huge building,

All came out , Geet and Anni surprised to see all were gathered and medias too surrounds them, Then Bgs formed a circle around them , all came in front of a huge building..a huge building not only one but there three more , the front view was covered. Geet and Anni didt know wat is it, last time too she didt notice as they were busy

Geet : Maan wat is tis

Maan : wait for few mins dear u will cum to know

Geet glared at him : dd

Maan smirked , he stood in front, he said some thing in Father's ear

Father smiled and went, and came with Small Maan.. Maan took him from Father and hold him

Maan carrying small Maan, took scissors from te tray, holding his hand, he cut te ribbon, all claps their hands, soon te cover fall down, exposing te name

GURU FOUNDATION

Media were taking pics, GURU FOUNDATION consists schools, colleges and wat ever te kids wish to study they can and hospitals with all facilities..Wen Maan came to know abt Guru's wish, from tat day he started his construction, only dadi knows abt it ,as she is still chairman of kc.. he want to give surprise to Geet and Anni, now they stood speechless.. he want to open it on their birthday to make Guru's soul rest in peace..


Geet and Anni's heart swelled in happiness, it was Guru's dreams.. they know for tis how much he worked and begged to everyone to collect fund for tis .. his dream, his ambition stood in front of them, but Guru is not there with them ,they both hugged and cried , without knowing how to voice their feelings.. Father know wat is going thru them, he hugged them, both hugged him on either side and crying

Father caressed them and kiss their hair : tis is not te time to cry kids, enjoy tis moment to know Guru's wish fulfilled , more over by his own blood , his brother.. Medias were taking pics and Maan was talking to them..Father too answered them..


Geet and Anni look at Maan who was smiling at them, folding his hands to his chest , Anni rush to him and hugged like a small kid

Anni : bhai u don't wat u have done, tis is

Maan stopped her : Guru's dream to build a high school with colleges and hospital , for tis kids

Anni nodes

Maan : I know, Geet slowly moving to him, he pulled her and hugged , Geet was hugging him, still tears were flowing from her eyes.. her words struck in her throat. She don't know wat to say

Geet : Maan, and fainted in his arms


Maan screamed : GEET

All shouted : Geettt

Maan panicked , all were got shocked and rush too hold her.. Maan took her to their room and lyed her on te bed

Maan ; call te dr

Father : she is here

Dr came : can everyone pls leave

Maan holding her hand : no i wont leave her


Dr saw father and gestured him, Father took him out

Maan : no I want to be with my Geet, Geet open ur eyes Geet

Dr was checking , Dadi and Anni was with her

Maan was pacing with so much worry.each sec he felt like hell standing out of te room. with out knowing wat happen to his Geet. from morning she is fine, then wat happen to her.he was staring at te closed door.

Father was shocked and surprised to see tis side of Maan..for first time he is seeing Maan not Msk..he thought he is very rude and dont know to show his feelings,. but seeing his worry , he realize how much he loves Geet.he thanked god for sending him in Geet's life.


after like ages , for Maan, dr came out with smile on her face. seeing dr's face father understood wat it is and thanked god.Maan at once rush to her and started to fire her with his questions

Maan: wat happen to her, why she fainted,from morning she is ok, how is she now, pls say some thing dr wat happen to her damit

dr smile at his restless :pls khurana calm down,nothing to wory she is fine

Maan was confused : she is fine

dr : hmmm,she wants to meet u but one thing Maan she need rest hmm

Maan nodes ,Anni came out

Anni :bhai i didt expect tis from u

Maan didt respond to her but he wants to see Geet, he rush inside .. Anni giggled,.Dr informed Father.

Maan saw Geet siting in te bed ,and blushing.A new glow in her face..dadi caressing her cheeks


Maan : Geet

Geet & Dadi saw Maan and know how he is worried.

Dadi : now sambalo tumhara pati ko

Geet blushes and tilt her head down and thinking how to say to him..Dadi stood to leave them alone..while leaving pat Maan's cheeks

Dadi : dont tease her and left with naughty grin

Maan got confused,here he is worried and everyone smiling..but seeing Geet,he rush to her and hugged her at once like he got his life back.. seeing her unconscious in his arms, he died thousands times. now seeing her,he got his breath back


Geet seeing him sense his worry and started to sooth his back : im fine pls calm down im fine

Maan : u dont know Geet how much im worried, i got scared seeing u.i cant live with out u..i cant miss u Geet.i cant miss any one

Geet felt over whelmed hearing his confession,she cried holding him..she kissed his neck : i wont leave u Maan .u wont lose any one but gained one more person in our life.


Maan confused: one more member

Geet broke te hug and look at him who was confused..

Geet : yes one more and blushed

Maan : geet r u saying abt these kids

Geet (st) :babaji how will i say him..why cant he understand wat im trying to say,,sighing she took his hand and placed on her stomach and shied.

Maan got more worried : wat happened Geet ,ur stomach is paining,wait i will call dr,he is going on and on..before he stood to call Geet hold him and closed his mouth

Geet : chup bikul chup

Maan was staring at her,Geet pulled her hand

Geet : buddhu singh khurana

Maan glared: Geet

Geet : then wat im trying to say im pregnant but u are not listening to me

she said all in one go feeling angry with her buddhu hubby

Maan : so wat i will call ,but his words struck in his throat realized wat she said : Geet



Geet nodes yes :u r going to became papa

Maan wad frozen to hear te word PAPA ,he cant believe his ear he is going to became father,his baby his own little family

Maan dont know wat to say :how

Geet glared ar him :wat means. u didnt leave me for a sec too and now asking how

Maan : i mean really Geet

Geet nodes yes and hugs him..Maan just hugged her tightly..his heart over flowing with mixed emotions..he was shocked,surprised, happy,excited,feared..his heart started to beat fast like he running for marathon..he hold Geet tightly,Geet too snuggled inside him..




Maan's hands slowly slides to her stomach inside her sari to feel his love, his blood which have blossomed inside her..Geet felt jolt wen she felt his warm hands and she tuck her stomach and moaned Maan..

He was caressing her tummy to feel his baby..Suddenly Geet felt her shoulder is wetting,she broke te hugs and saw Maan who tilt his head to hide his tears

Geet got worried :Maan wat happened

Maan dont know wat to say he just node no


Geet cupped his face ,wipes his tears : Maan

Maan holds her hands and kissed it,tears still flowing.seeing him she too had tears..

Maan :u dont know Geet wat u have given to me..tis is te best birthday gift i ever had thanku Geet.thanku so much

Geet was staring at him :Maan

Maan placed his hand on her bare stomach :yes my baby my love,

Geet nodes her head : hmm our baby

Maan : u see i will bring te world under his feet..i will be best father and gives wat ever he wish

Geet chuckled :Maan he is still not born but u r planning so much


Maan :so wat u see wat i will do after he born i will fulfilll all his wishes before he voice it

Geet felt overwhelmed & holds his cheeks : i love u Maan

Maan saw her and placed his lips for a kiss: i love Geet ,he said inside her mouth..he capture her lips for soul smoothing kiss.


Geet first was shocked but then started to respond him.Maan increasing his pressure on her lips & started to suck her soft petals..Geet was moaning his name feeling his tongue tracing her sensitive spots inside her mouth.both were not getting enough of each other,he pulled her to his lap and tilt her head little to get more access. he started to nibble her lower lips n then took her upper lips..geet slowly started to respond..they both were lost in passion.

Geet's hands went to his neck pulling him closer to her ,holding his hair in her fist..Maan one hands holds her and other hand caressing her tummy inside her sari..

Geet was moaning :Maan

Maan:hmmm

He was tasting every corner of her mouth , making her to feel weak. he left her lips wen he felt her struggling for breath..he placed his forehead on her and both were panting heavily..Geet was blushing and her face covered with red cue.he slowly slides his face to her tummy,pulling her sari away he started to kiss her flat stomach.Geet felt jolt..she caress his hair

Maan : Geet my baby he was showering his love by kissing her bare stomach with his kisses.


Geet felt overwhelmed with his gesture,she know he was yearning for love,but now she know wat his yearning is..tears welled up and started to flow

Maan felt wet drops on his cheeks, he at once raised and loook at Geet

He got worried: wat happened Geet is it paining

Geet nodes no and hugs him kissing his heart : i love u Maan

Maan hugs her kissed her hair :i love u Geet..both were staying in each other embrace..


suddenly both got conscious wen they heard some one clearing their throats..both broke te hug.they felt embrace to see all standing there,They straighten themselves..Maan was looking here and there..Geet tilt her head blushing.

Father came,Geet stood and was abt to bend to take his blessing but he holds , hugs her and kissed her hair

Father :im so happy Geet my daughter is going to became mother hmm..Geet blushes

Anni : me bua

Dadi :Geet jr dust dhanav is going cum


Geet and Anni giggled.,Maan glared at mouthing :dust dhanav

All came to wish her and surroundings her, talking to te baby.Maan was frowning thinking he cant be close with her..if possible he had taken her to Delhi,but dadi insist to stay here one night as Geet was tired..Dadi & Anni was chuckling seeing Maan's condition..Geet too giggling ,Maan was glaring at her..They all had dinner and retired to their rooms..atlast Maan got some time with his Geet.He at once pounce on her and captured her lips making to wriggle.

Geet :Maan


Maan:shhh i have enough now no one can stop me & started to kiss

He hover on her without putting weight on her stomach..he was very gentle ..Geet can feel his tenderness in his touches..he was kissing and both tasting each other..after he left her lips and slide to her throat and suck it..Geet took a deep breath feelings his lips on her skin..

His hands founds it way to removing the strings on blouse and sliding along with her sari...his mouth was still sucking her lower lip..Geet was just moaning his name which made him to lose his control... He left her lips and slide to taste her neck.. his mouth was socking her skin, , she was twisting to give him more place.. his hands were roaming around her back to open te hook of her bra to get ride of it.. he found it , opened te hook and took it harshly.. wen Geet felt cold air hit her, she realize he have made her upper bare, she at once closed her front feeling shy ..

Maan pulled her hands :Geet still u felt shy in front of me after tis,tracing his palms on her tummy indicating their baby



Geet : Maan pls, it came like whisper

Maan was watching her face which was glowing face, his palm traced her cheeks.Geet opened her eyes and saw him who was looking at her with intense gaze

Geet moaned :Maan

Maan :hmmm

Geet : pls

He look at her curves which was prominent and her erect buds which inviting him..he bend and took her one curve inside his mouth and gave a suck...Geet pulled his face to her curves and ache her body to give him more access...he started to latched her curves,sucking, licking it..twisting her buds with his tongue making her to squirm..her nails digged in his shoulder..


He shift to other curve to give same attention..his continous suck made her skin red , but both damn care abt anything, they were carving to hold each other...his legs were pulling her skirt upward to feel her bare legs...his lips then slide to tummy.. licking her skin and kissing it..his hands were playing with her bare skin


He then raised and came to kiss her lips, which was already swollen due to continous sucking.. He saw Geet who looked tired..he made her lye properly and covered with duvet.Geet opened her eyes wen she missed his warmth and look at him who was staring at her

Geet : Maan

Maan :sleep Geet u r tired,tucking her hair strand behind her ear


Geet : i hate u, she hugs him, smack her chest with her fist for teasing her and arousing her and now stopping...he know wat she needs but he cant move on wen she is tired..so controlling himself he made her sleep..both slept hugging each other...

Te next day after bidding to all , they reached Km.


Geet was shocked and surprised to see whole km was decorated.. as Dadi and Anni came in another car, they reached before them.. Maan open te car for her, she placed her hand on his.. both enter onside and she was happy to see Ranbir too was there..

Dadi stopped them and took arti before entering inside..

Geet was overwhelmed seeing all tis, she felt like princess to get pamper by Maan, she look at him with gratitude, Maan node his head and hold her tightly..

Anni : now cum inside

Ranbir clear his throat to get Maaneet attention,


Geet saw him and smiled : bhai

Ranbir hugged her : im so happy for my choti

Geet : thanks bhai

Ranbir : im going to became maamu,

Geet nodes hmm

Then they all had their lunch and sitting.Maan didt leave her for a sec too , like if he left she will vanish.. Geet wants to talk with Ranbir, so she was waiting for a chances.. she now and then watching Ranbir, after some time she saw Ranbir going out to attend his call, she thought tis will be good chance to talk with him,


She excused herself pretending to go for washroom and followed Ranbir..Maan know wat she wants to do, so kept quiet..seeing Geet , he cut te call

Ranbir : Geetu

Geet : bhai I want to talk with u

Ranbir sense wat she wants to talk but he want to avoid : not now Geetu I have to go, im having meeting, see u later, pls dear

Geet frowned but she smiled : ok bhai

Ranbir signed and went bidding to everyone. Maan know she didt talk with him seeing her pouting lips.. They had little bit chat, Seeing Geet tired , Maan scooped her in his arms to their room.. she slept due to tired ..

Next day

Geet wake up and saw Maan getting ready

Geet : gudmorn Maan,

Maan : gm Geet,. get ready we have to go

Geet yawning : were

Maan : dr

Geet : why

Maan sat beside her : wat u mean why,, u should have complete checkup

Geet lean on his shoulder : Maan no need im fine


Maan tucked her hair strand and kissed her hair : no Geet I wont listen get ready or if u want I can make u to get ready

Geet screamed : nooo, she pushed him and rushed to washroom, Maan was chuckling to see her..

Both got ready and came down, all had BF

Dadi : Maan u want me to cum

Maan : no dadi I will take care of her

Dadi : hmm

They left to hospital



PRECAP : MAAN KI NAUGHTINESS..

NEXT PART:50 , PG 54


Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes yes me first
i was missing it sooo much nd now finally my wait got over after full 49 days

haayee love the update
first part was emotional
love the way all celebrated maan's birthday
all 3 ladies were shocked when maan kissed chotu maan😆
the way maan broke down in front of guru but dadi aanie nd geet console him was fab
maan ke birthday par maan aur geet dono ko surprise mil gaya
maan fulfilled guru's dream by constructing school college nd hospital at one place only nd seeing that annie nd geet got emotional
OMG geet is pregnant maan is so happy
love the way maan asked how nd geet answered wat means. u didnt leave me for a sec too and now asking how it was awesome
maan is going to pamper their child beyond limits
haayee maaneet moments love them sooo much but maan stopped himself seeing geet tired nd geet complained about that but for maan geet's health is more important
wow maan decorated whole mansion to welcome geet nd geet was over whelmed getting so much love nd pampering from maan
geet wanted to talk to ranbir regarding annie but ranbir understood her nd left without talking to her
oo maaneet's meeting with dr for geet's complete check up
precap

hayeee me waiting for naughty maan

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update next part soon
zyada wait mat kar wana
Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update...
Maan is depicted as very soft in this part...
Such a lovely tym..
Beautiful gift for the soul...
Geet was overvelmed..
Geet is pregnant..
Maan is shocked...
He he he buddhu singh khurana not bad...
Precap is interesting..
Cont soon..
Waiting..
Edited by sri91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Welcome back
His birthday sure was fun
And best gift from geet
She is pregnant
Awww he didn't get it did he
And she wasnt too happy about that
Awww another khrurana coming
Think of it as guru. Coming back
They all were .missing him
But don't you dare say that you aren't good grandson brother or hubby
When you Are dude
So emotional with guru not being there
Well his dream maan fulfilled
Bless he panicked seeing her faint
But nothing. To worry about
Its good news in fact
Yes it was naa
Hmmm he escapsd ranbir
but for how long
Well mama now
And if all goes well will be. Baby phupha
If he marries Annie of course
Which he will
So her first appointment
And naughty maan
Look forward to that
This shud be fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsemmm update geet pregnant alll happy maan going crazy
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally ud mil gaya 🥳🥳
all celebrating maan bd
all in goa 😛😛
awee maan become so emotional 😭😭
dadi ani geet shocked to see maan like this 🤓🤔
all missing guru

maan ne guru ka sapna pura kar diya
geet n ani so happy 😃😃
ops geet fainted 😲😲
maan pareshan 😕😕

lol maan bhi na kitna bhuddu hay 😆😆
baby kaise lolzz🤣🤣🤣
maan is today out of the world
hehe maan missing geet 😳😳

maan ka naughtiness shuru ☺️☢️☺️
all pampering geet like a princess geet loving ittt 😉😉
geet want to talk with ranbir but ranbir chala gaya 😕😕
chalo possessives papa maan
geet get ready 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wow wow wow wt a big n super duper update di jus luvd evrythn frm maan ki bdy to geet ki pregnancy maan provd himself as a gud bro tody wow wt a spl gft fr him on his bdy he s so emotionl n she s so emotinl n am so so so emotinl he s caring vryyy much fr baby jusss awesom update didi
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally you have updated this one after making us wait for ages😡😛 but it was an amazing update...very emotional and a very happy one 😃wow geet is pregnant 😃😛 now maan will surely get insanely possessive 😉😆for geet...bechari kya karegi ab ek dust danav kam tha jo ek aur aa raha hai😆ya kya pata do aa rahe hon😉😆please twins hone chahiye😃eagerly waiting for more..don't make us wait for long this time 😡😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i love it❤️
it very SWEET😉
cuteee😳
adorable😃
lovable😊 n delightful update
schiii
waiting for more
plz cont soon😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly thanks 4updating:-) n such a lovly rocking part..new begining in maneet life n ol r happy n maan he feel out of world :-) maan talk with guru pic scene realy touchy n nice.he fulfil guru dream:-)

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