YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread4* UPDATE 04/14/14 pg. 12!

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Fourth Thread!!!! OMG ❤️ Who knew this story would reach this far one day. Been writing it for over a year now and still love this story the most! Anyways here's a treat from me today for all KD fans ❤️ And also to Millee... giving you credit for idk what 🤣 Maybe because you irritate me the most 😃 Enjoy everyone!
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  • I try to update all my stories as frequently as possible, so understand if sometimes I am on a tight schedule. Also from now onwards if I do not get the required number of likes and comments I will not continue on like I've always done before... Even now I am creating this new thread without the 70 likes I requested for.
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HEARTBEAT(1) = 71109836
HEARTBEAT(2) *thread 1* = 72719922
HEARTBEAT(2) *thread 2* = 78740284
HEARTBEAT (2) *THREAD 3* = 85032582


Index

chapter 53= page 1
chapter 54 = page 12
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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chapter 53



Viren kept patting Jeevika's back till she slowly stopped crying and her eyes started shutting. Jeevika was slowly falling asleep giving some relief to Viren. He placed a thin blanket over her and took Zaaine to the kitchen.


z - "What happened to mommy?"

v - "She was having some stomach pain. She will be better when she wakes up don't worry"

z - "I'm hungry"

v - "The pizza should be here soon. Why don't you go wash your hands till the meantime"

z - "Okay" he said walking upstairs to his room.


Viren went to check on Jeevika again making sure she was okay. He sat on the couch near her stroking her hair while she continued sleeping. He saw someone standing near the front door through the glass windows so he went to open the door before the doorbell rung and Jeevika woke up. It was the pizza guy who Viren payed and took the boxes inside. He saw Zaaine coming down the stairs so took out his plate and put a slice of pizza for him.


z - "You and mommy no eat the pizza?"

v - "We will eat later. Why don't you sit on the table and eat.

z - "Okay. Me watch cars on my ipad?"

v - "Okay fine, but keep the volume low okay?'

z - "Okay" he said happily


While Zaaine was busy with his movie and lunch, Viren was waiting for Jeevika to get up. He sat near her just looking at her. He saw her holding her stomach and squeezing her eyes more. He got up quickly hoping she wasn't feeling pain again.


v - "Jeevika you okay?"

j - "Yeah"

v - What happened? Are you still having pain?"

j - "No she's kicking very hard"

v - "Maybe its because she's very hungry. Let me make you a sandwich" he said walking away

j - "No"

v - "Why not" he said looking at her

j - "I want pizza" she said smiling a bit

v - "It will be too heavy. Eat something healthier"

j - "Please, your daughter wants it not me"

v - "My daughter can have it when she's here in between us. You have been having everything your way so no you can't have pizza"

j - "Fine" she said closing her eyes and not wanting to debate with Viren.


Viren went to the kitchen and got out whatever he could find from the fridge to make Jeevika something to eat. He went back to the couch and helped her sit up then sat right next to her.


j - "Did you eat?"

v - "I will after you"

j - "You can share with me"

v - "No you eat all of that. What were you doing all day that you didn't even have time to eat?"

j - "I was just packing my hospital bag and checking on stuff in the nursery"

v - "But you can't just not eat"

j - "Viren the pain wasn't because of food. They were like contractions. After that pain I started remembering how painful going into labor is"

v - "You know if you stay stress free and go into labor with a more positive and relaxed mind I'm pretty sure it won't be that painful"

j - "I'm sorry I got you so stressed"

v - "Thats okay" he said kissing her forehead

j - "Where is Zaaine?"

v - "Eating pizza and watching his favorite movie"

j - "And where are Virat and Manvi?"

v - "They will be here soon. Why don't you go lay down upstairs for a little while?"

j - "No I'm okay. I will if I feel tired, promise"

v - "Okay, I'll go check on Zaaine" he said getting up.


As Viren got up, Jeevika followed him to the kitchen. They both smiled seeing Zaaine enjoying himself with his movie and lunch. When he saw his parents he moved his stuff aside.


z - "Mommy where is my gift?"

v - "Its on the way here"

z - "What is my gift?" he asked curiously

v - "You will see yourself very soon"

z - "But how my gift is coming here?"

j - "Zaaine stop asking so many questions. When it comes you will see okay?"

z - "Okay"


The three of them went and sat on the couch together watching tv. Zaaine sat right in the middle of his parents, but all he kept looking at was the door hoping his gift would be here soon. Finally when there was a doorbell he shot up and ran to the door with his parents walking behind him. Viren opened the door and there stood Virat and Manvi.


z - "Wheres my gift?" he bursted out


While everyone started laughing, Zaaine was trying so hard to find his present.


vt - "I'll go get it from the car" he said walking away.


Virat went to his car and took out this small covered cage. Zaaine kept looking at it confused at what could be inside. They all went inside and near the backyard. Virat then put the cage down and opened it. He took out the small adorable puppy who fit just on Virat's hand. Zaaine's eyes blew up not believing his eyes.


z - "This puppy is mine?" he question excitedly

j - "He's all yours, you like your gift?"

z - "I love it, thank you mommy" he said hugging her.


Zaaine then went near Virat who very carefully placed the puppy in Zaaine's lap. Zaaine carefully patted the little puppy on his lap.


z - "He's so tiny. Why is he so tiny daa"

v - "He's only a few months old Zaaine so you have to be very careful okay?"

z - "Okay, mommy whats his name?"

j - "What do you want to name him?"

z - "You and daa name him"

v - "Well he's all yours so you should decide Zaaine. Take your time you can decide later. You want to go take him for a walk?"

z - "Yes. Can I show him my room?"

v - "No he can't go upstairs"

z - "He no sleep in my room with me at night?"

v - "No he will sleep on his bed in the garage"

z - "No with me"

j - "Okay we can decide that later, here hand me the puppy and you go put your shoes on so we can take him for a walk"

Zaaine excitedly gave the puppy carefully to Jeevika and ran to go get his shoes.

manvi - "This is the best present you could have gotten for him"

v - "Now all the responsibility will come to me, just wait and watch"

j - "Well this was the deal we made in New York" she said smirking to her husband.


Happy Birthday Krystle D'Souza ❤️ Here's a treat for all her fans and Kryan/Virika fans too 😃
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res !!!
#unres
omg .. omg... omg...😲
4th thred... someone pinch me.. gosh... keeni u know i was more excited thn u ... cant believe finally u posted this part nd made this thread !!
thank u twinnie fr doing this !!!🤣
nd thxx fr giving me the not so known credit ... I M FLATTERED !!! 😆😆
i know i bug u so much fr updating nd u like being a good dirl always listen to me !!! 😳


now coming to update...
wht should i write ...
its nt becoz i dont have words.. its just bcz i have too much which is impossible to write...
u must admitt now tht u r the best whn it comes to write abt virika !!!
but i know u r such a idiot tht u will nt admit this ,,,
so let me make it clear to u tht U R THE BESTEST !!! ND I M SAYING THIS SELF CENTERED ❤️

this update is phenominal like all others😛... u have just captured the real esscence of virika,... which we miss the whole while !!!
the way u write is so real.. tht while reading i can imagine each nd everything happening in front of me...👏
this is just a perfect blend of love care emotions dreams nd much more...
I JUST LOVE HEARTBEAT ALOT ⭐️... nd zannie the most ... nd tell everyone he is my nephew ... nd remember i m his GODMOTHER 😳😃
now dont be a lazy pants ... nd update the next part soon !!! 🥱

Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrtz for ur 4th thread
res!!
*unres
wow
awsm update
loeved it
fantastic
superb
amazing
aww zaanie is sooo cute
bless
he got a puppy for his bd
yayy
how cute
just fab
cont sooon thnx
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I just started an FF and it would mean so much if you would read it <3
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3936235

please do it would mean a lot and share it around x
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update

It was absolutely lovely

Aww why is Zaaine so cute

Absolutely love and adore that kid

Love virika as well

Poor Jeevika

Hope she'll be alright

Can't wait for the baby hope he/she is another cutie like Zaaine

Thanks for the pm

Please continue soon

Also please continue BIL soon as well love that
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That was SERIOUSLY REALLLYYY CUTE AND ADORABLE... I READ IT FULL OPEN MOUTH BIGGG SMILE :-D :-D
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Aw! I didn't realize that the baby would come so soon! It's so exciting! The puppy part was adorable! And Viren, loved his protectiveness! Thanks for the PM, and congrats on the new thread!!

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