YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread4* UPDATE 04/14/14 pg. 12!

TeriMaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kays94

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<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc6600">Fourth Thread!!!! OMG ❤️ Who knew this story would reach this far one day. I did ..!! 😆

Been writing it for over a year now and still love this story the most! Anyways here's a treat from me today for all KD fans ❤️ And also to Millee... giving you credit for idk what 🤣 Maybe because you irritate me the most 😃 Enjoy everyone!</font>
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TeriMaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I m bored ..
another update pls

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Hajra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

okay you owe me another update

I'll tell you the reason on bbm.

The update was so effing cute

Especially my baby zaine

God why is he so cute.

I'm falling in love with him all over again.

And the gift was so cute.

You know sometimes a actually think how such great ideas come in your tiny winy brain.

Poor Jeevika have contractions already.

Amazing update.

Can't wait for the next one which you're gonna send me pretty soon

And I want BIL aswell as you have to pay for embarrassing me

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Hajra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

lol I forgot

Congratulations

4th thread wow

Mommy is so proud of you

P.S I love the new banner

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sushmakryan

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Posted: 11 years ago

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after so long you updated the story i think it is more than a month

it is our sunday treat ya

awesome update ya

poor jeevika suffering a lot pain

and viren relaxed her and she made her sleep so she can get rest

and our little boy zannie got tensed seeing her mother condition and viren seeing his wife

contniously

what happend to her beautiful lady

after so much our

jeevika got up and she telling like a child

she want to eat pizza

and viren telling dont eat

and jeevika his daughter want to pizza

and viren told when her daughter will come between them

that time she will eat it

and jeevika like omg what can i do with this husband

when our little zannie see his parents

he remeber about his gift

and he is waiting for his gift

finally he got his gift a cute little dog

and he want that dog to play with him

and sleep with him

but viren is hittler he

didnt leave the cute zaanie what he want to do

and viren telling that all work will come on him

total

amazing

superb

fantastic

mind blowing

continue soon

thanks for the pm

conrgts for new thread

Edited by arshiasushma - 11 years ago

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aayushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wooohooo forth thread amazing u deserve it🥳

congratulations👏⭐️⭐️

ur PMs gives a smile on my face😃

it was splendid update 👏

just loved it😳

amazing

i love zaanie 🤗

my cute boy gets his puppy😊

awwwie so cute❤️

always love virika's bonding 😳

the way they help eachother😳😉

u describe it superb😊

well done👏

a salute to u⭐️

continue soon

and plz dont make us wait too much

continue soon 😉

i am waiting 😊😉

waiting waiting and waiting!!!!😆

take care 🤗

love u!!!❤️

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Riddhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Thread Four!!!!!! 👏 🥳 Whhhooohhhooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😛

This Is An Outstanding Update!! 👏 😛
You're Always The Best, Ofcourse Besides Keeping Us Wait For The Updates!!! 😡 😆

This Is Sooo Goood!!! 😃
Zaaine Got His Little Puppy As His Birthday Gift...Yaaayyy!!! 😃
And Everything Was So Perfect In The Update! Totally Awesome!!! 😳 😃

🤢 Commenting Realll Short!!

Take Care!!! 😛

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shweta_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Fourth thread of HEARTBEAT(2) -------> Wowww...!!!!

Congratulations :)

I just love how the story has moved on from chapter 1 of Heartbeat1 to the latest chapter of Heartbeat2... Everything has jus been described so well n d way the story has moved forward is superb.. one never feels like stopping to read ur stories...continue ur good work..

Thats a good one... lil zaaine is so excited with his bday gift...awww he doesnt want to leave the puppy in garage..hope viren agrees to let him keep d puppy in his room.. Viren's concern n care for Jeevika is so heartfelt...

Thanks for the PM.. Update soon.. :)

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shweta_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Fourth thread of HEARTBEAT(2) -------> Wowww...!!!!

Congratulations :)

I just love how the story has moved on from chapter 1 of Heartbeat1 to the latest chapter of Heartbeat2... Everything has jus been described so well n d way the story has moved forward is superb.. one never feels like stopping to read ur stories...continue ur good work..

Thats a good one... lil zaaine is so excited with his bday gift...awww he doesnt want to leave the puppy in garage..hope viren agrees to let him keep d puppy in his room.. Viren's concern n care for Jeevika is so heartfelt...

Thanks for the PM.. Update soon.. :)

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Edited by shweta_14 - 11 years ago

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