ariya: MUKAMBAL MOHOBAT KI ADHURI DASTAN

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HELLO MY DEARIES..

u will guessing ke yeh kaunsa naya os, ss, ya ff hai bt for the first time its none of them.
everyone knws how crazily i love ariya jst like u do..so meine ek chota sa poetic presentation create kiya hia for ariya...

this is a whole journey of ariya. some feelings some moments are just added as per my thoughts

its emotional bt our ariya are in our hearts for ever so no crying n remembering them..

pics credit goes to OUR VERY OWN FORUM'S PIC GALLERY N GOOGLE

WARNING...
MY RHYMING IS REALLY BAD I JST TRIED TO MAKE IT READABLE



Aao sunai pyar ki ek kahani

Ek ladka gussee wala

Ek ladki thi deewani..



Uss ladke ne khoya tha apna sab kuch

khoke apna pyar..


jisse hogaya tha wooh iss duniya se bedarkar.

Par ek din wooh laut ke aya lene apna badla..


Jahan hua iss pari se amna -samna



Par kahani kahan hone wale thi itni asan,

pehle hu mulakat mein takraye the ek duree se

par uss malakat mein aa gai the wooh bohot kareb anjane mein..



Yeh toh sirf shuruat thi yeh nafrat aur badhne wale the

Par pyar usne toh apne 2 humsafar chun liye the usse pal..


Wooh ek sang jude ek rang hone ke liye.

Par nafrat ne bhi himmat na hare the tabhi baar-baar hoti unki wooh takarrari the

Wooh ladte, jagate,chidte , nazre ferte

par har uss pal ek dusree ke aur bhi kareb aa jate.


Wooh ladka tha bilkul aam

aur wooh ek nazuk se pari..


Ek chai ke glass mein muh bagade aur coffee mug ke rim ko tak saaf kare

Ese prem kahani toh sadiya mein ek hi hogi.


Wooh samjha ke shaukin tha

aur ankhode ke dewani.

Par ek din ess nafrat mein pyar ne apni dastak uss pari ke dil ko

Ek ajeeb se khamoshi toh unke darmiyan par wooh unke dil ki baat bohot saaf saaf bolti the.

Wooh saath toh nahi the par judne lage the ajeeb se ehsaas mein badhne lage.

Ek dusree mein kuch dhoondne lage the shayad par wooh khoj abhi toh sirf shuru hue

Halat, waqt , hadse, unhe ek dusree se paas aur dur late rahe .

Par phir kuch hua jab pari musibat mein pade toh usse hi ana hi pada.

apni pari ko bachane..

Ek pal wooh rishta kuch aur hi hogaya jaise uss pal mein wooh dil jud gai..

Safar abhi bhi lamba hi tha par rasthe ab judne lage the.





Pyar ke nahi toh dard ke humsafar banne lage the

wooh usse dekh muskarane laga tha

aur wooh uski ankahi batein janne lagi thi/


zindagi ne abhi sans lena phir se shuru kar diya..

unhe ek saath jodna shuru kar diya..

wooh anjane ehsaas mein bandhte ja rahe the.

ek dusree se dur jate jate paass aa rahe the


Par kuch prem kahaniyan iss dharti par puri nahi hoti

Isliye usse asma mein likha jata hia.

Ek din hua kuch esa joh le gaya uss pari apne saath

Aur wooh ladka reh gaya usse yaad ko samete apne dil ke pass.

kyunki usse yakin tha kabhi toh milega wooh usse ek baar

usse bas us pal ka intezar tha

shayad kuch prem kahaniyan puri hone ke liye nahi bani hoti

par phir bhi wooh adhuri rehkar bhi kabhi adhuri nahi hoti


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Don't have words to describe it. Wonderfully written. Every emotion touched. And visual effects was cherry on cake. It was like reading a wonderful poem.
Thank you for writing this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Don't have words to describe it. Wonderfully written. Every emotion touched. And visual effects was cherry on cake. It was like reading a wonderful poem.
Thank you for writing this.


thanks for appreciation and support dear..means a lott
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dont have words to describe it.
In one word,

''Poetry in Motion...''

Beautifully written... I really loved it a lot...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m proud of U Pinks...


Its really lovely & heart touching...


if possible plz Tweet this to Sha... he really love it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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m spechless dear.. Beautifully written.. Loved the way u described their feelings.. Brilliant.. Awesome.. Superb dear.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
pinku Awesome dear wonderful
Loved it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww that's beautiful Pinku...😃
Loved it a lot dr...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WONDERFUL...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SPEECHLESS
really nice,brilliant, so emotional😭, purane batte iyad agaye
thanx Pink 4 lovely ARIYA moment

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