Ashlok OS:~**The Fire Burning Within..**~,Part-5(FINALE),page-25... - Page 9

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower

Wow! I don't have any words to say more. How do you manage to do it everytime...and are you sure this is an OS or are you planning to write it as an FF? This seems to be good enough at least for an SS! 😊 And the romance queen is back! 👏 Waiting for the next update

Thank u so much!😳But sriously I dnt deserve dt title..Nd extending it..😲🤔🤓😕Plz dnt tempt me..😆I'll think up if I can..I need to come up wid a strong enough subject fr dt u kno..😳Ofcrs u do..I stii hv to read ur udates..
See i cn nvr resist writing..😃

Originally posted by: Anusha16

okay... Ill go back... wipe my nosebleed and come read it fully...

still incomplete...

Nosebleed..😲M sorry Anusha love bt m missn sth here..😕😳

[NOTE:Thank u friends!🤗Dis update is a bit short but I promise I'll make the next one longer!😉Till dn read on.And do lemme know ur views!😛]

Part-2,page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101810670

Part-3.

Astha's scream was muffled by the hand on her mouth,as she kept on struggling..

She had no idea where she was being taken to..She just saw darkness all around her..And suddenly before she knew it,she found herself set free..

She stumbled to stand straight on her feet,and looked around into the darkened surrounding trying to see where she was..

The entire place was surrounded in complete darkness..And an eerie silence all around..The only sound she could hear was her own harsh breathing and her heart thudding fast..

She was really scared as she squinted into the darkness to catch a glimpse of her captor..

She could not see anyone..Nor could she feel anyone in that darkened enclosed space she seem to be in..

And then suddenly when she was at the brink of her hysteria,suddenly a light came on..

It was a candlelight..

And in that light she finally saw her captor's face..

A soft gasp escaped her lips as he closer..

And closer..

She stepped back in fear..The face infront of her was chilling her blood to ice in fear..

It was a familiar face,but yet..

Shlok took another sip from his sixth glass of wine or was it seventh or eighth..He was not sure anymore..

His eyesight felt hazy,when he suddenly realized the world had darkened around him..

"Astha..!I will teach you a lesson of a lifetime!"He slurred out angrily..

He hated her to be in other's arms..He hated her to be happy with someone else.He hated her period..

But yet why did he miss her now..?Why did the world look so gloomy and dark without her now..?!He mused and smiled sheepishly at his silly thoughts..

By now he was sure he was too drunk to think properly even..

Suddenly he saw her infront of him,beckoning him..

He chuckled to himself..

The whole place lightened again,as lights came on..

Shlok chuckled again..It was as if the appearance of Astha had lighted up his world..

Shlok looked up and saw her still standing there and calling him..

He frowned this time..Was she really calling him?!She was there?!

He stood up finally and saw her giving a soft relaxed smile..And then it seemed she again beckoned him to follow her..And Shlok as if in a trance did just that..

Astha was getting more scared now..

It was the guy who she had danced with,and who had prevented fall down the stairs..And she did not like his expression one bit..

"What..What do you want..?!"She stammered out in fear,as she kept walking back..

"The same thing that you want from me.."He replied softly..

His calm cold voice was giving Astha the creeps..

Just when she thought he would pounce on her,he moved away..

Astha did not get a time to relax as suddenly she watched him lighting up more candles..

Taking in a breath trying to calm herself she looked around..She had to look for a way out,and fast..

Shlok tried to walk fast to catch up with her,but she was walking too fast for his drunken self..His vision was almost blurred and he could barely see her..

And then when he had followed her out into the garden,he suddenly felt dizzy and..He sat down on the soft dewy grass,and felt his head spin..

He could see her blurring away and fading from his view..

"Astha.."He mumbled as his eyes closed completely,and he fell unconscious on the dewy grassy floor of the garden..

Astha looked around the room she was trapped in,as her captor lit more candles..

It was then that something odd struck her..

The entire room was surrounded by walls..

And there was not a single door or window in the entire room..

Fear clogged at her throat,and she almost cried out hysterically,closing her mouth with her hands to choke out the whimper that rose from her throat..

With terrified wide eyes she took in her surrounding once again,and again,and again,and again,and again..

And then she moved her wide scared eyes to her dangerously calm and cool captor,who was busy doing something in the centre of the strange dark room,with no doors or windows..

Astha gulped down a knot of intense fear,at his sight..A fear she had never felt in her entire life..

Her eyes now glazed with unshed tears,and her heart was almost bursting in terror..

She was not sure how she would get out of this room..The room that had no way out..

Part-4,page-18:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101958068

feel so scaerd for astha hope shlok cums on time to save her

can u plz update instantly for my weak heart...😭

Hope shlok will save her on time.

Filled with lot of suspense! Please do update ASAP or else we would have a heart attack...

Y do u always do this to me?leavin the story at such a crucial point i am goin to die from suspense...

She has to save herself...i hope she soes and Shlok is a big fool...why did u have to leave us hanging...

hope shlok cums on time to save her