MG SS (Contest): Entry No. 5: Woh Ek Din Part 1 Pg 1

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Hi Hello Namaste, Welcome to Brand New MG SS Contest. Thanks a lot for the writers who are taking part in this competition and All the Best 😃 And readers Khush ho jao yaar you are getting more and more stories to read.. And readers every sunday you will be getting an update and once every SS end. You will be given a week or 10 days time so that everyone read all the updates and then the voting process starts. And who get the Maximum Likes Will be The Winner 👏👏

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Bring It On

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I Am Tired

My Love My Angel


Woh Ek Din

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Concept

One day change the two lives forever, one night take close two unknown people so close to each other...

Now, how both take U-Turn and take vows with other person...

Part 1

She sits in front of mirror, her friends teasing her talks about her would be husband, but she lost in own thoughts...

Her heart taking back few days ago, where she meets with him...she coming back home after her trip...

Geet : friends, I never forget this moments which spend with you all ...

Friends: we too

Geet : acha tum sb aa rhe ho na Meri shaadi mein

One said: - why you marring so earlier

He is unknown for you

You never meet with him

Geet : relax nisha

Arranged marriage mein asa hi hota hai

Nisha :- yaar phir bhi At least tujhe usse phle milna toh chaiye tha Dekhne mein kaisa hai About his behavior, his hobbies...Etc...

Geet : tu chill kr Dekhne mein acha hi honga Tum sb aa rhe ho na

Tamanna : of course yaar

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Geet timely reached airport of Mumbai and caught the flight for delhi... Then she takes bus for hoshiyapur...

From here one day journey start ...

Bus stop after two hour near to dabba...

Conductor: bus yaha half an hour rukengi

Uske baad direct hoshiayapur

(I have no idea about time distance...its only imaginary)

*****

She felt someone stalking her, she turn and found no one...actually geet going washroom, which is behind the dabba...

She reached near door, before she open the door, someone pulled her by wrist and placed the hand on her mouth & take her in side of dark jungle...

She not understand, it's all happen so fast...he pushed her on mud, then someone try to kiss her forcibly, and other one held her legs tightly...she feared so much, she wriggle under beneath of him ...she panicky try to shouted loudly" help", but before this ...He tied her duppata on her mouth... she slap him hardly, he angered so much, he raise the hand slapping her, she closed both eyes, she loose all hope in this minute, she not getting what she do... before his hand touch her, she throw mud in his eyes, another one try to caught her , she bite on his hand and runs from here...

She running past few minutes but not get right path reached to dabba... She collided with someone; she feared she caught by goons again, now... how she escaped from this situation... her take step back, her foot hit with stone, before she fall on ground, he pulled her by waist and save her from falling, but she start hitting him...

Geet : leave me

He pushed her forcibly and she fall on ground...her fear surrounded again...but He turn to leave, then she realize if he is goon, he never turn to leave , so its means he is not goon...

Before he goes and she stuck in this jungle, she softly said "sorry"

She tries to stand, but she felt pain in foot...

Geet : aahh

He turn and bend to her level and try to see her foot, but due to darkness both felt only presence but not able to see each other...

She again tries to stand ...but he stops her and shouted on her "you are mad"...

Geet : aap asa kyun kh rhe hai

He : tumhare parr mein jb chot aayi hai toh khdi hone ki kya jaroorat hai

Geet : bina khade huye koi kaise chl sakta hai

He scoops her into arms and she start hitting him...

Geet : leave me

He : chup

His angered voice makes stop saying further words...

He : ab ek sbd aur kaha toh chod dunga yhi pe Fir yhi rhehna

Geet : tum mujhe kaha leke jaa rhe ho Mujhe ghar jaana hai

He :- wo toh tumhe yaha is waqt jungle mein aane se phle sochna chaiye tha

Geet : mein nhi aayi

He : fir tum yaha kya kr rhi ho

She not understanding, she tells the truth or not... she suffers horrible instances little time ago...

He : bolne ka kast karengi aap

Geet : wo mein

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Wo mein

He : bakri ho

Geet : nhi baat krni mujhe tumse

He : as you wish

Bina kuch bataye tum ghar kaise puchongi

She said after few minutes...

Geet : yaha pass mein koi dabba tha Jaha humari bus ruki thi

He : kaunsi bus

Geet : hoshiyarpur jaane wali

He : hmm

Geet : mujhe hoshiyarpur jaana hai

He : hmm

Geet : hmmm Ke alawa kuch bolo na

He : tumhe dabbe tk chodne jaa rha ho

**************

He : bus hum puchne wale hai

She sees in his direction and then to him... First time she noticing his looks, his well built abs, broad chest which showing clearly due to opened his first three button of shirt, but his eyes hided...light not reaches properly to his face...she want to sees his face properly...

He sees her and sees innocence on her face, her eyes like Deep Ocean, he want to lost in this deepness & waves of dusk unfurled in her hair... in other words her hair made effect like sunset...

Aagosh mein khone ko ji chahata hai

Usse aur karib se chune ko ji chahata hai

Her sweet voice broke his thought...

Geet : aapka naam kya hai

Before he says something, one person came: - aap dono yaha is waqt kya kr rhe hai

He : woh hum rasta bhool gye the

Aap humari help kr sakte hai

Person: khiye

Both enquire about the bus, and get to know bus leaves half an hour ago...and next bus came after 3 hours...

Geet : mera sara samaan bus mein chla gya

He : relax Inke par mein chot lagi hai Koi medicine mil jaayengi

Person : aap jb tak waha jaake baithye Mein dekhta hu

**********

He makes sit carefully on cot... and she is busy drools him openly...

Geet : perfect

He : perfect ...for what

Geet : wo ... Kuch nhi

He : tum yaha baitho

Geet : tum kaha jaa rhe ho

He : garam pani lene

He understand she not getting ...he said "tumahre liye"

He : garam pani se parr ka shek krne se tumhe aaram milenga

***********

She met with him few times back, but her feeling she known him many years ago...

Abhi toh mile the hum

Par na jaane kyun mahsoos ho raha tha asa

Hum jaante hai ...

Pechante hai

Ek dusre ko

Na jaane kbse

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Posted: 11 years ago
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GEET LOVED SOMEONE ELSE BUT IS GETTING MARRIED TO ANOTHER MAN
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start
Maaneet convo interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb,,,

thanx for pm..waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved da start so much..loved Geet's Innocent..n jungle scene

eagerly waiting for Next update

Continue super soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG di loving all these stories aur hoping ke hamare maaneet are getting married to each other😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
so maan saved geet
but who is behind of geet
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm...lovely update! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res 5

congrats...
will read and post my comment...
Edited by spvd - 11 years ago

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