MG SS (Contest): Entry No. 4: My Love My Angel Part 1 Pg 1

Dua karte hain rabse hum yuhi saath rahe

Pyaar ke iss rishtey ko puri imandaari se nibhaye

Maana zindagi ke raho mein kuch kante bhi milenge

Par aap agar saath honge to kanto per bhi phool samjakar chalte rahenge

PART 1

Maan comes back from office and see's his wife is standing near the window and talking to someone when he comes and hug her from back

Geet : maan aa gaye aap aaj late ho gaya aapko

Maan : haan geet bas aaj se sara time tumhara 2 months tak aab mai office nahi jane wala hoon jab tak humara nanha mehmaan nahi aa jata

Maan kneels down and kiss geet's belly and geet shy a liitle

Yes geet is 7 months pregnant

Maan : geet tum aab tak nahi baadly aaj bhi waise hi sharmati ho jaise maine tumhe dusri baar dekha tha

Geet : dusri baar maan aaj tak aapne mujhe nahi bola ki aapne mujhe phale kahan dekha tha

Maan : aao yahan bed pe baitho aaj mai tumhe bolta hoon ki maine tumhe phalli baar kahan dekha tha aur humare iss nanhe se mehmaan ko bhi humari kahaani sunte hai

FLASHBACK START

~Flashback~

Today Was the divine day and so people gathered in temple to celebrate it with Krishna-Radha.

Many Devotees Were there Singing N cherishing the Pureness Of it. Maan N his Family Too Came There but maan Was not really keen To hear it. He Was Just About To Move From That Place.

But He Was Stood Mesmerized When He heard a Sweet Melodious Voice. But he Couldn't Find Who the Young Lady was.

There Was Young Girl Sitting With many other people N singing Bhajan as she was Solely Fan of te god u say. She started To sing Her Fav bhajan Which She always Sings During Dis Divine day.

You may say people Specialliy Come To hear dis song

Geet starts Singing With her supporters

Radhe krishna ki jyoti alaukik tino

lok mein chhaaye rahi hai

bhakti vivash ek prem pujaarin

phir bhi deep jalaaye rahi hai

She started To sing these Lines With So much divinity as pureness That everyone felt So connected Towards the God.

Geet Bhagwaan Ki moorthi ke paas jaati hai aur diya jalati hai.

When She turns Maan Have a Look Of her face Which He was Trying To figure it out through the voice.

when Maan Saw Geet's Face His heart skipped a beat. He actually didn't knew what had happened. He Just took His mob And Flashed A pic of hers Without anyone noticing.

Geet had made an impact on maan with her Dance n voice. God Has made Her with Care and time. This is what Maan thought at first seeing her.

Geet Now started To dance On her Own Tunes To show the Love n Pureness she has for Krishna-Radha.

snaan karaaye wo vastra odhaaye vo

bhog lagaaye wo laagat pyaaro

She danced So Purely That everyone Was amazed. First she had such a melodious voice n now she is gracefully Dancing.

Who Knew that for Wom geet Is Dancing Are Preparing Her fate With a Person wHo is watching her without blinking the Eyes.

She ended the song with joinin her hands to near her God. She took their

Blessings. Geet Went over Back to her Place.

But on the other Side Maan Was just mesmerized with the Reality.

He for the First Time came To temple And Was Blessed On the very first time With Just An angel Infront of him Dancing n singing gracefully n melodiously.

He thanked his family To bring him here or else he would have Miss The chance to see this. To see an special person. Meanwhile Some one Called Geet n She left.

Maan before leaving with his family Wanted To see her Once But Couldn't see her.

He took her memories with him n thought to confront her once. But he couldn't forget how lovingly she laughes with all. How she carried her saree n danced. And specially her voice which made him fan of her.

maan quickly noted her car number and called his friend to get all information about her
after everyone reached km there had lunch but maan was in his own world
dad : maan woh roti pass karna
lekin maan babu kahan sune wale the woh toh bas geet ke khalao mao gum the
his dad ingored he thought may be maan is thinking abt business deal maan just stood up and was going towards his room when he heard his mom voice
mom : maan kahan jaa rahe ho
maan : mera dinner ho gaya before anyone can ask him more question he left from there
dadi: arre iss ne toh kuch khaya hi nahi

seeing towards his plate now
mr khurana has few doubts coz maan has never behaved this way even if its abt business he made a mental note to talk abt it to maan
here in maan room maan got to knw everything abt geet and smile on his victory
Here is HM (HANDA MANSION )

rano : suniye ji
mohindar : haan bolo while sipping tea
rano : mai bol rahi thi ki aab geet ki umar ho gayi hai shaadi ke liye uske liye ladka dhunda shuru karte hai na
mohindar : rano ji aabhi usko umar hi kya hai who toh choti hi hai aabhi aur uski shaadi itni jaldi
rano : aapko toh who choti hi lagegi na lekin aap bhul rahe hai ki aab uski umar 20 saal hai aur humko aabhi se hi rishta dhunda shuru kar dena chahiye phir kahin jake hum ko aacha ladka milega
mohindar : lekin
rano : lekin mai kuch nahi janti mai iss mamle mai kisi ki bhi baat nahi sune wali hoon bas
And she goes from there

In geet room

Geet : mai kuch nahi janti aapko mere liye yeh sab karna hi hoga and she cuts the call

The whole handa mansion was echo with only one word PRINCESS

And there she comes running
geet : lo aa gayi

And she hugs all the three persons who life is in geet

Veer : princess kya kar rahi thi itni dair kyun laga di tune niche aane mai

Raj : haan princess kahan pe thi

Geet : woh veerji mai room saaf kar rahi thi

Rahul : vinod ajay sabke sab yahan aao aabhi hall mai

And there was the line of all the servants in hall

Geet : veerji inn sab ki koi galti nahi hai who toh bas mai yunhi

Rahul : maine tujhe se baat karne k liye bola nahi na chup raha kar bas

lovely part
so maaneet are married and expecting their child
maan first saw geet in temple

nice

wow... superb start,,,

awesome starting...

loved it very much...

Lovely update

superb,,thnx for pm..waiting for update

Wowww so Maaeet r married n Geet s 7th month pregnet

Past scene was Superb MAan saw Geet in Temple

looking forword continue soon