ASYA Drabble: Our Night of Love

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi

The insomniac who never seems to tire is back!

A quick mini Drabble on what Asad and Zoya have been waiting go do for so long...consummate 😳

This one goes out to Einstein, LoveOnlyAsYa and Rarepearl

Mwah love you guys

Please let me know what you think

Saima


'Ya Allah...what is wrong with you Zoya?' Asad said in frustration as he turned her around 'Mr Khan, you can at least attempt to be original...that's my line' Asad rolled his eyes at her 'Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan...can you just stand still long enough for me to talk to you...we have been married for three days now and every time I attempt to have a single conversation with we either get a prank played on us, or we get Ammi who keeps walking in unannounced or you getting side tracked by pizza'.

Zoya let out a deep sigh 'ok...I'm sorry...you talk and I will listen...and promise no distractions...look I'll even lock the door for you'.

Asad waited for Zoya to come back, as she stood in front of him he took her hands into his entwining their fingers together 'what did you want to talk about Mr Khan...you have my undivided attention now'. Asad couldn't work out if Zoya was really so naive or if she was deliberately playing ignorant.

Asad stepped closer to her 'actually...what I wanted to do...I mean say...no what I wanted to ask...' 'Ya Allah...Mr Khan...what are you so confused about...I think we should sit...come' Asad followed her to the bed and sat down, still holding one hand in hers.

Zoya looked at Asad who looked back at her perplexed as he mustered up the courage trying to bring up the topic of their suhag raat. Not being able to find the right words Asad raised his hand to cup the side of her face, as his hand came into contact with her skin Zoya felt a shiver run down her spine, she closed her eyes as Asad softly caressed her cheek 'Zoya...open you eyes...look at me' Zoya opened her eyes to meet his intense gaze, without uttering another word Asad inched closer to her, so close that they could feel the others warm sweet breath fan their faces 'Zoya...I' Asad whispered 'I know Mr Khan, me too' she whispered back before she closed her eyes completely. As soon as she did Asad placed his lips over hers and kissed her tenderly, Zoya tightened her hold on his hand she was still holding as Asad deepened the kiss.

Their passionate embrace was soon followed by what they had been so patiently waiting for, Asad and Zoya united as one, the nervous touch, the shy glances the first kiss everything was perfect. As perfect as it could be for two people madly and so deeply in love.

Asad and Zoya spent their first night of nothing but pure Love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sooo cute
it was a very sweet and nice one😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessromz

sooo cute
it was a very sweet and nice one😊



thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much my sweetheart for the dedication. Love the simplicity of this drabble. Something that we all have been waiting for to happen has been captured so well here.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Thank you so much my sweetheart for the dedication. Love the simplicity of this drabble. Something that we all have been waiting for to happen has been captured so well here.

Thanks for the pm.


You are awake...lol

Thank you for liking it...couldn't sleep needed to divert my thought away from everything so started writing again

Lots of Love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice & lovely
Thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice & lovely
Thanks for pm


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



You are awake...lol

Thank you for liking it...couldn't sleep needed to divert my thought away from everything so started writing again

Lots of Love



Yes am awake. My son has school today so got up n dono why but I got up 20 minutes early so logged in to chk what's happening on if and was pleasantly surprised to see an update from you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh! CUTE! 😃😃
Finally, some action! Somewhere at least! 😆

You tell them!
They need to do it. I think I may be feeling second hand frustration (is that even a thing?😆)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice drabble !
It was so cute !
Finally they had their time alone without disturbance ! 😆
Thanks for the pm

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