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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey friends. This is my poem on the beautiful Prince Uday. I would love to read your comments on it. Thanx 😊

The handsome Prince
Who has heirs and graces
Catches the ladies eyes
No guilt
No empty promises
Always on the hunt
For the first prize
He always wins
Never loses .
.Beware of his charming eyes
You're gonna get hypnotised
Drop dead smile will bring you down
Don't expect a morning kiss
He'll forget last nights sins!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wah wah wah.👏👏.gr8 poem⭐️...loved last 2 lines more.😉😉keep it up i can see a poet in u😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx 4 ur comment. Writing poetry is what I like doing the most. Watch this space for more Manveer poems. I'm also writing a story. 😊 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice poem...👍🏼
btw whats your name dear?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My name is Jagdeesh. I am a female btw. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one!

Describes Uday very Well...Oops! Sorry for double post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wah wah it was such a good poem! Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey you have something abt you!!
You write amazing darling❤️🤗
Loved it!!👏
The poem abt Uday so suits him lol😆
Do write more soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A big thank you for those people who left their comments on my poem about the characters in DEK. As I said in my previous post I shall be writing about Udays' feelings 4 Manyata and Manyatas' feelings towards Uday. 😉 😊

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