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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Friends,

This is my 3rd OS, and it is dedicated to all my Rahi friends (Geet, Anjali, Sujanya, Neha sorry if i have missed any one and all Rahi fans) thanks for ur support ...

First of all its very difficult to portray Rahi feelings into an OS, phew aaj toh lag gayi meri...tumlog kese karte ho yaar..👏..Rahi is a special bond...and has to be written well nahi toh mazza nahi atta...

chalo get ready with tamatar and unde...mujhe marne ke liye... i hope u guys like it...patta nahi kesa hai??


DATE @ DHABA

Ranveer is searching panchi very desperately since past 10

minutes , he is holding a chair in one hand and a burger in other

hand, and running around the college corridor...

Ranveer - Piddi ...sunn tune panchi ko dekha???

Piddi - kesi baat kar raha hai yaar ranveer ...mene subah se apne

aap ko nahi dekha main panchi ko kese dekhonga...haan...dimag mat

kha ...panchi ne bahaut kaam diya hai...

Ranveer - main khud hi dhund leta hoon usse...

Suddenly panchi's voice came from the library , ranveer was happy

to hear her voice and ran towards librrary ..

Ranveer - Moti.. moti.. moti... kahan thi main tujhe kabse dhund

raha hoon...chal jaldi se kuch kha le..u must be hungry...aur thodi

der baith ja plsss...dekh main tere liye chair bhi laya hoon...


Panchi - Nonuuu... Main bahaut busy ho...kitna kaam pending hai...

maya madam aate hi honge...aur tum ye chair lekar kya kar rahe

ho...yahan library main chairs nahi hai kya haan...

Ranveer - motti I was worried for u ...aur tu hai ki...

Panchi - Achcha worried haan...kahan gayi thi tumahari ye worried

jab tum uss Red colour frock wali ke sath flirt kar rahe the...

Ranveer - Kaunsi Red frock???...Kaunsi Ladki????

Panchi(staring cutely at ranveer) - Nonu mene apni ye ankhon se

dekha hai...

Ranveer - Haan na toh apni ankhon se hi dekhegi na...apne kaan ya

naak se thodi dekhne wali hai...

Panchi - Nonuuu

Ranveer - Motiii

All of a sudden,they began to laugh...and started looking at each others eyes...

Panchi - Nonu...I will take care of myself and thanks burger ke

liye...mujhe sach main bhuk lagi thi...

Ranveer - mujhe pata tha ke tujhe bhuk lagi hai...chal u go back to

ur work...it would be great if we could meet again...sham ko milte

hain...car parking ke pass ok...

Panchi - OK...

Panchi promised that she would meet ranveer after college she was

waiting for him at the parking.

Ranveer came from behind and hugged her...

Panchi - Nonu kya kar rahe ho?? Ye college hai...

Ranveer - Haan haan malum hain...achcha sun na moti bahaut din ho

gaye lets go for dinner ...kya bolti hai...???

Panchi - OK lets go...ek min.. I will inform kiya..nahi toh she will

wait for me...

Ranveer(with cute smile) - Lets Go...

Panchi asked Ranveer not to drive so Fast...

Ranveer - Don't worry we are about to reach...

They both were enjoying after a long time and they were chatting

about the Fest..the car stopped suddenly ...

Ranveer - shit ye car ko kya hua...

Panchi - Nonu don't worry ...kuch nahi hoga...

Ranveer came out and started checking ...shit shit...this is the

first time my car has broken down...aur who bhi aaj...

Panchi - Nonu shhh kyun chila rahe ho...samne toh dekho...

Ranveer - Moti kya dekhu yaar...ye car toh kharab ho gai ab

kya...aur hum highway per hain...

Panchi - Nonu pehele dekho...

Prem Da Dhaba - Veg , Non Veg and Chinese specialist ... It was

a huge Outdoor Dhaba...it was not very crowded..

Ranveer - Panchi no ways...hum yahan nahi jasakte...

Panchi - Pls chalo na its exciting ...

They have a bigger open sitting arragment with lots of charpais ,

Punjabi music and lighting...

Panchi and Ranveer sat on Charpai...and started looking out for

waiter ...

A small boy came towards them...

Kya loge Didi , bhaiya...

Panchi (with a braod smile and spark in her eyes)- hey Chotu...ek

chicken tandoor aur Naan butter marke...

Ranveer - Moti...ye sirf tu hi kar sakti hai...sorry for fiasco ...

main stupid hoon...tujhe kahan fassa diya...

Panchi - Nahi nonu this is the best place...sirf tum aur main...

Ranveer - I am really lucky ke tu meri girlfriend hai...

Panchi - Per car ka kya karein???

Ranveer - Let me call KD or Piddi...koi toh mechanic lekar

ayega...tab tak hum chicken enjoy kartein hain...

After having dinner, they were sitting beside each other, holding

hands tightly...

Panchi - thank u nonu... I needed this...mujhe itna tension hai Fest

ka...aur tumne mujhe bahaut support kiya hai...

Ranveer - Mere pass ek aur surprise hai...

Panchi - Kya...batao na plsss.

Ranveer went back to the car and came back with a gift in his

hand ...he took her hand and kissed her on her cheeks ...this is

for u...a small gift...

Panchi opened the gift, it was a diamond studded hair band...

Ranveer - for your long and beautiful hairs...

Panchi - Awww Nonu thank u thank u...

Ranveer - Ye hair band Fest wale din pehna... you will look very

beautiful...and I wish ke tera ye Fest bahut successful ho aur ek

din tu ek bahaut badi event manager bane...i am always with u

Moti...

Panchi hugged him and they both lost into each other's love...

*****************-------------------------*****************

smriti

Per iska matlab ye nahi hai ki i have forgotten Kisha...they are my Jaan...and will always be...😳😳😳



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Kishafan_4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Wow yaar Smriti...👏

Maza aa gaya... 😉

Rahi ki cute love story mein Pujabi Tadka... MAST... 😃
Haaye... diamond hairband... Wish RV bhi Panchi ko fest k liye aisa hi ek beautiful gift de 😊
Lvd it...😃
G8...⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Smriti. You must be joking about the tamatars. You should be welcomed with flowers. Yaar this is so sweet. Perfectly Rahilicious. Loved it frm the bottom of my heart. And yeah nice tadka.
Rahi were so adorable in this and my nonu roaming with a chair.
Thanx a ton. This was simply wow. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Wow yaar Smriti...👏

Maza aa gaya... 😉

Rahi ki cute love story mein Pujabi Tadka... MAST... 😃
Haaye... diamond hairband... Wish RV bhi Panchi ko fest k liye aisa hi ek beautiful gift de 😊
Lvd it...😃
G8...⭐️


Thanks Dear ...love u...
Yup diamond hair band...panchi ke itne cute hairs jo hai😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: anjali1805

Smriti. You must be joking about the tamatars. You should be welcomed with flowers. Yaar this is so sweet. Perfectly Rahilicious. Loved it frm the bottom of my heart. And yeah nice tadka.
Rahi were so adorable in this and my nonu roaming with a chair.
Thanx a ton. This was simply wow. 👍🏼


Thanks for the flowers anjali...
i hope mene justice kiya Rahi ke sath...
thanks once again
hugs...


niya_ss thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Smriti u took my name...thats so sweet of u 🤗
awesome👏
i really loved it...such a cute OS
Caring Nonu
love u for writing on RaHi ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Smriti babe.. ferrerro rochers n rasgullas will do..? Or any other favorite thing f urs.. cause I freaking loved this.. it was CUTE in caps..
Would love to see this overtly concerned n caring rv n a bindaas Panchi..totally chilled out couple hai yaa.. no inhibitions n tantrums.. n even the gift was so perfect for panchi.. beautiful n dainty like her..
I know u love kisha but u did more than justice for rahi n rahinians..
Lots f love dear..
Thanks a ton for fulfilling that unspoken wish f mine..
Hoping u write more...

s2singh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: RAHI_SS

Smriti u took my name...thats so sweet of u 🤗

awesome👏
i really loved it...such a cute OS
Caring Nonu
love u for writing on RaHi ❤️


Sujanya🤗
yup tumhara caring nonu.. 😃😃
thanks 😃😃
s2singh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: sneha02

Smriti babe.. ferrerro rochers n rasgullas will do..? Or any other favorite thing f urs.. cause I freaking loved this.. it was CUTE in caps..

Would love to see this overtly concerned n caring rv n a bindaas Panchi..totally chilled out couple hai yaa.. no inhibitions n tantrums.. n even the gift was so perfect for panchi.. beautiful n dainty like her..
I know u love kisha but u did more than justice for rahi n rahinians..
Lots f love dear..
Thanks a ton for fulfilling that unspoken wish f mine..
Hoping u write more...


THANK YOU in caps 😃
ya even i want to see panchi in that hair band😳😳 she is beautiful
i love kisha, but i dont hate rahi...i love panchi from day one...i liked ranveer after panchi ka accident wala track...😊..uske pehle i was not very fond of ranveer...
@ bold - anytime...
sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Omgeee Smriti My jaan🤗
I love u soo much for such cute OS
I Simply LOVED it
My RaHi
U described their bond so perfectly👏
Nonu cared for her Moti as always
their Dhabba date
Hayeee
You are a sweetheart
Thanks a lot for writing such beautiful OS
Mauhhh

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