Drabbles: 30. Episode XXXI- Return of the Jallad (Pg 95) [Note Pg 98] - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Exprimere

Good stuff!

So poignant. Thanks for the quick update, too :)


Originally posted by: custodian75

Choti packet bada dhamaka. Rudr is plagued by a big problem due to a small slip of girl.


Originally posted by: DoJin

beautifully written... 👏


Originally posted by: meera30

There is something about this man and his yearning, isn't there? How can one man's want for another woman be sexy, I wonder - but it is...that is what gives Rudra his edge, the way his universe seems to rotate on one axis - Parvati.


Sigh...EVERYONE and their sister should be reading this drabbling...


Originally posted by: vaish912

Such short updates but packed with so many emotions .. Even the small movements of characters shows their emotions .. Rudra n Parvati ... Amazing brilliant work 😊 N as usual req pls update soon ..


Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was superb...!!!!!!!!!
w8ng for next..!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Surleena

Hi ... Just came across these drabbles whn meera recomended thm on the emerald isle update ... Read all of thm ... Short n sweet drabbles ... Loved thm ... Also started watching the show ... Seems u doin a betr job than the actual show ...😃


Thank you! You are very kind! =)

Originally posted by: DiyaS

Loved the update ... so Rudra banna is beginning to recognise his need for this slip of a girl to be around him constantly ... beautiful.


Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Enraptured !!

once again.
so, Major ranawat 's resistance has hit the bottom stone. waiting for the last layer of his shield to snap and waves of profound emotions and raw desires inundate them both.
Ah lovely lovely dreams you weave, Dear TT !


Originally posted by: shagun-rocks

awwiee, my poor rudra is going through a life altering phase at the moment..surely, he has never experienced any such emotions before..hope he gets over his insecurities soon...would love to know whether paro is experiencing the same dilemma too..


Originally posted by: sslmay11

Rudra is completely smitten by his wife, it's a beautiful update!! Loved each word of desperation that's consuming our Major sa.


Thank you so much, you guys! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: awww

oye hoye!!!!!!!!!!! awesome update 👏👏


Originally posted by: tunai

please do continue...the story is amazing!!update soon yaar!!😉


Originally posted by: jisa

this was superb...!!!!!!!!!
w8ng for next..!


Originally posted by: CravingKhana

Well your virtual sis is 😊



Thank you! 😊


Originally posted by: meera30

See this is how you know you are addicted


Checking a forum that talks about a show you don't watch early in the morning for your morning drabble fix

And going bananas because you cannot find it today

Talle-Tale who shall I tattle on about your absence..?


Kabhi kabhi takneeki problems combined with my lazy ass cause a delay. 😆
Coming right up.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Parvati Ke Nuskhe


Hearing the tread of well-worn slippers down the corridor, Paro hastily picked up the covered plate of food she'd kept warm on the stove-top and carried it to the dining table.

Now that he'd finally been given the go-ahead by the BSD medical team-- he had returned to work and was busy trying to sort out the neglected paperwork in the Tejawat case. He never came home before 11 PM, by which time the rest of the family had retired to their respective bedrooms. The first time she'd tried eating with him, he'd bitten her head off. Paro had learned her lesson since, and ate with the family. But she would not stop waiting up for him. The least she could do was ensure that he came home to a plate of hot food and someone waiting for him at the table.

And it may just have had something to do with her desire to spend some time with him, away from everyone else. Mornings were terribly busy. She didn't have a minute to spare from the crack of dawn-- which is when she woke up-- until after breakfast had been served, consumed, the table cleared, and the prep for the day's meals and household chores begun.

By then, he would have left and she saw him only after he came home late at night.

No matter how exhausting her day, wild horses couldn't keep her away from the table while he ate in complete silence and ill-disguised relish.

As he got up from the table after finishing his food and she leaned forward to clear his place, she fought to keep the rising colour from her cheeks. Forcing herself to breathe normally, she spent an inordinately long amount of time picking up his plate and glass. She couldn't look him in the eye however, and fled to the kitchen, her courage deserting her.

With a rueful shake of her head, she tucked her dupatta securely over her chest and around her waist.

What had she been thinking? What madness had seized her? She couldn't do this! She didn't know how! And why did she need to try so hard anyway? Weren't men supposed to take the initiative? Yet, he'd never laid a finger on her except to assist her when she needed help somewhere. Maa Trisula, what was wrong with him? What was wrong with her? Surely it wasn't wrong for her to want her own husband to touch her?

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Rudra pushed the chair back with a shove and stalked into their room, heading right back into the bathroom. Parvati and her carelessness would be the death of him! Instead of its usual position over her chest and around her waist, her dupatta had fallen to the side during dinner. And when she'd leaned over to pick up his plate, she'd had no idea how close she'd come to being swept up in his arms and carried to their room.

Why couldn't she be more careful, damn it?


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank You ...now that is titillating
Edited by CravingKhana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thud - That was me falling to the ground and mind you, the noise would be LOUD!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sensuous writing ;)
Just love ur drabbles..
Both are yearning for each other,,desires are overflowing ;)
Edited by NicklausBarbie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG.

Just let one of them lose this irritating, frustrating, annoying, good-for-nothing control once, just once. Phir dekhte hain. 🤓
Edited by aruni50218 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am up at 1 AM just because I saw you updated.
As I was wondering if Eliot will be the death of me, your post gave me hope. Simple but spicy things exist in life!

Thanks for my daily dose of recreation.

Your stories aren't exactly cliffhangers. But they're worse than cliffhangers.

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