MESMERIZED...AY One Shot........ - Page 2

Hmph...why why why do you always have to write everythng so sad sad sad???? N why why why do I end up reading ur fics???? 😡 😡 😡

N why why why do I always love them all????? 😳 😳 😳

It was very sad..n senti(perfect smriti material 😆 😆) n I liked the fact that it was from ashi's POV...but it felt incomplete to me....since I wanted to know yuvi's feelings too....whether he was ok or not!

What I liked the best was the smashed guitar...smashed yet resilient in it's memories of the past....it reflected yuvi's smashed body...n AY's romance!

🤣 guys am loving the suspense way tooo much and i dnt even wanaa end it my one shot has ended right dere and nw its upto u all to wonder if our uv wld actly rise wid the sun...and if u realy wanaa blame den blame nitz for it she wanted suspense and since she requested so she was the boss 😛and neways thank you all for liking thish 😳me blushing shooo much after reading al dose comments☺️...thank you all...its only these comments which realy realy motivate to write better...love ya all🤗🤗..

smriti u ve left me speechless !!! it was so touchin 😳 awesume loved it 👏

this really touched me deeply.....i have tears 😭 😭 in my eyes this was very beautifully written part .....way to go,..... 👏

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Hmph...why why why do you always have to write everythng so sad sad sad???? N why why why do I end up reading ur fics???? 😡 😡 😡

N why why why do I always love them all????? 😳 😳 😳

It was very sad..n senti(perfect smriti material 😆 😆) n I liked the fact that it was from ashi's POV...but it felt incomplete to me....since I wanted to know yuvi's feelings too....whether he was ok or not!

What I liked the best was the smashed guitar...smashed yet resilient in it's memories of the past....it reflected yuvi's smashed body...n AY's romance!

🤣🤣🤣dear devilzz am actlyy thrilled daat u liked d boring smriti antys ficcy and d next saddyyyy saddyy fic wld be dedicated wholelly and solely to u harshuu😛u are my inspiration to write such highly emotionalized verses....glaad u liked it and that guitaar wala part is my fvt toooo...if u noticed ashi didnt cry throughout but the smashed guitaar was obviously too much to take coz it symbolized uv to her and his existence rested wid daat guitaar😭

Originally posted by: uvcraziestfan

smriti wat happened to yuviiiii..ahh see dis time i read it o my own fynnaly ...it was soo saddy saaddd 😳 loved d last line bravo gal keep rocking liek dis 😳

Originally posted by: rakhi_uv

awesome smits 👏 luved the whole thing how ashi's emotions gradudually changed frm hatred.... to being shocked..... to being lost in yuvis memories n lastly regretting.....tho i personally luved tht part u wrote wen shes lost in his thots the most 😳 😳 😳 ....bt y din u write nething abt uv....wat happens to him 😭 bt neways as a whole the fic was too mesmarising 👏

awww my poor poor poor uv diwanees hw can i be shoo rude to u both and kill uv...dnt worry hes alive for ur sanity sake😛 but i wanted the fic to end dis ways..imperfectly..else it wld hav been same old clea shade stuffy..soo keep ur imaginative horses flying and till den my ashi wld snatch uv away frm under both of yours loong noshyyyys😛thaanx for liking dish oness.....😳🤗🤗

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

omg.... smrits... i've never seen u write, but now dat i hv, i dont c y u dont write often.... 😳 😳 😳 becoz ur a complete rockstar ⭐️ ⭐️
its choooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeet 😳 i loooove it 😳 😳 do write more

shriiiii....if you open your eyes and see beyond adom and matty den you wld realize i hav written quite a few write ups,,,,but to read dem u need to be wide awake and not just dreaming abt switching love evry second....😛😛u better read all my pending write ups which u hav missed else matty is no longer urs....and thaanx a lot for likin dis one prankyyyy😃🤗

wowwwwwww amazing...
keep up da gud wrk

replying down.... 😛

hey bhagguu😉...excuse me mam...there used to be a gurl named SMRTI SINGHVI who lacked brains...do you remember her...yhe yeh wohi jo sabko torture karti hai...ek no. ki IDIOT hai.....21 year old craddle mein jhoola jhoolney wali baby hai.....and jo world key sabsey rokking one shots likhti hai .......👏

SIMI, you have always left me speechless with your work..I mean the fics and one shots you write is just a boundry to the pavillian.😳..everytime there is a new and a unique concept 😳😳😳
and I rilli rilli enjoy each and every bit of your work, you do it from your heart, and it shows in your fic👏,this concept was again icing on cake for me😉😉...as I am a fultooo lover of your fics...and yeh I hope I have proved it on messenger this to you one fine day !!😆

I really loved this part the most...👏😳

"I can't believe that I actually trusted that loser…that good for nothing psychotic pigeonhead! How could I even think that he would be different from his dad! How could I ever believe that he had some substance worth in him! How could I ever give him some space in my already heavily crowded heart! Urgg… Ashi get a life and for bhaggu's sake stop thinking of that perfectly waste creation of bhaggu!"

and this one was a master stroke that brought gooses on this flesh!!!

She had gone to him and very lightly had run her small fingers through his hair as if soothing him from all his worries. Aah but she had till now prided of being his greatest pain. She had touched his closed eyes in an attempt to comprehend what they actually reflected and she had tried to free him from his guitar but the moment she touched it he woke up in panic, "What… woo… wackoooooo tum pagal ho kya?" he shouted through his sleep "tumhe kitny baar kaha hai that stay away from my guitar… tumhe smajh kyun nahi aata? Mujhe zebras ki language nahi aaty wacko else I would have told u in your language… am warning u ashi, mere guitar se dur raho and thaanx… tumne meri pamila andreson ko kiss karne ke sapne ko beech main hi destroy kar diya… tum dreams main bhi logoon ko itna kyun daraty ho?" as he finished saying…ashi just made a face and said "ye koi tumahre dad ka private lounge nahi hai jo tum yahaan snor kar rahe ho…..apni pamila… ramila ko lekar yahaan se jao… and btw even ur sight is also so damn irritating!"
Yuvi rolled his eyes and left too sleepy to fight with her and of course his pamila was waiting for him. Ashi couldn't believe that she had fallen in love with this nincompoop and said to herself, " Duh-uh! Have I lost it finally?"

this was sumthing really rokking, outstanding work again SMRITI SINGHVI !!!!!! way to go gurl !!! 👏👏

the way AASHI's love was seen for the Psychic peice of mulberry tree was completely upto the mark.....100 on 100 SIMI !!!!!! goshhh...a century......now be ready wid another rokking and kool idea of yours to stun me again madam...helloooo...wat are waiting for...you have loads to write...kaam par lago samjhi nah....😆

P.S : Sorry for the late reply, I wont say don't mind, cause you lack it !!!

Originally posted by: divyaashimix

hey bhagguu😉...excuse me mam...there used to be a gurl named SMRTI SINGHVI who lacked brains...do you remember her...yhe yeh wohi jo sabko torture karti hai...ek no. ki IDIOT hai.....21 year old craddle mein jhoola jhoolney wali baby hai.....and jo world key sabsey rokking one shots likhti hai .......👏

SIMI, you have always left me speechless with your work..I mean the fics and one shots you write is just a boundry to the pavillian.😳..everytime there is a new and a unique concept 😳😳😳
and I rilli rilli enjoy each and every bit of your work, you do it from your heart, and it shows in your fic👏,this concept was again icing on cake for me😉😉...as I am a fultooo lover of your fics...and yeh I hope I have proved it on messenger this to you one fine day !!😆

I really loved this part the most...👏😳

"I can't believe that I actually trusted that loser…that good for nothing psychotic pigeonhead! How could I even think that he would be different from his dad! How could I ever believe that he had some substance worth in him! How could I ever give him some space in my already heavily crowded heart! Urgg… Ashi get a life and for bhaggu's sake stop thinking of that perfectly waste creation of bhaggu!"

and this one was a master stroke that brought gooses on this flesh!!!

She had gone to him and very lightly had run her small fingers through his hair as if soothing him from all his worries. Aah but she had till now prided of being his greatest pain. She had touched his closed eyes in an attempt to comprehend what they actually reflected and she had tried to free him from his guitar but the moment she touched it he woke up in panic, "What… woo… wackoooooo tum pagal ho kya?" he shouted through his sleep "tumhe kitny baar kaha hai that stay away from my guitar… tumhe smajh kyun nahi aata? Mujhe zebras ki language nahi aaty wacko else I would have told u in your language… am warning u ashi, mere guitar se dur raho and thaanx… tumne meri pamila andreson ko kiss karne ke sapne ko beech main hi destroy kar diya… tum dreams main bhi logoon ko itna kyun daraty ho?" as he finished saying…ashi just made a face and said "ye koi tumahre dad ka private lounge nahi hai jo tum yahaan snor kar rahe ho…..apni pamila… ramila ko lekar yahaan se jao… and btw even ur sight is also so damn irritating!"
Yuvi rolled his eyes and left too sleepy to fight with her and of course his pamila was waiting for him. Ashi couldn't believe that she had fallen in love with this nincompoop and said to herself, " Duh-uh! Have I lost it finally?"

this was sumthing really rokking, outstanding work again SMRITI SINGHVI !!!!!! way to go gurl !!! 👏👏

the way AASHI's love was seen for the Psychic peice of mulberry tree was completely upto the mark.....100 on 100 SIMI !!!!!! goshhh...a century......now be ready wid another rokking and kool idea of yours to stun me again madam...helloooo...wat are waiting for...you have loads to write...kaam par lago samjhi nah....😆

P.S : Sorry for the late reply, I wont say don't mind, cause you lack it !!!

hey bhagguu😲😲😲first let me digest u hav written such a hugee reply full of praises for me...hw did u manage to serive dis maan..😛neways am actlyy glaad daat u liked it dis much daat u cared to reply so colorfully..glaad daat my one shots have made u cry warna to u r d one who keeps on gng arnd making people cry😛thaanx a tonnn for such a wonderful reply divs..first time thoda civilized reply likha hai🤗🤗🤗love yaa