Arshi TS: Gustakhiyaan *Completed* Note Pg :24**(03/03)

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cute_sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

there is a big age difference between them but it is rightly said "love is blind" 😉 beautiful story..continue soon

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SAM32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

:-) nice story.. waiting for more

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow amazing ts loved it please continue soon thank you for pm.

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BroknAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice one. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon

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Param

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

good one.. loved it.. 😊

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javeria

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Fantastic update 👏

interesting story line.

Interesting characters of Arnav and khushi. He owns the biggest grocery shop and other apartments too in Dehli.

Khushi character made me sad, her parents made her life hell n filled it with pain. She thanked god for taking away from her, she hated them that much.

I am sure if khushi notices him then Arnav too harbors some feelings for her.

Arnav was her knight in shining Armor.

I don't know but lavanyah character made a grin appear on my face. She is in demand girl with perfect body n life and her affair with gunda shyam. Its hard to picture Arnav as a shopkeeper, khushi cooking in mishti bhandar and lavanyah as a flirtatious girl but i love these characters present in different avatars.

Waiting for the next part eagerly.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

*sighs*

How do you think I am supposed to wait for the second part after giving me such a dhamaakedaar part??? I want more yaar! ;) <3 It was awesome!!!!

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

superb prologue. continue soon😊

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Viji

@vijiasr08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

nice one loved it

waiting for next one

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nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

This is a sweet one...loving it...Khushi is really adorable here...nd a mature Arnav...loved the shopping-moment...also the flashback...Khushi's sad childhood...his saving her...and her falling for him...It's before 2.5 years naa, that Arnav-Lavanya marriage was supposed to happen...but it didn't hain naa??? Warna why would Khushi be here now...waiting to read more...