Arshi TS: Gustakhiyaan *Completed* Note Pg :24**(03/03)

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hum aa rahe hai break ke baad.😊

awesome part,

How could shashi and Garima could torture her ? They were demons and got their punishment. I love buaji..she loves her so much and that would help her to heal..but again that rascals 😡

Thank god ki Arnav came there and saved Khushi...and she fall in love with him at very tender age..Aww..Bali umar Mai lag Gaya rog..

Arnav Singh Raizada an orphan man with killing looks and smirks..and he is a Richie rich of Laxmi Nagar..now who doesn't want a husband like him for their girl? Lavanya jeet gayi iss khel Mai ?

A pure soul with broken heart left Laxmi nagar ...

The best part of this update was...when Arnav gave her a toffee ...

Waiting for the next part...

Thank you Aashi ,

Take care.

Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

And this my friend is how you build angst in a story. Excellent start. Can't wait to see how this goes.👏

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wowww nyc start
pls cont sooon

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Adorable TS...loved the first part...we should have our grocery store wala as hot as Arnav...Actually can't imagine him as grocery shop keeper...so she is 16 and he is 26😉...OMG!!! Great age gap...but who cares... Waiting for the next part.😛

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ipkkndeternity

@ipkkndeternity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Unusually story line nyc ...

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Very different concept..👏

AR Grocery Shop...

Loved it.

Edited my comment on page no 7.

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Ohhh ASR grocery stores...what a change😉

So now Khushi is 18 and Arnav 31.

And I hope Arnav Andy Lavanaya are not married🥱

Khushi's parent I doubt could pass as human, I mean don't you should care for the only child than curse for something she is not responsible for. But I guess being from small village with old thinking does that to you...😡

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Amazing start Anu..
I'm really liking it.
Tata namak, desh ka namak.. 🤣 I loved it so much!!!
It's an awesome start. Khushi fell in love with him in their first meeting and her reason/logic/feeling was simple. She had never ever been saved. What a bliss it would have been for her to have a savior for herself!!! To feel that your well-being matters!
You didn't tell if La-Arnav got married. They won't have otherwise Khushi won't have been thinking of proposing Arnav in the present time.
Loved it. Post part-2 soon.😛