MG FF: Burning Desire Season 2 pt 5 pg 53 10th april - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: _GoldenStarz_

by mistake update delete hogaya and i am again typing



Oh no...main tab se aise hi latak rahi hoon...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _GoldenStarz_


by mistake update delete hogaya and i am again typing

don't worry will be waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -indu-


Oh no...main tab se aise hi latak rahi hoon...😆

😆😆 arey yaar ek din hogaya aur aap aise hi latakke kadhi ho... poor you.. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: leenukiguru

don't worry will be waiting 😊

sorry for making you wait dear... update is almost done.. 30 min more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


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Note: This story contains Raw Passion, those who are uncomfortable please stay away. If you have any problem with the content then let me know through PM.


Geet felt dizzy as she is drunk; she took slow steps towards the garden but banged into someone. She was about the fell down but the person into which she banged caught her holding her waist and made her stand on her feet safely. She looked at the person in front of her "Thank you" told geet and walked away; she is too much lost in her own world that she couldn't even see the person she banged is staring at her. Geet again fell down; the man ran towards her and made her stand. "Be careful" he told and held her tight. Geet smiled like a maniac and left from there. Geet's car is already waiting for her as driver very well knew geet won't stay in party more than an hour. Geet got into her car and asked the driver to start the car.

"Maan, what are you doing here come inside" asked the director. Maan nodded and walked along with him. "What Kumar your heroine don't like parties or what? She left so early" asked maan casually. Kumar smiled and told "Yeah, she doesn't stay in party for long time. She just comes and go, for the first time today she stayed for more than an hour" Maan just nodded and got busy talking with others. Maan Singh Khurana, Owner of KF (Khurana Fashions) he rules the market, people will be waiting for his release of his Stylish Wear. He sets the fashion trend and he even designs for films. If anyone come into his bad looks then he even don't give damn to them if it is even his family. He hates his elder brother to the core and loves his twin brother to the core. Vikram Singh Khurana, Elder brother of Maan Singh Khurana and owner of K&K Productions. He have everything money, power, status, he wants everything what he desire even it is a girl. He laid his lustful eyes on Maan's best friend and love interest of maan's twin brother. He fulfilled his desire and maan lost his best friend. Armaan, maan's twin brother was depressed and got addicted to drinking. Maan even lost his only family armaan because of his elder brother. Maan and armaan stays separately away from vikram. From the time maan's lost his best friend he never talked a word with his elder brother, maan tried many ways to make armaan normal but that never happened. He always prayed to send an angel to armaan's life so that he becomes normal again. (No past to maan and his parents are no more)

In the party when maan is having his drink he got to see the person whom he hates to the core and he is none other than his elder brother vikram. Vikram tried to talk to maan but maan avoided him giving a disgusting look to him. Vikram like a shameless creature smirked at maan and continued his drinking session. Maan was highly irritated seeing him at the party and maan came to the party to fix an appointment with her, but seeing her condition at the entrance itself he understood its waste of time to be here in the party. And after seeing vikram he thought why he came to the party. "Yash, I am going now. See you later" told maan and bid good bye to him. Yash too didn't pester him much as he knows about both maan and vikram. Maan drove back to Khurana Mansion; he entered into mansion only to see the darkness in his house as well as in his house. Armaan used to be in the mansion, but now he is in New York looking after KF over there and maan looks after KF in India, Delhi. Maan went to his room and changed into tracks. He is not in a mood to have dinner, he slept with empty stomach which he almost does daily. He closed his eyes to catch some sleep but sleep is very far away from him. He tossed on the bed for some time but feeling frustrated he got up and switched on the lights. He took his laptop and opened it. He kept staring at the wallpaper of his laptop. "Where are you princess do you even know how much I miss you? Come back soon princess" whispered maan looking at the picture of a 4 years old girl. They both met 20 years back in her village and became good friends just in a day. They were like inseparable till maan stayed there that too for only 2 months. They clicked lots of pics and after maan came back to delhi they didn't meet or talk to each other. But maan gave a place to her in his heart, he doesn't know where his princess is but he fell in love with her not even knowing anything about her and is waiting for her till today. He once went to her village to meet her but he came to know her family left the village. He was so much disappointed but didn't lose his hope. He is damn sure he will meet his princess one day. "Mujhko mere pyaar par poora barosa hai princess, tum jald hi mere paas avogi" thought maan and kept staring at the pic and don't know when he slept.

At the same time geet got up from her deep sleep. "Aisa kyun laga ki kisi ne mujhe yaad kiya aur mera intzaar kar raha hai" thought geet. "Waise who is there for me that they remember me and worry about me. Stop dreaming geet no one is there for you" thought geet and smiled sadly. She looked at herself and realized she is sleeping in the same dress that she wore in the party, she went to washroom and changed into night dress. She lied on the bed and is in deep thought. She felt someone is calling her but when there are no one for her then how can she feel. "Geet, don't think much tumko yaad karne wala koi nahi hai aur hona bhi nahi. There is no love, trust or any relation in this world. Everyone is selfish and wants something from other be it be money or anything. And I am happy like this I don't want anyone or be in any relation. All these are b******. And if god is there in real then I pray you for only one thing. Kill me god kill me I don't want to live this life as a burden" thought geet and closed her eyes.

Next day morning maan got up and looked at the time. He got shocked that he slept too much; he rushed to the washroom and got ready for office. After getting ready he left a message to armaan saying good morning. He went towards kitchen and had bread with butter and then black coffee. Driver is already got ready and is waiting for him. He opened the car door and maan got into the car. "Kaka, aaj shaam ko armaan aa raha hai. Aap 5pm ko airport jayiye aur usko seedha office mein drop karke aap chale jaana" told maan. "Armaan baba aaraha hai? wo kaisa hai ab?" asked driver Ramu Kaka. "Aap se kya chupana kaka, aapko sab pata hai na" told maan sadly. Kaka nodded sadly. They are travelling to the office meanwhile maan called his secretary and asked her to take appointment from Geet Singh as he wants to meet her ASAP. Maan's secretary called to Rosy to take appointment.

"Hello Ms. Rosy, I am Pari from KF" told pari. "Yes Ms. Pari?" asked rosy. "Actually our boss MSK wants to meet Geet Ma'am so can I know if she can give a date for meeting" told pari. "Just a minute Ms. Pari, I will check her dates and will be back to you in an hour" told rosy. "Ok, thank you very much" told pari and cut the call.

Geet who came down wished rosy. "Good morning rosy" "Good morning geet" wished rosy back with a warm smile. "Geet, we got a call from KF. MSK's secretary pari called and told MSK wants to meet you. She was asking when you can give the date" told rosy. "Yes last month his secretary directly called me I asked her to call you. Hmmm shooting bhi katam hua. I think today or tomorrow would be fine" told geet. "Geet, tomorrow you have promotion campaign for the movie in a dance reality show" told rosy. "Then today it will be fine that too after lunch" told geet. "Ok geet, I will inform them" told rosy. Geet left to her room for taking bath. Pari again called to rosy after an hour. "Hello Ms. Pari, today afternoon after lunch" told rosy. "Ok Ms. Rosy I will inform the same to MSK. See you today in the office. Our car will be there at your mansion at 2pm" told pari. "Sure, thanks" told rosy and cut the call.

"Maan sir, they will here today in the afternoon. And there are no meetings scheduled at that time" told pari. "Ok pari, look after the arrangements and also designs should be on the conference room. Make sure you receive them carefully" told maan. "Sure sir" told pari and started preparing for the meeting. "Geet Singh" thought maan went into some thoughts.



Precap: Meeting


Here is the Next part of BD2, i hope you liked the start and shower me with your likes and comments.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Me 1st Me 1st Yayyy
Dhinka chika Dhinka Chika :)
hahahahahha
Lovely awesome update...
every Char is revealed :)
eagerly waiting fr next update:)
Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
toh geet hai maan ki princess...kya maan ko pata chalega...dono kya pehchan payega ek doosreko...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud start
maan hates his big b...like geet
the girl maan looking 4 must be geet
w8ing 4 their meet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
can't wait for their meeting.

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