Just a second ..a KR SS FF :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Monday,17 February 2012Ab bs bhi kro Kriya! Kitna ready hogi? I hope you remember that your farewell party aaj hai..its already 12:30 noon..kab jaogi tum? n let me remind you that this is just a farewell party...not your marriage baby..Now could u plzz leave that mirror? Shouted kriya's mother Kriya: Mom...bs yeh maskara lga loon..Btw main achhi lagg rhi hoon na? Lyk..Am i looking hot? :PMom: Bakwas mat kr!! Hot ki lgti..bataun tujhe? *showing her a slap*kriya: Nahi mom...i've done with my cheeks..plzz aur make up mat kr dena.!! lol (makes funny expressions)Mom: Achha ab apne hair bhi thik krle! kya haal banaya hua hai tune..Kriya: Ya bs..its the last part left.!Kriya to herself: Kab ka phne kiya hua hai sharon ko..Kab aogi tum yr...its 12:45 already and we have to reach college by 1.!! Oh god..plzz come soon sharon darling.. *Door bell rings*Mom: Hey sharon beta..how are u? I must say u r looking so pretty..(she was in white saari...so beautiful...so pure..)Thank you aunty,,says sharon..Bt kriya se toh kam hi lgg rhi hoon i guess.!Kriya: Yr yeh hair ka kya karoon mein?Sharon: Tu khule rehne de,,it suits u..:)Kriya: ohh..alright then..i'm ready..Kriya:Btw aaj toh swayam gya kaam se.!! lolhearing this her mom says..kaun gya???
Sharon to kriya..shup up u kamini...
Sharon: Aunty yeh toh bakwas kr rhi hai..she'zz saying that aaj toh sab boys gye..lyk..
Mom: Ohhh!! woh toh hai.!! meri dono bachiiyan kitni sweet lg rhi hain..:D
Kriya: chl ab chlte hain...lets rock it sharon ;)
Sharon: yo girl..lets go ;)
Mom: achha achha baat suno dono..dhyaan se jaana..aur apna khyaal rakhna..koi prob hui toh call kr dena..n boys se dooor hi rehna,,,n if they offer u a drink...just don't take it..tumhein pta hai na aaj kal ke larhko ka..so be careful girls...dono sahi salamat ghar aa jana..
Kriya sharon: YES YES YES MOM..!!!
bye mom bye aunty :)
MOM: yeh larhkiyn bhi na...
girls: BByeee
On the road..
Sharon:Hey kriya..u knw..sukh bhi aa rahi hai...!!
Kriya: what?? sukh aa rhi hai??? reallly??
uske mom dad ne allow kr diya???
Sharon: yeah!!
i was shocked too..!
Kriya: whoaaa man.! cool..
they were talking crazily ,laughed,..while sharon was driving the scooty..
Suddenly a bike came from wrong side n hit them
*crashhh*
thats all for now..!!
do review me..its for the first tym i'm writing a ff..
its purely based on my real life.!! lol
so its easy to explain it lol..
do comment..
tell me..should i continue?
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kriapatel thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Supab
love it
kria shaeon n krias moms triol convo was really sweet
Do continu n dont forget to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seems interesting... 😎
Ur real life story...

Interesting...very interesting...😉 (vardhan 's style frm Sadda Haq)

Cont soon...
N do pm me...
Bt m inactive bcz of boards will comment aftr dat...

Hope u won't mind...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
seems intresting
ur real life story really
and kria sharon and mom convo is cute
update fast
pm meee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its aswom start...

nd give both couple equally importance...

nd ur life stry

intresting very intresting...

update soon nd do pm me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting
U must continue
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaronlove001

its aswom start...

nd give both couple equally importance...

nd ur life stry

intresting very intresting...

update soon nd do pm me...




yaa..i'll give equal important for sure..i promise..
Its lyk..me n my best friend's story ;) :p
i'll update tomorrow ;) 🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Seems interesting... 😎
Ur real life story...

Interesting...very interesting...😉 (vardhan 's style frm Sadda Haq)

Cont soon...
N do pm me...
Bt m inactive bcz of boards will comment aftr dat...

Hope u won't mind...😊



Lol..i thought my story would suit them ;)
I hope it suits :p
n hope u lyk ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start
update next part soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do continue it yar. ds is awesome. nd plz pm me

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