zindagi aisi kyun hain ak ff(note pg4)

hi .this is my first try at fics.hope u like it.no intro .sorry but i hate intro.

part 1

we see a small little house .a girl is getting ready for the first day of her college . we see her face and it is none other than our kripa

.kripa is a sweet girl .she is career oriented.she is practical,helpful and a girl with usool(sorry don't know english 4 that).on the other hand we see a cool dude getting ready for the second year of his college .

this is angad .hard from top but sweet from inside.

at kripa's house

m for kripa's mom and p for her dad

m: kripa hurry up .u r getting late .

k:coming

m:why u always get up late.u know i have to prepare food for ur dad

k:dad dad dad .is he everything for u .u always care for him.u know he doesn't love us.he doesn't care abt us .i always fought for u .then also u always take his side.i hate u for this.

and she goes away hiding her tears.😭

part 2
kripa goes to nimmo's house(her best friend).she cries and tells her that she had a fight with her mom today.nimmo consoles her(i on't wanna drag this scene 2 much)they talk for half an hour and kripa feels much better now

at angad's house
g for his mom and s for his dad.
g:angad beta.r u ready or not?
a:here i m mom
g:oh! my son is handsome
a:angad rocks mom
josh (angad's bestfriend):ya aunty angad rocks.girls drooadl over him
g:(sarcasticaly)and on whom do u drool angad?
a:stop it mon.let's go josh .bye mom
j:bye aunty
g:bye beta
today josh and angad r very excited.today ther r gonna rag new students.

at college
angad and josh r having a coke .they scan the whole college ground to find someone stupid and guliibe(for ragging ofcourse)
their eyes stop at someone and they spit out the coke in their mouth.their mouths fall open everyone in the college is luking at that person.

oye teri kahani awesome hai yaar mein aage ki padhne ja rahi dont cry ok 👏

plz continu dear superb kahani hai 👏 👏 👏

And plz mention tat this is an AK ff in the topic title. I thought it was some discussion/article 😕

part 3

we see a gurl in bright yellow dress with full sleeves.her complexion is dark.she has put on heavy make up with bark brown lipstick.she has worn bangles ,necklace and big ear rings.she has worn high heels and is walking akwardly..
everyone stares her for a while and then burst out laughing angad's gang i.e mishty,aditya,tanya,jeet,aaliya join them in laughing.
but their smile soon fade away when they see the gurl walking towards them.
g for the gurl
g:hi guys.(pointing 2wards angad)u r angad right?
everyone luks at angad.
a:(rudely)yes
g:i m a gr8 fan of urs.i just love u.

tum nahi aaoge phir bhi rahta hai intzaar
kabhi kabhi baith jati hoon kar ke shringaar
tumhara bhi khana laga deti hoon aksar mez per
aur darwaze per daur kar jati hoon baar baar

angad gang's staat coughing.they start teasing him
angad is like
g:wat r u doing 2 night?why don't we go out 4 a dinner
together?
mishty, aaliya,aditya,tanya,and jeet starts giggling
we see a handsome guy coming towards them .he is

kunal:hey darling!why don't u come with me.i would love 2 go with u


the gurl is shocked 2 see him

why is she shocked 2 see him?

Originally posted by: monikaseth

oye teri kahani awesome hai yaar mein aage ki padhne ja rahi dont cry ok 👏

thx a ton

Originally posted by: ruwaniplk

plz continu dear superb kahani hai 👏 👏 👏

thank u and yes ur siggy is gr8

Originally posted by: 123456

this is really interesting, im not to read fan fics really but urs is very gd, cant wait till next part 😊

thx very very much 4 reading my fan fic though u don't read fic .

thx a lot

awsome story AMRITA FAN n dnt cry
it was very interesting
keep it up