Ammi, Aapne Aisa Kyun Kiya? OS - Page 7

Oh! Sangeeta such a pleasant surprise!!! Thank god tumhari khamoshi tooti😊. It's a very emotional OS. Loved it. Loved their convo. The last line stole my heart😭. Please continue writing. When are you going to update Faasle?

awesome Sangeetha..loved it..very well written..😊

Originally posted by: webuser7

DQS ki bachhi!! 😡 What the?? You forgot to PM Mom?! How could you? 😭 Theek hai! Maaf kiya! Like Sangeeta and I said on FB, parents forgive kids easily!! 🤗

Sangeeta, I didn't know you had posted this OS here! I did read it on FB, but IF pe lamba comment dene ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai! 😃 Chalo der aaye par durust aaye!!

KSG was awesome in the last 2 episodes! He portrayed Asad's pain, disbelief and denial beautifully! But the scenes fell short of being perfect because of 2 main reasons:

1. Mixing them up with the disgusting Hasina and family scenes.
2. Not showing enough interaction or explanation between Asad / Zoya / Dilshad

That's why your OS is PERFECT!! No Hasina crapfest and an extended KV scene! 👏 Beautiful and heart wrenching dialogues! Asad's pain came through loud and clear. I could easily visualize KSG enacting the scene!! Brilliant!!

I sincerely hope the CVs continue the scene and show at least half of what you have shown but alas! Once bitten twice shy!! We know exactly what to expect from tomorrow's KV scene - NOTHING!! So thank you for this poignant and emotional scene!

The first and last dialogues pierced my heart! The pain of a child feeling abandoned came through loud and clear! As you already know, I don't think Dilshad deserved her child considering her dead. But as you said, people can say the most cruelest thing when angry and upset.

"17 saal pehle unhone mujhse mere abbu cheen liye, aur aaj, meri ammi."

"And if she doesn't come, I will assume that like you, even I am an orphan."

I am so glad you added a Zoya / Dilshad scene. I was waiting to see one after the ZoYaan fiasco but it didn't happen. I doubt this one will also happen on the show!! Dilshad actually compared AsYa's love to Rashid and her relationship!! 🤣 I wish Zoya or Asad would ask her what role the third person Shireen will have in this Mohabbat! Rashid toh do kashti pe sawar hai!! Zaroor dubega aur Dishad ko bhi le dubega!! 😕 Why Dilshad why??

Asad and Zoya scene was emotionally dramatic!!

"TUMHEIN JAANA HAI THO TUM BHI CHALI JAO!" He bellowed, "I DON'T NEED ANYONE! MERA IS DUNIYA MEIN KOI NAHIN HAI- NA AMMI-NA ABBU-NA BHAI-NA BEHEN-NA DOST" His voice cracked as he collapsed on the ground with his face buried in his lap.

Aah! Why do we take out our anger and frustration on the person closest to us, who is also trying to help and support us in our times of need?😭 Asad is lucky to have pit bull Zoya on his side - she will not give up on him. A weaker woman would have succumbed under all that anger.

No closed door or window can keep Zoya out! Ouch! Zoya had to get hurt for Asad to calm down! Their interaction was so good. I loved the bandage scene:

"But Mr. Khan, agar koi pyaar karne waala bandaid lagaaye tho us bandaid ka asar zyaada hota hai." She smiled at him and held her finger under his nose. He relented and pulled a bandaid out from the drawer, "here you go Ms Farooqui." He taped it around her finger and glanced at her.

Aww! No kissi for the booboo, Mr. Khan? That would help heal it faster!

I loved:

"Zoya! Don't compare the two situations! Mr. Rashid Khan only loves himself. Agar unhein ammi se itni hi mohabbat hoti tho us ghar ke aisho aaraam chhod kar yahan aa jaate. Yahan se apni bhool sudhaar lete. Why has he taken her there? He wants his cake and wants to eat it too. Wo ammi se mohabbat nahin karte"

Well said! 👏 👏 Rashid!! 😡 How can you love two women at the same time? That's not love!! You disgust me!!

Jo cheez aapki hai wo wapas aa jaayegi aur agar nahin aayi tho wo hamari kabhie thi hi nahin Mr. Khan. Phoophi will always love you, wo hamesha aapki ammi rahengi lekin unhein jeene ka haq hai, waise hi jaise hum dono ko hai. Please give her a chance."

Dilshad will return!! Inshallah!! 😆 She will realize that threesome is not her cup of tea, umm, or cup of coffee!! 😃

havent watched the episode yet but i bet it won't match the level of your writing. It was awesome.

OMG bheegi di and a OS :O

amazing os.it was very emotional and Asads pain was crystal clear.Sangeeta di superb writing👏.

Such an emotional OS.. Its heartbreaking to see what Dilshad is doing to Asad, but you have described it perfectly. I honestly wish we can see this on the show..

Originally posted by: webuser7

DQS ki bachhi!! 😡 What the?? You forgot to PM Mom?! How could you? 😭 Theek hai! Maaf kiya! Like Sangeeta and I said on FB, parents forgive kids easily!! 🤗

That NAHIII was so dramatic! lol