T2- Ristey......naye ya purane

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi friends its Maya here...!!!
Ristey ...naye ya purane is started by my Di Samara.


Here i present u all d 2nd thread of it.


And u all knw dt she is no more between us.
And u guys must be missing her work.
So here i m to write her left works.
I vl updt all her incmplt work.
So just bear me guys.
I m not gud lyk u all just trying my luck in writings.
Plz forgive me for any errors n mistakes.

Luv Maya...!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Check here for index:

Thread 1:

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3703189&PID=90107278&#p90107278

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats
Thanks you for continuing this wonderful os written by samara
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Originally posted by: sdutta

CONGO DEAR 4 T2🥳


thnks dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONGO FOR NEW THRD BUT U A DONT DISCONT IT SYS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hearty congo for the second thread,Maya darling.
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Congrats for new thread
waiting for the next update
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Congo For New Thread...😃😃😃
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PART: 18

Somewhere in Mumbai...

person 1: Tum yaha kya kr rahe ho...??? Aur kyun bulaya mujhe...??? Maut ka dar nhi hai kya..???

Person 2: Aap meri chinta mat kariye. Balki apni sochiye. Kya hoga jab sari duniya ko apke asli kaam ka pata chal jaega. Is bhole se chehre ke piche ki asliyat ko ab tak sirf main janta hu par agar meri baat nhi mani to puri duniya jaan jaegi.

Person 1: Dara rahe ho mujhe.

Person 2: Dara nhi rha hu balki dhamki de raha hu. Ek baar aur mera sath do to jo aapko chahiye wo apko mil jaega.

Person 1: Agar na kahu to..

Person 2: Aap kehte nhi par main janta hu aapki kamzori. Aur believe i vl get it with u aur without u...

Scene shifts to ETF Office

Rathod's cabin.

Arjun: Badi maa pagal ho gayi hai...

Rathod: Arjun..!!!

Arjun: Aur kya bolu. Pura ka pura coolie aur driver bana diya. Kabhi ye leke aao to kabhi use waha le jao.

Rathod: Riya tere liye ye sab kar rahi hai aur tu uske liye shopping nhi kar sakta. Chi Rawte..!!! Shame on u..!!!!

Arjun: Shame on me..???? No shame on u Rathod... Meri phool jaisi behen tujh jaise kamine ke liye brat rakh rahi hai aur sath sath ghar bache sab dekh rahi hai aur tu kya kar raha hai ha..!!! Yaha baith ke mujhe lectures mar rha hai.

Rathod: Ab main kya karu Maya mujhe koi kaam karne hi nhi deti.

Arjun: Woh karne nhi deti ya tu use karne nhi deta.

Rathod: Sale tujhe pata hai ki tu cmmnt apni behen aur uske pati par mar raha hai.

Arjun: Aur jab tu meri aur Rosh ke tym cmmnt krta tha tab kya...

Rathod suddenly saw Maya nd Riya at his cabin door. Arjun also sensed sumones presence. He also turned and shocked to see Riya.

Before anyone can say sumthing Riya came inside and placed a file on table.

Riya: Sir Mishra case ki file jo apne mangwayi thi. Aur koi kaam na ho to kya main aur maya jaye kuch kaam hai.

Rathod: Thik hai jao. Par kaam khatm kark ghar jaldi chale jana.

Maya: Sameer zara bacho ko...??

Rathod: Tum jao main pick kar lunga.

Both girls went out and now Arjun felt guilty for his tonge slip.

Rathod: kuch nahi woh samajhdar hai. Chinta mat kar.

After sometime...
Inside beauty parlour...

Liza: Wow..!!! Riya tumhari mehndi bahut khubsurat lagi hai.

Riya: Thanks liza... (In mind) par kya fayda jiske liye ye sab kar rahi hu wo hi mujhse pyar nhi karta. Mana ki humra rista anchaha hai. Par ab is riste ko nibhane ka man kr raha hai.

Liza: Anyway Maya Bhabhi kaha hai. Tum dono to sath me hi nikle the na...

Riya: Ha par raste me maya ko bacho ke school se call aya ki bacho ki tabiyat kharab hai to woh unhe lene school chali gayi.

Liza: Koi phone aaya tha unka..??


Riya: nhi... Call bhi kr rhi hu par lag nhi raha. Subah se uske phone me network prblem tha. Isliye woh bhi call nhi kar pa rhi hogi.

Scene shift to Kid's school.

Watchman: Rathod sahab bacho ko dundh rahe hai pr bacho ko to madam ji le gyi.

Rathod: Thik hai. (In mind) kamal hai ek bar batana deti ki baccho ko le ja rahi hu. Madam ko mujhe faltu me seher ke chakkar lagwana accha lagta hai. Aaj aisi class lunga ki sab bhul jaengi.

Scene shift to Aisha's place.

Someone knocked on her door. She opened it nd found him.

Aisha: Tum..??? Tum yaha kar rahe ho..??? Ab kaun sa mission ki info chahiye.

Samrat: Aisha i m sorry. Par main kya karta. Us waqt mujhe aisa karna pada warna tumhari jaan jo khatra tha.
Main jis saks je piche hu wo apne duamano ki kamzori par war karta hai. Aur tumhe safe rakhne ke liye main tumse dur gaya.

Aisha holds him by collor: ek baat yaad rakho Samrat main tumhari takat bana chahti hu tumhari kamzori nhi. Age se aisa sochna bhi mat.

Samrat kiss on her forhead: nahi karunga.
Ab bahar hi khada rakhogi ya ander bhi aane dogi.

Aisha: oh sorry. U knw wat maine tumhare liye karwachauth ka brat karne ja rahi hu.

Samrat: i love u aisha.

Aisha: love u too.

Scene shifts to Rathod's house.

Rathod: Maya ek cup coffee banana to. Sar me bahut dard hai.

Rathod: Maya.. ??? Maya..???

He searched whole house but no one is there. He thought she n his mom must hv gone outside for shopping.

Rarhod to himself: Maa bhi na ek no ki shopalohlic hoti jaa rhi hai. Ye 100 % maya ka kaam hoga. Paka maa ko lekar shopping nikal di hogi. Ye nahi socha hoga ki jab pati office se aaye to ghar par rahu. Usse romance kru.
Par nhi madam ko to pati k alawa sab kuch dikhata hai.


He tries her no. But it cmes switched off.

Rathod: Samar kitna bar bolna hoga ki mumma ke mobile par game mat khelo par nhi. Game khel khel kr battery kam kr deta hai. Aur charge me to yeh lagaengi nhi.


Suddenly door bell ring.

Rathod: lagata hai sab aa gaye.

He opens d door nd saw a courierman. He recieves courier and close d door.

Before he open it again door bell ring.

Rathod: Ahhh... Ek to sar dard kar raha hai aur koi coffe pilane wala nhi aur ye gate. Man kar rah hai ukhad ke rakh du. Na rahega gate aur na bajegi ghanti.

He opened d door and found Shree, chotu n arjun with lots of shopping bags and his mom with Riya n liza. He sighed n let dem get inside.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for continuing this story I just love it...awesome update...plz pm me when u update next part

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