Modern Day Akdha SS:- Kitani Mohabbat hai

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Warning:- "Pls don't kill me after this,Bye🤣"


Jodha entered the music store hopeful of finally getting what she was looking for.The Best collection of Kishore Kumar and Mohammad Rafi Songs,That would be the Most Precious gift She could give to her Baba!! Ya, That was what She called her uncle,Her mom's brother who was the offical guardian of her and her little sister Sukanya after the desmise of her parents.Jodha was just 8 then, too small,Still big enough to realize what She has lost,But Her Baba was there to take care of them,to be with them in all the phases of life,He was everything for her,Her father,mother and her mentor who taught her about music and singing.And today She wanted to make this father's day special for him by gifting him the Evergreen collection of Kishore Kumar and Mohammad Rafi songs,His all time favourites and make the day for him.She entered the shop and asked for what She wanted on the counter,But to her surprise,A voice demanded for the same thing just then,It was Jalal who was there to get the same collection of CD for his Mom and was surprised to hear the same thing from some stranger girl as well and both Jalal and Jodha stared at each other in surprise.Jalal wanted to make her Mom's day special as She was the only father and mother He had after his father left her for some other woman,How he hates that man!Jalal thought!!He don't believes in love,Such feelings only destroy lives and make a person weak.For him,It can only break people's heart nothing else.His Mom is his world and just bcoz of her constant support He is today the most succesful Businessman of India.And Today He was there to make his Mom's day special by gifting her all time favourite music collection to her and letting her know what She means to him!
Both Jalal and Jodha was staring at each other in surprise,And The Guy in the Counter looked at them confused.
Counter Guy:- "Mam and Sir,It Seems you both wants the same Thing."
His sound made them to look at him and They nodded.
"Ok Let me search out for it,This is the biggest store in Dehradun You'll surely get it here."
He said assuring them both as He went to check out for the CD's.And came back after some 10 minutes.
"Actually There is only 1 CD left of this collection.So Only one of you can get it."
Both Jalal and Jodha were shocked.
Jodha:- "Fine I asked first for it and I'm buying it."
She said in an demanding manner.
Jalal stared at her in anger.

Jalal:-"Excuse me,You asked first didn't gave it your copyright."
They both gave killing looks to each other.

Jalal to(Counter Guy):- "I'll pay you triple of the original price.But This CD is going with me."
He said in an authoritative tone.

Jodha(shocked and angry):- "Hey Mr.That's unfair,You can't do that."

Jalal(smirking):- "Really?!Let the owner of the store decide then!!"
He said and winked at her playfully while Jodha fumed in anger.

The counter guy called the owner of the store telling him the situation and as It was clear enough,They sold the CD to Jalal viewing their profit and mumbled an apology to Jodha telling her to leave her name and contact no As They'll inform her as soon as that CD will be available again.

Jalal smirked at Jodha:- "See how fair that was!"
He said and left the store leaving a fuming Jodha behind.
She rushed immediately behind him and blocked his way as He was entering his lavish Black BMW and shut the door.
Jalal(fuming):- "What the Hell?!"
He said and before he could react further Jodha grabbed the CD from his right hand and tore it to pieces in front of his eyes.
Jalal was first shocked but then He grabbed her by the arm.
"How dare you?!"He asked in rage.
"Now It is fair enough And serves you right."She said this time with a grin on her face.
Jalal fumed more seeing her audacity,No one dares to speak with him like that.
He brought his face closer to her,his grip became more tight on her arms.
"You'll pay for that."He said looking deep into her eyes.

"We'll see!" She replied staring back into his eyes before pushing him away and releasing his hurtful grip from her arms.

Jodha turned and rushed away after that but her anklet from her left leg got loosened near his car in the process which She didn't noticed, but Jalal saw it and picked it up.
He stared at her anklet and smirked devilishly,
"You are going to have a hard time now...Miss Chanchan!!"
He said to himself and went inside the store again,Getting the name and contact no. of Miss Chanchan and then finally left in his car!"
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Jodha got the call in evening,The Biggest industrialist of Dehradun and entire India,Mr.Jallaludin Mohammed had made his manager call her,inviting her for interview the next day.She couldn't believe it.She had long back applied and filled the form and finally She got the interview call.Jodha was way too happy with it after the unfortunate incident with that stranger.Finally a Great News.Jodha aspired to become a big singer but till Sukanya didn't get qualified enough to get a job,She couldn't start her struggle.She needed to make sure her family was getting all that They needs.Even Her Baba retired 2 years back but Their pension or her small job combining was hardly good enough for Sukanya's education,It was her last year of MBA and They didn't had enough money to pay her fees.Jodha was determined to get the job at any cost.She told her Baba and Sukanya about it and They all celebrated and rejoiced in joy hoping She'll get the job."
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The next morning Jodha waked up early and got ready quickly.She prayed to her Kanha to make her get the Job and help her in her big day and then took her Baba's blessings and left for the interview.
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In Jalal's office,It was Jodha's turn for the interview.(Imagine their attires as you want as I'm really bad in describing that😆)
She knocked at the cabin and He called her in.
She noticed the cabin was as grand as a King's Chamber.Everything was neatly organized.She was impressed and could tell The owner of the cabin was a strict and disciplined personality.She saw him sitting in his chair facing his back to her.
"So You are miss Jodha Sharma.!!"
She heard him saying.
Jodha was taken aback with his voice,She was sure She heard him before somewhere.

As She was silent,He asked again,
"I asked you something!"He said a bit stern this time.
"Yes...Yes Sir."She replied getting out of her trance.
"You may have a seat."He told her and She followed hesistantly.

Jalal was smirking all the while,enjoying every bit of this.And It was time for more fun,He thought asking some questions from her and then told Her She was selected.All The while He made sure He wasn't turning around and didn't let her to see his face just yet.Jalal gave her the contract papers for job of his personal secratary,And Jodha readed just first two pages and signed them excitedly just how He expected as her instant reaction.

"Thankyou so much Sir,I assure You,You'll not be disappointed."Jodha said expressing her gratitude.

Now That was time for the Big Moment,Jalal thought getting up from his seat,
"Ofcourse I wont' be"
He said smirking and turned around shocking the hell out of her.Jodha couldn't believe what just happened.
"You!"
That's all She managed to utter in her extreme state of shock.

"Sir...!!!Call me Sir...!!Forgetting your manners now!!Aren't you?!"He said sarcastically,smirking at her.

"This Can't be true!"She said staring up at him.

"Ofcourse It is Miss Jodha...!!Now get ready for your job!!!"He said with an evil smile playing on his lips.

Jodha got up from her seat and bursted out verbally at him.
"No Way I'm doing this job,That too with a Man like you who think The whole world is his property and He can buy whatever He want from his money.But I'm not a property you can buy Mr.Jalalludin Mohhamed...!!No way!!!!!
I'm leaving your office,Right Now!!"

She declared and turned around when,
"Seems You Forgot the Contract Miss Jodha."
He said calmly making her to stop and turn again.
"What?!What do you mean??!"

"According to the terms of contract,You can't leave this job for 1 year Now and in any case you want to,You will pay 20 lakhs to My company only then you can resign and If you doesn't pay the money, I can do a legal case on you on the basis of contract and You'll be behind bars."

Jodha was shell shocked hearing this."He can't be serious!"She thought with disbelief.

"But There was no such term in the contract then..."
She was cut-shorted by Jalal,
"Yes The First few pages didn't,But last two pages did mentioned it,Only If you readed that long."
He gave some papers to her.

"This is the copy of Original documents,Check it for your statisfaction."He said smiling as He sat on his seat again.

Jodha went through them and was shocked.He was correct,indeed.

"I can't beilieve it,You tricked me into all this.What the Hell do you want from me?!"
She said shouting her lungs out at him.

"Lower that tone of yours!!!,"He said getting up and walking near closing the distance between them,He get very near to her face and continued looking straight into her eyes.

"This is My Office not your home or street where You'll shout like a maniac!!Only I have right to scream or shout and do anything as I wish here!!!Do you understand that??!"

He almost roared at her,Jodha was for a moment only but first time got scared in her life.But surpassing that weak moment of fear She asked him looking into his eyes,

"What do you want from me??!"

"Remember I told You,You'll pay for those misdeeds of yours!!!So Now you'll...!!by working for me.!!"

"You are indeed a Psycho!"She said directly now,without fearing even his anger.

Jalal laughed a bit and leaned near more close to her at that, making Jodha's breath to get caught in her throat,He leaned near her ear and whispered,
"Get ready to see Many shades of Craziness now...Jodha.!!"
He said in a dangerously seducting voice making her shiver.
Jalal slowly backed away from Jodha giving her some space to breathe.
"Get to Work Now!"
"Now?!"
"Yes,Your job starts from today!"
"I had to inform at home too!!"
"Go and Call them now and then Meet me here at cabin,I'll tell your list of work for today!!"

She just nodded and left the cabin.

"Welcome to Hell...Miss Chanchan."Jalal said and smirked.
He couldn't gift his mom the perfect gift bcoz of her,And now He had to make sure She pays the price.

P.S.
Ok Friends,I was planning to write a Valentine OS and take part in forum's OS contest.😆But I'm way too bad for that and The story was way bigger for me to capture it all in a OS.😆So I thought to turn it in a SS.
Again Kitani Mohabbat hai is Name of My One of Most fav shows everrr,Used to air on NDTV Imagine,I took the theme of Arjun-Arohi as I was missing them alot and Dehradun is related to My another most fav show Ever Pkyek.😳 😆But I wanted to write this merged theme story on My Akdha only.🤣
Ok The start is way too silly and illogical I know,Pls Don't try and find logic here pls.😆Tell me If you like it I may continue or else I'll leave.😳Thanks.🤗
And Not sending any PM's for it now,May be I'll do later.😳 😆 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG 75 views,1 like and No comment?!Atleast tell Me how horrible it was,So I don't dare to write again!!!😭 😭
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nice 😃 please continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha_33

nice 😃please continue...


Thanks.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one...cont soon...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous update... loved it so much..
You r a good writter.👍🏼
What happen next...Waiting for the next one
Continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akdhadeewaanii

nice one...cont soon...😛


Thanks dear.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel-

Fabulous update... loved it so much..
You r a good writter.👍🏼
What happen next...Waiting for the next one
Continue soon



Thankyou sho much yaar.😃 😳 🤗
I'm glad you liked it.😳 😆
Will continue soon.😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please do PM me for the next updates love this miss jodha a lot
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Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

please do PM me for the next updates love this miss jodha a lot


Thanks Bhavya.😃 😳 🤗
Will pm you.😳
Miss Jodha means what you reffering to?!😕 😆

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