~I know its too late but I want you to stay~ Kriyaansh One shot - Page 4

Originally posted by: kreya204

Superb!!!

Kriya n rey both were in a relationship! A beautiful one!!
Bt it ruined due to fyts! Dose fyts dat make a relationship stronger can also do damage to a grt extent! N dats what happened to dese!!!

Bt nw dey regret it! N in der regrets dey regret der attitude towards d oder! N nt der decision of being in a relationship!!

Everyone has a wall around dem n only few ppl knw d way to break it! Kriya did break it! Bt after d breakup he made a wall stronger dan d previous one! He too wants her to break it n regain his trust bt he is scared! To trust her once more! To let her in once more!! Its nt easy for him too!!

Beautifully described!! N dats just y i cud write wat i wrote above!! Its just amazing!! Love it!!

Originally posted by: Incandescence.

This was mind blowing Re. Extremely beautifully written. I just loved how u showed their pains so beautifully. How much they were in need of each other, But it was late enough, I just loved how you wrote their individual POV's and their mind talks in the end. That part was like Kill me! :') This is one Great write up dear.
Awesome 🤗

Originally posted by: -spongy-

well you killed this one

seriously

it was amazing. their emotions were so well handled and so well thought.

nice

well written 👏

thanks for the PM

do write more

Originally posted by: sun_flower60

u wrote it beautifully...loved it...great job...

👏🤗

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

wooo its wow os dear👍🏼

U portrayed it sooo beautifully<3

song selection ...perfect 👍🏼

loving it <3