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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW...what a updt...
loved it...jst read it...lovely...
taani is waitng for rey...bt rey is not thr...
love rey's care for taani...and wht a answer he gave to shikha...awsome...
rey and taani's eqation is lovely...cant wait...pls updt asap...already 4 pages ho gaye hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aagayi lambu comment karne sab updates ke liye..
First cs super se upar hai 😃
Part 1 haaye mein toh firse taarey ke frndship ki relation par fida hogayi 😊
They really have awesome twosome chemistry 😳
Aur Rey kitna naughty hai hamesha ki tarah 😆 😆
On d whole part 1 was amazing describing their lovely frndship and at office 😃
Ab part 2
Oh God taani ko kese farak nahi padegi ofcourse padegi aur Rey toh mahir hai usse jaane mein 😃
And taani getting distracted. By cing Rey nd shikha together 😆
Par actual fact toh kuch aur hai 😛
Ab toh Rey koi plan kar raha hai ofcourse 😆
And taani going to feel insecurity 😃
Waiting for d next part 😛
Story is on track 😆 😆
Loving dis work 😛
Keep going di u r amazing iss baar koi fact nahi huhh
Aage ke updates se roz aapki fact honi chahiye ha 😆
I love it do continue di 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome continuation of khadoos and moosibaat
part i depicted their frdship and dependence on each other
rey's care for taani

even ch 1 described their lovely frndship and at office too suporting each other
but ch -2 sikha's no was given to rey by taani
but taani was anxiously waiting for him
some where rey's absence was disturbing taani
taani ko kese farak nahi padegi of course padegi jab Rey uske paas nahi hai
aur khaas kar kisi aur ke saath hai
And taani getting distracted.
but the actual fact toh kuch aur hai
rey's plaN TAAni's insecurity was lovely to watch
Waiting for d next part
Story is loving and the track is awesome
again i will be waiting in weekends to read ur update
and not to forget loved boss 's reaction after knowing taarey's fight
his bp increases with their fight

loved it lacchuu

Edited by taani.priya1997 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww Taani is jealous
And Rey, what is he upto???
Kissing that girl hand lol, poor Taani ;)
Lovely update

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Posted: 11 years ago
Super..omg some 1 is burning...😆 Yes taani is jealous n Rey he kissed dat dum girl hand... Den taani n Rey both said to kaka d same thing...😆 I loved dis update ..update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
its jst a perfect story going on..
i hv read all ur previous wrks.. n i luv the season 1 n goa one specially..
i guess this wud be the nxt one to be added in my favs..
continue soon ..
n do pm me plz..

ps - since i hv tym constraints n exams nearing.. i wudnt be able to comment long n frequently till june..
so wenevr i lyk ur update plz consider it as a comment...
bt plz pm me for further updates too.. coz m really excited for this one.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waaw..
Kya update hai!!
Taani angry on rey for coming home late..!!!
Hahahah..!
Taani ko satane ke liye shikha ko kiss kiya..!!!
Lol..!!
Taani ne kya mssg kiya..!?
Pleaee update soon..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved it a lot..
do update soon and pm
cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
TAAREY FF-EHSAAS-PART 3


Hey guys,
Thanks for all the comments,likes n pms..
Hope u will like this update...
Enjoy Reading...


OFFICE-

Boss tuk up d receiver-Rey in my office now
Rey-Heya boss wassup?
Boss-grap the file reports on d deal taani is working on n get on work now..
Rey was surprised..
Rey-wht s happening boss, u alryt?
Boss- ryt now, NO!!!
kyunki tum log mujhe mere marne ke umar se pehle hi upar pahunchaloge,
so i hve to do something abt it ryt?

Rey-kiske baare main marne ke umar ke baare main..
Boss-i think tht would my leasts concern nw coz tum log haina mujhe maarne keliye..
Rey-ur wish is my command..
Boss-waah kya baat hai,employe ho to tum log jaisa..
anyway do what i say,u r working opposite taani n this tym n rey its professional,
Taani has always ben workholic n thorough professional n u knw u hve been lucky..

Rey-whats it boss,i mean me working against taani..
Boss-Actually clients want two perspectives n they want to c different somethng this tym n i was planing to let go taani alone but board has decided thr will be two teams ,that is one will be taani n her interns d other will be urs...
Rey-boss main taani ko,u knw she is working her brains out on this to get ths deal
Boss-so u too should work head ff,now rey,u can go..

Rey (yeh boss ko kya hua hai)
Bos--REy
REY-Yes sir...
Boss-ISS BAAR I WANT U TO WIN THS DEAL SO DNT LET ME DOWN..

Rey walked out n looked at taani's cabin..
Rey-am sory moosibat..
n taani looked at him thru d glass window n rey looked away..
TAAREY EYELOCK...

Swayam-u really think these two will ever sort ths out..
sharon-oh please we hve seen worser than this fyt btw them ryt..
swaym-but that was for no reason..
vicky-n ths tym too..
swayam-really(everyone luks at shikha with judgemntal eyes)

Shikha looked at taani n walked to her cabin..

Shikaha-taani...
taani-ha shikha,come in..
Shikha-luk i need to talk to u..
Taani-not nw shikha,wll talk over lunch..
Shikha-no i need to talk nw..(She raised her tone)
Taani-Hey watch ur tone K...(n she luks a her interns n asks them to leave..).
Taani asks her to sit..

Shikha- See taani i know u r evryone's favourite n u r ths chick from abraod with super cool college degree n i knw u r boss's n board's fav negotiator in d deals n i knw u r rey's bff n al..but i want u to stay away from rey k..

Taani gets up..

Shikha-Basically u r d rudest person i hve ever met so i dnt care all tht u hve k,
maybe u got it thru ur luks n all u knw what i mean..
N rey! i dnt knw what he sees in u he just goes on n on talking abt u..
n u hve these dumbest interns so how come u get all thtese work done,
u hve sme dealing with d boss too..huh..
so basically i dnt care who u sleeps wth but stay away from rey n asking
him to move in with me so he stays away from u...

Taani-shikha stand up please...

Swayam,sharon,Vicky n Rey luks thru d window..
Swayam-REy i think u shuld go in there..
Sharon-Rey seriously..
Vicky-its going to be a treat watch ths showdown..
Rey-yeah swayam,shikha is going to comeout all sweating thru her makeup..
Sharon-yeah i bet on 100 bucks with Rey..

Taani keeps d curtains down of her cabin with d remote moves to front n sits on d desk n ask shikha to sit..

Taani-
Listen u crack, i didnt sleep my way thru my college to sit here k,
i earned my grades,scholarships n went to london n worked 3 jobs to get an mba by working my brains out n not sleeping with my professors like u did ryt ,
oh no u didnt ryt!!! ur father with his money bought u d degree too n
Ths job is just a tym pass for u ryt!!
so that ur father could marry u off to sme rich guy by telling tht u worked
in an mnc ryt,but for me its my life,
i dnt hve a rich father lyk u hve ,
I dnt get to spend lakhs on my shoes but u knw whatever i hve is what i hve
earned !!
i dnt hve bmw,i but i own a skoda whch i bought it
with my own money n i dnt hve a 4 bhk in bombay
but i do pay d rent of my flat with my money n
i dnt hve butlers n 10 servants to look after me
but i hve my kaku to go home to who will be making me fav coffe n khichdi n
i hve d most important thing in d world(luking out) n tht is rey...
u knw i could just walk out
of ths room n tell Rey to leave u now n he would never ask my" why"
n he could just tell u tht he dumped u ryt now n i could just tell boss to fire u now n he
also wouldnt ask me the reason n
u were talking abt my interns na,u knw they may b little dumb
but they respect me n they do know what a boss n
employe should be n not lyk u,
everything is not abt getting thru sleeping together u bi**ch

GET UP NOW..N U LIL CRACK HEAD DONT U EVER THINK I AM THT LIL OH THAT SILLY GAL, I AM TAANI,NOT ANYONE ELSE,SO THINK BEFORE U SPEAK TO ME LIKE THIS OR U WILL BE SWEATING THRU UR MAKE UP...
NOW STAND UP N GET OUT!!!!

Shikha walks out..
swayam-ohh lagtha hai kisi ko pet barke mila hai
sharon- n i am loving it seeing shikha's face..

Taani sat on her chair turned as her head was exploding with an headache...She might have blasted off shikha but her eyes were filled with tears..

Rey saw that her chair was turned backside..
Rey graped a botlle of water n tuk a pain killer from his bag n hand overed it to swayam...
Swaym-whats ths?
Rey-Go n give ths to her,she will be having an headache n rukh(hands over a sandwich packet,)
Kal se kuch khaaya nahi hoga...
Swayam-itna fhikhar hai toh khud jaake do na..
Sharon walks in-yeh donon ko koi samjha nahi saktha..tu rukh main jaake dekar aati hoon..


Sharon walk in..
Taani wipes her eyes n turns to front n smiles..
Taani-sharon
Sharon-kyun kisi aur expect kar rahi thi kya?
Taanni-nahi toh(juggles thru her files..
Sharon-That was an awesome blast u gave her..
Taani-u saw?
Sharon-ofcouse we were outside ur cabin n u seriuosly think we would miss tht..
Taani-sharon tum bhi na..
Sharon-woh sab baad main,hve ths tablet ..
Taani-yeh kiskeliye n (taani luks outside)
i mean hw do,i mean what
Sharon-nw shut up,hve ths pain killer,headache fur se gayab ho jaayegi k...
n hve ths sanDwich..
Taani-its not lunch tym..
Sharon-as if u eat at lunch time..
itna presure kyun daal rahi ho apne aap par..
Taani- yeh deal mere liye bahut important hai sharon..
Sharon-yeh deal nahi toh u will get other one na..so chill babe..
Taani-woh sab chod,sagai ki date fix ki tumhari aur swayam ki..?
SHARON-BAAT KO GHUMA MAT..
Taani-sharon(taani gets a call n she excuses herself n moves out)

At home-
Taani was making some phone calls,
are mujhe yeh saara samaan nek hi mahine andhar bejana hai n mere ghaadi
bhi..
By thn taani get a call..
taani-ha boss,what?
u did this purposefully na boss..

n she sits on her bed-par Rey aise kaise maan liya,usko pata hai mujhe yeh
deal kitne importnt hai,kuch bhi ho jaaye mujhe yeh deal chahiye...

AT NIGHT-IN THE TERRACE
Taani was siting n eating ice cream n..
taani was luking at stars n telling them-
woh n sab kuch
kuch hi dinon main
badal gaya hai na,
shayad main badal gayi,
main aur uske zindagi main aur nahi rukh sakti kyunki agar main rukha toh
usko koi nahi milega n
har koi mere tarah akela rehna nahi chahtha hai na...
meri zindagi ki faisla uske zingadi main
rukavat nahi daal nahi saktha hai na..

i knw but i need to move away from here,chahe iskeliye mujhe rey ke against
yeh deal jeetna kyun na pada,mujhe uske keliye yeh jeetna hai...

Rey luks out from d baclony-
usko samballena ,pata nahi kal mujhe uske against dekhkar..woh..
pata nahi..
bas i need her to win ths..
coz she deserves it more,
usko uski zindagi main ba ek hi cheez se itne lagwaav hai aur woh hai uska kaam n baacki logon ki tarah she dnt hve
anythng besides her work..

Boss,swayam,sharon in d office-
Swayam-Boss ap aisa kaise kar saktha hai..
Sharon-apne un donon ko aamne samne kar diya..
Bos-listen sharon,i needed to do ths ,coz tum logon ke tah mujhe bhi un donon ki fikhar hai k..u r like my kids k..
Listen to me what happened..
Yesterday night i got a msg from taani...
N i asked her to come meet me in the morning...

Boss-Whats s the message all about Taani,tumne toh raat ko hi mujhe almost cardaic arrest de diya!!!
Seriuosly have you lost it?
Taani-I dont think so boss...
Boss- oh really but i really think so taani..Mere baat mano tum na thodi din keliye chutti le lo...
Taani- Boss with due respect,i am not asking u any favour, i am asking my
deserved transfer,i dnt mind it being any post
Boss- But taani
Taani-Sir
Boss-ok taani,u crack this deal u r working on and i will hve talk with board n will hve on the list for d next transfer
Taani-oK SIR..

TAANI TURNED N CLOSED HER EYES.

Boss- kya baat hai..?
Taani turned n looked ta boss n told- i got bored n i need some adventure so i am running away from here( n winked..)
N boss-aap iske baare main kisi ko na baaton toh accha hai..N this please do this as a favour for me...

Swayam-toh ab
Sharon-Rey dont know abt this so he will be giving this presntation no importance at all..
Boss-so
Swayam-i think boss,u made it complicated..
Boss-ya right,as if yeh sab karke mujhe bahut maza aata hoga na..
Sharon-boss,taani will win ths deal n u have to transfer her TO SINGAPORE..

SWAYAM,SHARON N BOSS- AB??



Morning-
Taani was outside her flat waiting for a taxi as she has given up her car to sell..
Rey comes out of the parking lot with his car n he aw her out..
Rey-taani bahar is waqt kya kar rahi hai,ise toh meeting main hona chahiye?
Rey stops his car in front her..
Taani(almost shocked)
Rey-yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
Taani-woh main
Rey-andhar aa late ho rahi hai tu..
Taani gets in..
They avoid looking at each other n rey sees that she has not put the seat belt...
Rey-taani seat belt pehno
Taani was luking outside the window n she didnt listen..
Rey slows down the car n tries to put the seat belt for her..
Rey was about to pull d belt,taani sees him(Taarey eyelock)
Rey moves further,first time they have come close..
Taani realised they will be kissing in a second,she opned d door n got out...
Taani catched a cab..
Rey realised - what d hell was i doing..?
He hits his fist on d steering..

Office-
Meeting starts..
Taani"s Presentation had started inside the conference room..
Rey comes..
Swayam-kahaan hai tu..
One of rey's interns comes to Rey..
Rey-yeh kya hai?
Intern-Taani maam ne diya..
Rey opened the file..
It was a a presentation file with a pendrive for Rey..
Rey looked Taani- yeh
Swayam-i know moosibat bi na
Rey-HEY (in a rasied tone) only i can call her that..
Sharon-woh sab baad main decide karlo,andhar jao ab tum..

Swayam,sharon,Vicky-Ab kya hoga?


PRECAP-
Who will get the deal?
Rey or taani?
Will rey get to know what taani is upto?
Will she leave?
Will they realize their importance to each other before its too late..?

TOO MANY QUESTIONS ONE ANWER-WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE...😆😆😆

Hope u all loved this update..
Hoping that i am not boring u all,
will look forward to all comment n like..
I have next update ready,so if u all give my 5-6 page of comment oon,will post it by evening or morning...
Please Please do tell me how is the update is guys...

P.s-silent readers comment main ek smiley bhi chalega mujhe...😉😆😆


Edited by Lachu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow taani luv rey 😉 nice
N for rey she is ready to go
Away from him 😊 haaye ya
Pyaar n she ask her boss to transfer
Her if she win dis deal 😔 n rey ready
For dis deal 😔 luv tht taani show tht sh..
Her right place n aww rey care for taani so
Much haaye luv it n taani is all set to leave Mumbai
N haaye rey was going to kiss taani but taani went
Out 😔 anyways who will win did deal 😊 thanks for
PM n update soon plz yaar u update after long time 😊
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago

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