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Posted: 11 years ago
TAAREY FF-EHSAAS-PART4

Hey guys,
Thanks for all the comments,
Hope u all will like this update,
Enjoy Reading...

CLICK HERE FOR THE BACKGROUND MUSIC

Evening-
Boss was looking outside his cabin.
Taani comes in..
Taani-Sir,i got the mail.

Next Monday ko report karna hai mujhe..
Boss-Khush ho tum taani??
Taani(turned to Luk outside d cabin thru d window)-of course sir,mera pehla achievement hai boss..
Boss-achchaa but u dnt seem to be..
Taani-woh itni dinon Ki daud Ki wajas se,ab jaake rest milegi..
So boss,gotta go n boss aap Rey ko
Boss-yaad hai mujhe..
Taani was about to leave,boss called her..
Boss-tum jaana nahi chahthi hai na isliye u gave ur back up file to him ryt??
Taani- woh,i knew he got to know that he was assigned by in d last minute so
Boss- n u knw what usne woh use bhi nahi kiya kyunki
woh tumhe jeetana chahthe the..

Taani-aap kuch bhi bolo sir,mujhe
Boss- i knw tumhe farakh nahi padega..
Par ek baar yaad Rakho tum taani,
tum kabhi na kabhi dhakh jaoge yeh bagne Ki wajas se
tab tumhare pass tab koi nahi hoga..
Tum jao taani,jahaan jaana jao,
Singapore jao tum,
yeh Abhi mail karti hoon tumhara transfer mere taraf se..

Rey comes in- transfer
Taani hears his voice n closes her eyes..
Rey became pale with white..
Taani turned n luked at him- Rey
Mere baat

Rey showed his hand n left d cabin..
Taani closed her eyes-nahi taani tum ro nahi sakti..u r strong,u r tough..
Taani goes out of the cabin..
Taani Luks every where but Rey was not there..
Taani picks her bag n goes out of the office..
Night-
She drips her bag on the terrace,removes her heels,ties her hair n opens d ice cream tub..
N she stares at d stars..
Rey comes with a album..
N sits besides her..
Taani-rey
Main tumhe
Rey smiles n keeps his hand over her shoulder n keeps her head on his shoulder-ssshhh moosibat

Taani was surprised!!!
Rey opens d buk-
Yaad hai yeh album hum ne baanayi Thi..
He opens d first page -
FlashBack-
11 years back..
At school hostel.
A girl was sitting on d terrace luking at stars ,a boy comes there..
Boy-kaun hai wahaan
Girl gets scared n started to run but d boy catches her...
It was taani n d boy was Rey..
Rey-tumhe baagne Ki zaroorat nahi hai
Taani-woh
Rey-tum yahaan baito,mere wajas se jaane ke zarrorat nahi hai..
main kisi ko kuch nahi boloonga..
Aao,yahan baito..
Taani-oh hello,main kisi se nahi darthi n yeh sympathetic Luk mujhe mat do..

Rey-tum pehle hi decide Ki main tumhe sympathy de rahi hoon..(n he sits)

Taani-sab aisa hai tum bhi aise ho,sab Ki tarah..
Rey pulls her down-sit..
Taani-how dare u
Rey-sshh,chillane Ki zaroorat nahi hai..
Aur ek baat sun lo teek se,main tumko koi sympathy nahi de rahi hoon k..
Main kyun do,Jo mujhe khud log dete hai huh..
Taani-watever.
Rey-dosti karoge,mujhse..
Taani-kyun,tumhe mere se baat karne main sharam nahi aati
Rey-kyun? Tumne kapde nahi pehne kya..
Ye Lo ji,tumne toh pehna hai !!
Taani started laughing n Rey smiles..
Rey-haat dhuk raha hai mera..jaldi haat do ya wapas le loon.
Taani caught his hands..
Dosti karoge?

FLASHBACK END!!

Taani started crying..
Rey felt bad,he cupped her face-ssshhh mosibat..
Taani-kadoos kayinka rulaa diya na..
Rey-is main bhi mere hi galti hai..

Taani-aage padthe haina..
Taani-kya hua..
Rey-main bolta hoona..
Taani 3 saal pehle tumhe tumhari sagaayi ke din tumhe bhagakkar yahaan lekar aaya tha main..nahi tumne mujhe bhagwaaya tha...
cn u imagine u came into my house n asked me to come with u on d day b4 ur sagaayi n i actually packed my bags n came with u in ths city..
n we got a job,our flats,we bought our car together,our roadtrips..
Taani-Rey
Rey-main tumhe kuch nahi bholoonga taani ..tab bhi main tumse koi sawwal nahi poocha tha aaj bhi tumse kuch nahi kahoonga..
tumhari chehre pe ek smile keliye main duniya idar ki udar kar sakti hoon,woh tum yahaan ho,london main ho,new york ya phir singapore..
mom ke baad sirf tum ho mere zindagi main...
n packing main help karoon..ruko maina packers se boxes lee aati hoon n phir tumne ticket buk ki..tumne abhi tak buk nahi ki taani,ruko main karti hoon ..
n he was abt to to walk away she caught his hand..
Taani-hey kadoos...
tumhe itna kya jaldi hai...ek kaam karoge mera...
ruko phne do..
Taani calls someone
Taani-its taani...aap mere liye ek favour kar doge..
Bos-kya hua?
Taani-mere transfer kisi aur ko de doge plse..
Rey-Boss-what?
Taani-aisa kaise javoon main apne dost ko chodkar...
woh bhi silly reason se..
ab toh aap khuh honge na..
Boss-khush kya main toh party doonga kal..
yeh deal ke wajas se bhi aur tumhare na jaane ke wajas se bhi..

Taani-bye sir..

Rey-yeh mere wajas se
Taani-nahi re,tumhare liye jaane ke decision li thi main,
Rey-taani aaj main tumhe ek baat promise karthi hoon,
jab tak tumhe koi nahi mil jaata tab tak main settle nahi honge teek hai..
Taani-rey
Rey-its final u get hitched first thn will think abt it,
if u dont i wont get hitched k..agree..
TAANI SMILES...
Rey-ab ek hug de moosibat,jab se mere life maina aayi ho tab Se mooSibat ban kar rahi ho ab aadat hogayi hai re teri..
Taani-kadoos kayinka teek se tarif bhi nahi hota tere se
Rey-ab chal
Taani-mere liye ek kaam karoge,mera car wapas di laado na,
oh jaane ke chakar mainE bej daala..
Rey-are tera naukar hoon kya
khudh jaake le lo na..
Taani-jaa main lekar aati hoon..
Rey-itni raat ko
Taani-tune toh kaha..
Rey-are aata hoon baba,kya moosibat hai yaar..

Taani winks at stars..
n a stars shines too bright to wink back at her..
(guess taani has someone up in the ky ryt)

Morning-
Rey-taani udo..
Taani-aaj saturday haina n aaj mera koi meeting nahi hai,so sone do na..
are aaj swayam n sharon ki sagaayi hai,bhool gayi..
Taani-ha kadoos yaad hai mujhe(turning to other side n covering her face with d blanket)
Rey pulled it over n taani pulled it back n rey came crashing on her...

TAAAREY EYELOCK-

Taani-naalyak chod na
Rey-are tune abhi tak dress bhi kardi nahi hogi,hopping le chalti hoon,aana..
Taani-are maine ek gown le liya tha na last month woh pehnloongi..
Rey-haanji,mujhe pata tha ,tum gown lekar pahunch jaoge..
are khabardaar agar woh gown pehna toh,are sagaayi hai...
Tumhe traditional stuff pehna chahiye..
Taani wokes up-wht d hell?
Rey-naa sarre ya suit?
Taani-donon bhi nahi,saree,woh 6 meter ki cloth se ghutan hoti hai mujhe n
woh suit n duppata ,pata nahi uss dupaate ke wajas se girti rahti hooon main..
isse aacha mere gown hai..
Rey-tu ud rahi hai ki nahi,aur udaake le chaloon...


PrECAP-
They were in a inch closer,as he tied her dori,with each knot she came more closer to his chest..
Finally she looked at him...He looked at her...
They came closer n closed their eyes...

Okay,guys,i knw update thodi short hai,will give an update in a few days coz next weekened i cant update..So please tell me hws the update..
Hope u all liked it..
Do give comments n hit like..
Mujhe ek smiley bhi chalega...😉😆😆


part5


Edited by Lachu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
taarey convo was nice
flashback was good so this way taarey had friendship
rey convinced taani to not leave
tg taani is not going
taarey are together now
taarey morning was little bit funny but i really loved their bonding
precap is superb
continue soon
Edited by ....pooja.... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
finally she s not going
n taarey s together
thats awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
rey convinced taani wow
they are really best frnds

traditional stuff taani ke liye headache
hehehehehehehe

luved their bonding

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
dil khus kar diya yr...thank god taani nehi ja rahi hai...aur kaise jaygi...kadoos ke hote huye musibat usse dur jahi nehi sakti...loved it sooo much yr...
rey understand her so much...past scene was really amazing...
taarey's boss is awsome yr...taarey eyelock is so cute...
OMG! what a precap...pls updt yr...wait nehi hoga jyada...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
finally taani is not going
TR flashback is nice
taani run from her engagement
precap is intresting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG finally taani is not going. Rey atlast mana hi liya apni mosibat ko.
Amazing update dear
flshback were really nice

Precap seems interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
thank god she is not going
taarey part was superb
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayee... lachu..
kya update tha...
khadus n moosibat ..
luv dem ye..
taani jane se ruk gayi...
n precap k liye to m damn excited ...
update soon plz
n is bar i mean it jaldiii
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely story... continue n do pm me...

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