AkDha OS ' SOUL MATES FOREVER '

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Hey Everyone 🤗 I am back with another OS ... This OS is a different one from the one i wrote earlier ! In this OS both Jodha and Jalal pass through many stages of hardships and troubles ... Lets read ... & if u like it please hit likes and comment 😃


Jalaluddin Mohammad a very successful Mughal Emperor , the one who started ruling Hindustan since he was just 13 .. Everyone called him cruel but truly he wasn't ! He was a person who loves everyone with pure and sincere heart ! He fell in love with Jodha at the age of 15 ...

Jodha Bai the daughter of Raja Bharmal .. As mentioned above everyone thinks that Jalal was a cruel Emperor all the Rajistani's hate him ... But no one knows about the truth .. And another biggest truth which can move the whole world with shock ! Jodha & Jalal both love each other since 15 years of age ...

Jalal did not have any fear of marrying Jodha but ... Jodha thinks " Hum apse vivah zaroor kerna chahte ha .. Lakin apne bapusa , maa sa aur dadi sa ke ashirvaad se ! Hum chahte hain ke woh hamare vivah ma khushi khushi hum dono ko ashirvad de aur unki marzi bhi shamil ho " till now this wasn't seemed to come true ...

One beautiful evening both decided to meet alone and share some beautiful moments together ! Jalal arrived early ... He was waiting for her since half an hour , it was not almost more than 1 hour he was waiting ...
Jalal " Kya ho gaya ha ... Jodha abhi tak nahe aye " and at that very moment he heard horse steps coming towards him .. he knew it was Jodha .. and he expected her to come happily .. But it was different ... She looked so sad and confused .. tears rolling down from her eyes .. Jalal couldn't control himself anymore and he ran there to her ... with amazement he said " Jodha ! kya hua ? kyun ro rahe ho tum ? " ...
Jodha with sad tone and crying " Jalal ... woh ... woh " Jalal replied " kya ? kya woh ? bolo Jodha .. hamara dil band ho raha ha bolo kya hua ? "
Jodha said " hamare baapusa ne ... hamara vivah ... teh ker diya ha ... "
That moment was a shocking moment for Jalal ... he couldn't bore this anymore and with his mouth wide opened he said " Apka Nikah ! kiske .. kiske saath " ... Jodha replied " Suryabhan ke saath " ..

Jalal's heart broke in pieces but he knew if he would lost control over himself then who will control Jodha that is why he acts to be strong in front of her ... Giving her hopes he replied " Fikar mat karo Jodha ! Tum hamari ho ... aur hamari raho ge ! Duniya ke koi takat .. hum dono ko juda nahe ker sakte " he pushes his hand towards her face to clear her tears and said shaking his head for a no " aur royie mat ! Rote toh buzdil ha ... aur hamara pyaar sacha ha ! aur jeet hamare pyaar ke hogi " .. Jodha was not hoping that Jalal will do anything but he won't let her be of anyone else !

They made a plan and were waiting for the day of the marriage to come
now ... 4 more days were left in Jodha & Suryabhan's wedding ...
Suryabhan was not a good man .. he has always kept bad eyes on Jodha
One night he came in Jodha's room ... she was sleeping .. and was unaware of his arrival in the room ...

On the other hand , Jalal wasn't able to sleep that night .. his heart was beating so fast and his six senses were saying that something is going to happen ... Jodha is in trouble ... Without caring for what will happen with him when he will enter at her palace he started his way to Jodha ... And soon reached the palace ...

Surya went near to Jodha to kiss her but suddenly Jodha opened her eyes and saw him very near to her , she pushed him back with afraid look ...
She saw it was Surya she cried " Suryabhan .. aap yaha ! " He said with bad tone " Ab hamara vivah hone jaa raha ha aur " while saying this he moved his hand towards her shoulder and caressing it .. Jodha pushed his hand back and said " Aap ... aap chale jaiye yahan se warna acha nahe hoga " ..
Suryabhan locked her between the wall and himself and said " Kya acha nahe hoga ? " ..

He teared her sleeves and said " ab bataiye Rajkumari ji .. kya hoga " Jodha was crying hiding her sleeves ... In her heart she was crying and calling Jalal " Shehnesha ... humein bacha le jiye " .. Jalal on the other hand got feelings that Jodha is calling him .. and he went in the Kaksh and saw Suryabhan been bad with Jodha he shouted with anger " Suryabhan " ..
Jodha opened her eyes and a happy smile came on her face seeing Jalal ...
Suryabhan turned back and looked at Jalal ... " Mughal saltanat ka Shehnesha yahaan ! tumhari himmat kesay hui yaha ane ke " ...
Jalal moved towards him .. Making his punch replied " Tumhari himmat kesay hui Hamari Jodha ko haath lagane ke ! " Suryabhan was amazed ..
he looked at Jodha and then at Jalal and continued this look ... Jalal was not able to control his anger any more and punched him .. he felt on the floor with a voice " ouchhh ! " Jodha went and hugged Jalal tightly ... squeezing him more nearer to him ... Soon everyone was awake and they come here .. they were amazed to see Jodha and Jalal hug ...

Suryabhan said " Yeh dekhiye Raja saa ! Apki beti ke kaale ker tooth " Jodha looked at him with anger on her face ... he started again " apne ashiq ke saath pata nahe kya kya ker rahe thi aur hum agaye toh is JALAL ne humein mara " Jodha said " Bus Suryabhan ! bus .. ek shabth aur nahe .. warna hum bhool jainge ke aap ek shehzade hai ... " she looked at her family , tears rolled down her eyes " Baapusa , maa sa .. yeh suryabhan hamare saath ... badtamezi ker raha tha aur humein Jalal ne bachaya ... " and she explained whole situation to her family ...

Her family trusted her most and were also very thankful for Jalal for coming at the right time to save Jodha .. and their love story wasn't hidden any more ... Finally Jodha's family decided that they will make Jodha and Jalal marry ... And so .. Their love was proved to be true ... and what Jodha wanted was also done ! her family's prayers were with them and happily they were wedded ... and Jodha was also accepted by the Mughals ...

So this was the story i was thinking to write ! I hope you all like it ! All surya fans don't mind it please .. its just an OS 😆

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unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Supeeerb update 👍🏼...thanx 4 d PM really 😊
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Awesome OS..!!

Per mehak tuney meri Suryabhan bad boy banadiya???

anyways i loved it ..!!

Thanks for the pm..keep writing :)

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Super Os ! Nice concept ! Loved it dear !! 🤗
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Unres:
Vowww
Super duuper excellent!!!!
I love how Jalal sixth sence worked
Really cute couple!!! I love the how see felt secured
Loved it
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Superb and beautiful OS.. :)
very different as well.. :)
thanks for the pm... :)
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very nice dear n thnx for PM...
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