THE SECOND SHADOW#2, chap 39 pg 43 new!! - Page 33

Originally posted by: ...anju...

@navi:
i thought andy updated.den realized dat it ur cmnt.anyways i really enjoyed reading ur cmnt.it was really funny.especially ur story.
@andy:
y cant u just write straight way without any complication. i mean simple stories .y u always makeuv a crimal.thank god there is one exception.usualy ur stories demands thinking rather than just enjoying.hmm usage of brain.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy hi navi😃... it's me again😆. was it? i thought it was someone else whom i knew I bet u got tired waiting for my comment to come🥱 ... but what to do - so many things just delayed me writing it. Anyways ... it's FINALLY done , hope u like it😳. i was shocked seeing its size, but i really loved it loads I'm sure that majority of my theories are wrong🤢 ... mainly because u love proving me wrong😉! i do, but ... we know what will happen in the future na

But before I start my actual comment - I would like to tell u a story😊 (Don't roll your eyes and what would you do if i roll???; just shut-up and read😡).

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Navina. She was nice, kind, loving ... basically - a wonderful person😳!!!!! cough cough!!!!😆 She had many friends ... but none of then were EXACTLY as she was😔. Then 1 day came a girl named Andrea , Andy for short😆. Beside their 5 year-age-difference ; they were duplicates of each other. Same LIKES/DISLIKES ... same mannerisms , same characteristics ... it wasn't long before both became BEST FRIENDS😳. 1 day , Navina started having terrible head-aches😭 ... and she couldn't understand why😕. The doctors told her to limit her dairy intake, and to stop spending so much time on her laptop ; also to dry her hair thoroughly whenever she washed it. She followed the doctors orders ... but the head-aches continued😔!!!! Suddenly she discovered the cause of her health problems 😉. IT WAS ANDY😡!!!!! U see , Andy used to write an SS, entitled THE SECOND SHADOW ... it was a thriller , of sorts and was full of mystery . Navina used to wreck her brains in trying to figure out Andy's story ; thus - she began suffering with migraines😭. Today, their friendship is hanging by a thread ... because NAVINA DOESN'T LIKE ANDY ANY MORE. and the continuation to the story

andy was heart broken when navina told her that she does not like her. she cried a lot. she had a great story as tss 2, but then as andy valued their friendship, she cut away alll mystery elements of tss 2 and made a ordinary story just for navina. but navina refuses to read it...

that is the present story navi😳

There my story is done ... it was short and sweet with a sad ending😆!!!!!!!! even mine has a sad ending😃 Basically , what I want to say is : "Andy - I really don't like u" !!!! how lovely!!! And I'm not just saying it for the heck of it ... i thought so😆 NOOO ... I'm saying it because I got valid reasons :

1. U turned an utterly handsome, strikingly gorgeous UdayVeer☺️, into a serial Killer. i like experimenting ans why not take the most handsome guy avilable??

2. U turned ME into a detective😒. that is a goood thing😳

3. U gave me head-ache upon head-ache upon head-ache😭. and i gave you headache balms in form ofLTHEO

4. U are turning Uday into a rapist🤢. did i?😲

5. Lastly ... u gave me SO MUCH HOME-WORK😡😡😡😡😡!!!!!!!!!! (I hate home-work and I loathe anyone that gives me home-work🤢). you know why i gave you the home work na?

I think 5 reasons are enough 😉. Why can't u write simple stuff am trying hard to write one , something like JoaW is that your definition for simple, because it aint for me!!!! ... I wouldn't need to use my brain so much😆!!!!! Okay I think I've stalled enough😉 ... time for the actual comment ... finallly😉

I've come to a conclusion - UDAY IS NOT A RAPIST!!!! umph!! lets wait to know the truth How did I arrive at this point , simple ... let's back-track😉. Uday became a cold-blooded assassin because his family was ruined . THAT traumatic incident turned him into a murderer. Being a hit-man was his profession. The first life he took , was for revenge. TAKING LIVES, became a pleasurable habit for him. But did he branch off into other criminal activities? Did he go into drug-smuggling OR embezzlement OR human-trafficking??? NO!!! He didn't😃. Would he suddenly become a RAPIST 😲?? NO WAY!!!! Not after his OWN SISTER was raped! he he he, time could change one man's perspective of life na😕

I strongly believe that HE WOULD NOT DO UNTO OTHERS AS WAS DONE UNTO HIM😃. I also think that U ARE JUST TRYING TO FOOL US😉. would I try to fool you'll??😕😆

Uday LOVED his "occupation" not loved, it was the thrill of doing things and escaping that made him do it ... and he was damn good at it! I'm sure that he would've continued KILLING PEOPLE ; even if he got caught and even if Manyata would've asked him to stop. BUT , there was something ... BIGGER THAN LIFE, that happened to him. A dream of his mother ... in the dream , the lady stabs herself and calls herself "... A SINNER , AS SHE GAVE BIRTH TO A KILLER!" That was a turning-point for Uday and for Mr Shark too, because THAT was the official end of MR Shark😳. you are a smart smart detective

Sure , there were glimpses of him in the chapters AFTER ch27 , but , there's 1 thing we must realise ... MR SHARK was a second "personality" for Uday. Uday had lived as Mr Shark for a great part of his life - thus Mr Shark would ALWAYS remain with Uday ... But the DOINGS of Mr Shark would end HERE!

i would not be so sure😕

Uday's dream , made him resolve to be a better person - that's why he immediately got on a plane to London and had himself rehabilitated. After a year, when he returns to Mumbai to win back his LOVE , he was given a terrible blow- in that his lover was getting engaged to another man.

If Uday hadn't put Mr Shark "AT BAY" ... do u think Yuvraaj Ahdiraj would be living for as long as he was😉?he could have survived if the writer wanted him too😳 I'm certain that Mr Shark would've killed Adhi on the engagement night itself😈. he was too shocked to do it then and there But he didn't ... which simply means - UDAY is just plain and simple UDAY SINGH.

Hmmm - he "pretended" have amnesia to get close to Manyata again. Was there anything Sharkish about that? NO!!!!!!!!!!! YESSS!!!!!!!!! Because if Mr Shark was around , he'd be holding Manyata captive in some dark room ... forcing her to love him again. and was that how uday was when he first kidnapped her??? i mean the end part

Oh God😲 , I've written so much already ... and I still don't know where this is going 🤣. neither do i

Now let's tackle Adhi ... I don't like him MORE THAN I DON'T LIKE YOU! that is indeed a cosolation prize😳 Adhiraj is a pervert, I believe! Let's flash to chap29 - when Adhi was trying to feel up Manyata ; moving his hands all over her thighs😡. I think, THAT IS THE TRUE ADHI! In chapter 33, Adhi does a 180 degree turn around and apologises for getting too cosy with Manyata. I don't buy his new act , 1 bit😳. he seemed innocent to me, a poor guy who was manipulated by his friends I highly doubt that he had a special someone named Charulatha , who let him down ... in fact I'm sure he had MANY special some1's 😆. (whether they consented to it OR NOT😡) . Adhi is a disgusting pig🐷 , who probably had Jay in his sights long before Uday actually came back into the picture. you really dont like him na????

Now let's come back to Uday ... I'm getting tired typing about people I hate🤢!

In chapter 33 , Uday visits a place , "where he swore he won't visit again" ... and then we read about a murder. Naturally, we assumed Uday got tempted by money, and went back to his old life-style ... but THAT WAS NOT THE CASE , Uday had gone to the temple (that was the place he never thought he go to again)😃. that is the writer who must confirm that😃

Sanjay Bahadoor and Sharanya were mercilessly killed😲. So what😕?? Mr Shark was not the only criminal in India, anyone could have done it. a valid point indeed Perhaps , a copy-cat killer🤔 ... maybe even Adhi in an attempt to frame the original Mr Shark. umph, goood idea😆

Now , don't tell me Adhi never knew about Mr Shark. He did ... he had to know. When Manyata had taken Uday to court, that was the biggest news ever. When Manyata was made a "laughing stock" in court , the news was even bigger. So ... there's not even a tiny possibility that Adhiraj was clueless😉. He knew EVERYTHING ... um, adhi was not in India for the past 5 years, he had written to INDIA just for the wedding. i wish i could tell you this dialogue

Now here's the part that's confusing me😕 ... JAI! Jai was this sweet, loving, caring sister ... then ; how did she become negative😲😕? I just don't get why she was trying to poison Manyata. because blood is thicker than water navi

At a point, I thought, she was doing it at the behest of Uday ... because - I don't think she would know how to mask pesticide taste in a soup😆 (and of-course Uday knew everything😉). But then ... I can't see Uday harming Manyata. Ya , sure - the pesticide wouldn't have killed her , but it would make her sick, and I really don't think Uday would harm her in any manner😳. if he wanted manyta home, he would sure have done that So , the Jai-matter is the only 1 I have no theory for😕. a huge relief for me😆

Adhi is a powerful man , with lots of "contacts", I presume he found out about Uday's pretence , and he was the well-wisher who told everything to Manyata😭. even jai could do that

When Manyata was confronting Uday , he made a threat about going after her family. Now let's recall something from ch27 ... Uday's secretary , Veena tells Uday : "You get angry very soon, and in your anger, you do things which u later regret!" That specific dialogue holds a lot of weight .. it was from that part that Uday became aware of how fast, his anger escalates. that is one observation even i never notives, well done👏👏

I'm certain that in his rehabilitation , Uday dealt with his anger issues also. Ya , his anger still reaches boiling-point in 2 seconds .. but there will not be any follow-up to it. So , u can say ... Uday's angry threat , was an empty threat😛! dont underestimate it navi😳

Uday is at his home , drinking and having bad thoughts. Mr Shark is re-emerging , Mr Shark is putting vivid images in Uday's mind. Mr Shark is pushing Uday to take revenge. I'm banking heavily on Uday's will-power here. I feel that Uday will not do as Mr Shark wants😃. no comment love

But there is someone who will make sure Uday becomes the "bad-guy" ... YOU😡!!!!!!!!!!!! (no - I'm kidding😆 ... it's Adhi). indeed it was me... who does not like a change

This is my theory of what happened between ch37 and chapt38 ...

Uday was drinking , I think he went over-board ... got drunk and passed out. Enter Adhi ... Jai was already raped at this point , Adhi brings her semi-conscious body into Uday's bedroom ; strategically places Uday next to her ; then sends a message to Manyata from Uday's phone. Manyata goes to Uday's house, finds them in a compromising situation and assumes the worst of Uday.

um, possible, but that was not what reallly happpened😭😭😭

Let's remember something from ch36, Manyata says that she'll never believe anything that Uday ever says again. Uday wakes up to see Manyata horrified about the scene in front of her - he knows that Manyata will NOT believe a word he says ... so , he knocks her out😈. (we still don't say that Mr Shark attacked Manyata , because what Uday did was SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST, it was an act of SELF-DEFENCE!) if he was innocent then why not tell her the truth!!! i dont understand that

In order for Uday to find out the truth ... he needed to know what he was up against. And he found that out when he dressed in a burkha and sat beside Manyata at the hospital. He knew EXACTLY what Adhi and Manyata were planning for him. It was no co-incidence that early the next morning - UDAY was TRAPPED! I think this was Uday's plan to be caught.

or adhi's men were very effficinet😕😆

Whilst Adhi was engineering this whole plan of finishing off Uday ... something UNEXPECTED HAPPENED😲. Manyata was called in to see Jai ... and Jai gave her the true story. she is in coma remember????

When Manyata came to the place Uday was being held ... she goes to Adhi and slaps him , telling him she knows the truth that HE is the rapist! Adhi is angered and after commanding his men to finish Uday , he takes Manyata away to do the same thing , he did to Jai😡 , afterall , he did refer to Manyata as "the star of his fantasies" (chap36) . detective navi, you did a great job😃

Uday fights the men and comes to Manyata's aide. After a scuffle between Adhi and Uday , it's the rapist that goes down ... ie - Adhi!

Manyata tells Uday to kill Adhi , but Uday hesitates - because that murderous chapter of his life has closed for a long time now. Then Manyata begs him and Uday does the deed ... maybe because he remembered what happened to his sister , and now the same thing has happened to Manyata's sister - that he took such a decision.

I won't say that he became Mr Shark again (because Mr Shark was killing for funmr shark never killed for the sake of fun, it was something more than that) , but here it was more of revenge , so NOT EXACTLY MR SHARK , but using a SHARK-LIKE idea of killing.

i would say mr shark itself killed or correcting myself, mr shoark got killed

I think the tomb-stone was made by Adhi ... we know that he wanted Uday dead , without the authorities knowing anything ; he probably had it made and was going to bury Uday after killing him ... so that IF THERE'S NO BODY , THERE'LL BE NO INVESTIGATION.

and the convo near the tomb, what explanation would you give navi????

What else😕?? Oh yeah right ... THE MAIN PART :

Uday and Manyata married and she is pregnant😳. The text message was from Mr Shark and he's right when he says IT'S A YEAR SINCE THEY MET, because a year ago was Mr Shark's LAST APPEARANCE when Adhi was killed😃. Uday had a knife in his hand at the end😉 ... of-course he did STUPID , how else would he cut a 1-year , marriage-anniversary cake😉😉😉😆!!!!!! na, he used the cake for something else, to so some cutting of... i wont tell you

There comment all done 😛.

Are u still alive Andy😕? barely😆

Or did u die out of boredom😆?? i wont die of boredom because the comment never bored me, it size made me speechless

This is my LONGEST COMMENT to date🥱 ... never thought I was capable of writing so much😲. I think this is longer than an update of Journey of A Wife😳. and longer than anyother chapter i ever wrote😳

It was an extraordinary update Andy👏. reallly????

I wanted to say that it was MIGRAINE-GIVING (which IT WAS😡) ...

... but then u must be tired hearing that😆. i love hearing it😳

I hope my theory is right (at least 50% MUST BE RIGHT😡). will tell your score later

OK - I'll shut-up now😆!!!!

I'll be going now ... fingers about to fall off. let me pick them up for you😳

Do continue soon - I WANT ANOTHER UPDATE (WITH ANSWERS)😳. sure after my last exam, which is on god knows when😡

Thanks for the PM ,

... sorry that the comment took ages to make an appearance. but it really was a pleasure waiting for it and finally reading it

Bye , see you 🤗 .bye navi😳

Sorry everyone , I could not reply to your comments for the last chapter... will reply for comments from this chap onwards.

Chapter 39

Manyta sat in their balcony, thinking about her peaceful married life, when her mobile beeped

She took her mobile and checked her inbox

"my princess, its about a year since we met.

You thought you buried me under that tombstone?

Na, you are mistaken. I am very much alive and have come for you

Look up manyta and you will see me, I have come to finish some matters I left earlier

I see you are enjoying your life with your husband , will he agree to share you with me

Love

mr shark"

Manyta looked up only to see uday standing in front with a knife in one hand and looking at her. In his other hand there was a bunch of flowers, which uday would have obviously picked up from their garden.

Manyta ran and hugged him," uday , I missed you"

Uday hugged her back and said" I love you too princess, and don't run when you are pregnant, and happy wedding anniversary darling" and handed her the flowers

And then she remembered the message he sent her and pushed him away" go, I don't want to talk to you, is this the way you message your pregnant wife?"

Uday back hugs her and brings the knife close to her neck, and says huskily, " wasn't it funny! Because I meant it so", and kissed her earlobes

" it wasn't, uday promise me , you wont return to your old ways, ever, please"

Uday turned manyta to face him and told her,"princess, it was strictly a joke, AND I would never ever return to that life, even if you say, because for me my family is more important. Mr shark really is dead. " touching her belly " I don't want my junior to ever say that his dad is a bad man"

"now what is that knife doing in your hand" asked manyta

" the knife was the only thing I could take from the kitchen rack from outside, and I had to take these flowers na"

"what!! You did not even enter the house"

" nope, took the knife through the window, cut those roses, and climbed up through that pipe, as I know my wife would be waiting for me"

"aw, uday, you are still romantic"

"a correction,. Uday was, is and will always be romantic" and winked at her. He bend down and kissed her on her lips. Manyta put her arms around his neck and they kiss passionately

Uday then carries her and takes her inside, he places her on the kitchen stool and asks her what she wants to eat

" you" manyta answers boldly

"um, princess, you are really becoming wild, and I like it" he winks at her." Wait , before you have me, I better make something for both of us" told uday, and he began to make some pasta for both of them.

They had a good lunch and they shared some good memories. " we could go to your home in the evening" suggested uday.

" jai called me this morning. Guess what?" told an excited manyta

" what?" asked uday

" she is pregnant! Am going to be an aunt"

" that's great news, but I thing you will be a mother before becoming an aunt. Just 5 months and we are going to be proud parents"

Mnayta just blushed . uday and manyta then went to their room, and manyta slept for a while, she had began to nap in the afternoon after she had become pregnant.

Uday looked at his sleeping wife and sat on the couch to read the newspaper. There was a huge advertisement that caught his eye, and the face in the advertisement made him frown

In the loving memory of our beloved son

yuvaraj adhiraj

(there was a huge picture of adhiraj)

we invite each and every one for the stone laying ceremony of

adhiraj public school

on 8 february 2014 by our honourable chief minister of maharastra

at 10 00 am

"our son, who had lived a great life, helping others in their need, was one great human,

"uday I know you do not have amnesia, you are acting. But I want to ask you something, do you love manyta?" said adhi

"yes" told uday truthfully

" then I will help you to get manyta. I can still see the love in her eyes for you. "

and uday failed to see the wicked glint in adhi's eyes

And he had never hurt any person, treating fellow humans with respect

Uday remembered the scene where he had seen jai in his room barely alive, and raped, looking outside the window, he saw adhi leaving in his car. He checked jai's pulse, she was barely alive...

A school for kids was his dream, and we are making his dream come true

Mnayta was dragged away by adhi, and uday was left to die by adhi's goons. Jai's life was spoiled but he would not allow manyta to suffer the same fate. His fighting instincts kicked in...

Uday shut the newspaper. Adhi's picture had brought back the happenings of that fateful day back to uday's mind. Memories he had put behind his mind.

His head felt heavy and uday decided to close his eyes.

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"Uday , beta, wake up" said a silent feminine voice

" ma, is that you?"

" yes beta, I came back"

" ma, I am so happy"

"Am proud of you beta, now you are indeed my son"

"ma, please don't leave me" uday cried...

"uday, wake up" said a anxious manyta . uday woke up only to see a tensed manyta looking at him, " what happened uday? was it a bad dream?"

" na, my mama has finally forgiven me, she told me herself" he said in a happy voice, as tears fell down... she had felt she was cursed but now, ..." He sobbed more

"tell me about it uday" said manyta cupping his face

Flashback

He was running behind a familiar figure, he called loudly" ma, stop" the figure continued to walk.

He finally overtook that figure" ma, stop na, it me uday"

" you are no son of mine"

"ma" he said shocked

"my son was not a killer, what about you"

And then her mother took a knife and plunged it into her womb

"I am a sinner as I gave birth to you"

She fell to the ground and in seconds died..

"MAAA"

Flashback ends

" that dream changed me manyta, I became a animal after my parents death. Killing soon became a passion to me, the thrills it gave me, and I forgot why I became a killer. My mama reminded me, she brought me back to life . and that day I decided I would change manyta...I went to London the next day , to get a some help for my killing tendencies and anger..."

Manyta listened to uday, these were things he never shared with her and she herself never asked. They had started their marriage forgetting what ever that happened in their past... now uday wanted to let it out and she would listen as he finally opened his heart to her...

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That's all for today!! More answers would come in the coming chapters...😳

Do comment and tell me what you felt!!!😃