THE SECOND SHADOW#2, chap 39 pg 43 new!! - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago


Firstly, Andy...the word last chapter brought me into heavy breathe. i immediately read the updates but what made me more mad was the fact that HOW DARE U MAKE UDAY RAPIST😡... I thought u were joking n u would show Adhi to be d wrong person...i know even here u have a game plan, n that Uday is not the killer or rapist...but whatever i didn't at all like this way of degrading my Uday...😭😭...Although that doesn't mean u didn't write brilliantly..It was like always a very intelligent narration with a lot of suspense in it.

But still😕...i don't like someone humiliating or insulting my Uday😡..Please amend everything
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey... Andy..
First of all I am really sorry for the late comment..
I mean comment of three chappys at a time..
Actually had examz..
Anyways...
All the chappys were just fantastic..
Who is that well wisher of Manyata..
I think its the doctor...
Manyata's plan was really nice...
And it worked too..
Finally Manveer confronted each other...
You kow what..
Though Uday's anger is disastourous..
As he becomes Mr. Shark then..
I still like his angry Uday..
What..
Uday is a repist..
He raped J..
Just because he wanted to have her at that moment..
He is so cheap..
Adhi is so sweet..
He is standing beside Manyata in every situation..
Adhi and Uday's fight was too good..
So Manyata's life is finally on track..
But what is this..
Mr. shark is back..
I hate you for stopping there..
And I'll hate you more..
If you don't continue it in book 2..
Pls update..
And thanx for the PM..
And again sorry for the late comment..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Andy ... comment edited pg39. (this is the comment for ch37 ... chap38's comment is not ready yet {STILL TRYING TO GET THRU THE HOME-WORK YOU GAVE ME😆})
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg andy i have so many confusion.

i want to get all d answers for it.

so u r not going to end d ss till its clear .plz dear.

now comming to d updates. enjoyed it so much.

thank u so much for updating n pm.

will b waiting for next update.

sorry cudnt b able to give a long cmnt which u really deserve.

tc n stay safe.
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg andy i have so many confusion.

i want to get all d answers for it.

so u r not endibg dis ss till its clear .plz dear.

u really ended did in a cliff hanger n saying dat ending it

now comming to d updates. enjoyed it so much.

thank u so much for updating n pm.

will b waiting for next update.

sorry cudnt b able to give a long cmnt which u really deserve.

tc n stay safe.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Andy
Thanx for sending me PMs though I did not like
Well I want a true 'they lived happily ever after' ending
I mean ManVeer together
Pleaseee
And yeah I ofc want all the answers
U ended it like how DEK ended Lol(, with heck lot of mysteries yet to be solved)
Please do update
The chapters were awesome
Very cruel and action packed
U can actually plan a sequel of this Lol
And yeah I am not tired of this
This is awesome
U always keep the mystery alive in EVERY chapter
Hats off to you
Plz update
I'll be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
One more thing...
Do u aim of making us hate uday??? So that we will hate him and u can have him???
Agar Haan, to ye khwaab dekhna band karo
U can't have him completely
ROFL
Jokes apart
But uday always makes himself hero though he is the worst villain and even dangerous than daud and Osama Lol
Love uday
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey:)
All the 3 chapters were awesome:) Amazingly well written:)
Now my gut feeling is that Uday is NOT the rapist, it is Adhi, haina?
Please do continue:) You are an awesome writer:)
Please continue, if you are busy then I (am sure the other readers as well) will not mind late updates, but please continue if you can:)
Best wishes
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Andy ... it's me again😆. I bet u got tired waiting for my comment to come🥱 ... but what to do - so many things just delayed me writing it. Anyways ... it's FINALLY done , hope u like it😳. I'm sure that majority of my theories are wrong🤢 ... mainly because u love proving me wrong😉!

But before I start my actual comment - I would like to tell u a story😊 (Don't roll your eyes; just shut-up and read😡).
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Navina. She was nice, kind, loving ... basically - a wonderful person😳!!!!! She had many friends ... but none of then were EXACTLY as she was😔. Then 1 day came a girl named Andrea , Andy for short😆. Beside their 5 year-age-difference ; they were duplicates of each other. Same LIKES/DISLIKES ... same mannerisms , same characteristics ... it wasn't long before both became BEST FRIENDS😳. 1 day , Navina started having terrible head-aches😭 ... and she couldn't understand why😕. The doctors told her to limit her dairy intake, and to stop spending so much time on her laptop ; also to dry her hair thoroughly whenever she washed it. She followed the doctors orders ... but the head-aches continued😔!!!! Suddenly she discovered the cause of her health problems 😉. IT WAS ANDY😡!!!!! U see , Andy used to write an SS, entitled THE SECOND SHADOW ... it was a thriller , of sorts and was full of mystery . Navina used to wreck her brains in trying to figure out Andy's story ; thus - she began suffering with migraines😭. Today, their friendship is hanging by a thread ... because NAVINA DOESN'T LIKE ANDY ANY MORE.
There my story is done ... it was short and sweet with a sad ending😆!!!!!!!! Basically , what I want to say is : "Andy - I really don't like u" !!!! And I'm not just saying it for the heck of it ... NOOO ... I'm saying it because I got valid reasons :
1. U turned an utterly handsome, strikingly gorgeous UdayVeer☺️, into a serial Killer.
2. U turned ME into a detective😒.
3. U gave me head-ache upon head-ache upon head-ache😭.
4. U are turning Uday into a rapist🤢.
5. Lastly ... u gave me SO MUCH HOME-WORK😡😡😡😡😡!!!!!!!!!! (I hate home-work and I loathe anyone that gives me home-work🤢).
I think 5 reasons are enough 😉. Why can't u write simple stuff , something like JoaW ... I wouldn't need to use my brain so much😆!!!!! Okay I think I've stalled enough😉 ... time for the actual comment ...
I've come to a conclusion - UDAY IS NOT A RAPIST!!!! How did I arrive at this point , simple ... let's back-track😉. Uday became a cold-blooded assassin because his family was ruined . THAT traumatic incident turned him into a murderer. Being a hit-man was his profession. The first life he took , was for revenge. TAKING LIVES, became a pleasurable habit for him. But did he branch off into other criminal activities? Did he go into drug-smuggling OR embezzlement OR human-trafficking??? NO!!! He didn't😃. Would he suddenly become a RAPIST 😲?? NO WAY!!!! Not after his OWN SISTER was raped!
I strongly believe that HE WOULD NOT DO UNTO OTHERS AS WAS DONE UNTO HIM😃. I also think that U ARE JUST TRYING TO FOOL US😉.
Uday LOVED his "occupation" ... and he was damn good at it! I'm sure that he would've continued KILLING PEOPLE ; even if he got caught and even if Manyata would've asked him to stop. BUT , there was something ... BIGGER THAN LIFE, that happened to him. A dream of his mother ... in the dream , the lady stabs herself and calls herself "... A SINNER , AS SHE GAVE BIRTH TO A KILLER!" That was a turning-point for Uday and for Mr Shark too, because THAT was the official end of MR Shark😳.
Sure , there were glimpses of him in the chapters AFTER ch27 , but , there's 1 thing we must realise ... MR SHARK was a second "personality" for Uday. Uday had lived as Mr Shark for a great part of his life - thus Mr Shark would ALWAYS remain with Uday ... But the DOINGS of Mr Shark would end HERE!
Uday's dream , made him resolve to be a better person - that's why he immediately got on a plane to London and had himself rehabilitated. After a year, when he returns to Mumbai to win back his LOVE , he was given a terrible blow- in that his lover was getting engaged to another man.
If Uday hadn't put Mr Shark "AT BAY" ... do u think Yuvraaj Ahdiraj would be living for as long as he was😉? I'm certain that Mr Shark would've killed Adhi on the engagement night itself😈. But he didn't ... which simply means - UDAY is just plain and simple UDAY SINGH.
Hmmm - he "pretended" have amnesia to get close to Manyata again. Was there anything Sharkish about that? NO!!!!!!!!!!! Because if Mr Shark was around , he'd be holding Manyata captive in some dark room ... forcing her to love him again.
Oh God😲 , I've written so much already ... and I still don't know where this is going 🤣.
Now let's tackle Adhi ... I don't like him MORE THAN I DON'T LIKE YOU! Adhiraj is a pervert, I believe! Let's flash to chap29 - when Adhi was trying to feel up Manyata ; moving his hands all over her thighs😡. I think, THAT IS THE TRUE ADHI! In chapter 33, Adhi does a 180 degree turn around and apologises for getting too cosy with Manyata. I don't buy his new act , 1 bit😳. I highly doubt that he had a special someone named Charulatha , who let him down ... in fact I'm sure he had MANY special some1's 😆. (whether they consented to it OR NOT😡) . Adhi is a disgusting pig🐷 , who probably had Jay in his sights long before Uday actually came back into the picture.
Now let's come back to Uday ... I'm getting tired typing about people I hate🤢!
In chapter 33 , Uday visits a place , "where he swore he won't visit again" ... and then we read about a murder. Naturally, we assumed Uday got tempted by money, and went back to his old life-style ... but THAT WAS NOT THE CASE , Uday had gone to the temple (that was the place he never thought he go to again)😃.
Sanjay Bahadoor and Sharanya were mercilessly killed😲. So what😕?? Mr Shark was not the only criminal in India, anyone could have done it. Perhaps , a copy-cat killer🤔 ... maybe even Adhi in an attempt to frame the original Mr Shark.
Now , don't tell me Adhi never knew about Mr Shark. He did ... he had to know. When Manyata had taken Uday to court, that was the biggest news ever. When Manyata was made a "laughing stock" in court , the news was even bigger. So ... there's not even a tiny possibility that Adhiraj was clueless😉. He knew EVERYTHING ...
Now here's the part that's confusing me😕 ... JAI! Jai was this sweet, loving, caring sister ... then ; how did she become negative😲😕? I just don't get why she was trying to poison Manyata.
At a point, I thought, she was doing it at the behest of Uday ... because - I don't think she would know how to mask pesticide taste in a soup😆 (and of-course Uday knew everything😉). But then ... I can't see Uday harming Manyata. Ya , sure - the pesticide wouldn't have killed her , but it would make her sick, and I really don't think Uday would harm her in any manner😳. So , the Jai-matter is the only 1 I have no theory for😕.
Adhi is a powerful man , with lots of "contacts", I presume he found out about Uday's pretence , and he was the well-wisher who told everything to Manyata😭.
When Manyata was confronting Uday , he made a threat about going after her family. Now let's recall something from ch27 ... Uday's secretary , Veena tells Uday : "You get angry very soon, and in your anger, you do things which u later regret!" That specific dialogue holds a lot of weight .. it was from that part that Uday became aware of how fast, his anger escalates.
I'm certain that in his rehabilitation , Uday dealt with his anger issues also. Ya , his anger still reaches boiling-point in 2 seconds .. but there will not be any follow-up to it. So , u can say ... Uday's angry threat , was an empty threat😛!
Uday is at his home , drinking and having bad thoughts. Mr Shark is re-emerging , Mr Shark is putting vivid images in Uday's mind. Mr Shark is pushing Uday to take revenge. I'm banking heavily on Uday's will-power here. I feel that Uday will not do as Mr Shark wants😃.
But there is someone who will make sure Uday becomes the "bad-guy" ... YOU😡!!!!!!!!!!!! (no - I'm kidding😆 ... it's Adhi).
This is my theory of what happened between ch37 and chapt38 ...
Uday was drinking , I think he went over-board ... got drunk and passed out. Enter Adhi ... Jai was already raped at this point , Adhi brings her semi-conscious body into Uday's bedroom ; strategically places Uday next to her ; then sends a message to Manyata from Uday's phone. Manyata goes to Uday's house, finds them in a compromising situation and assumes the worst of Uday.
Let's remember something from ch36, Manyata says that she'll never believe anything that Uday ever says again. Uday wakes up to see Manyata horrified about the scene in front of her - he knows that Manyata will NOT believe a word he says ... so , he knocks her out😈. (we still don't say that Mr Shark attacked Manyata , because what Uday did was SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST, it was an act of SELF-DEFENCE!)
In order for Uday to find out the truth ... he needed to know what he was up against. And he found that out when he dressed in a burkha and sat beside Manyata at the hospital. He knew EXACTLY what Adhi and Manyata were planning for him. It was no co-incidence that early the next morning - UDAY was TRAPPED! I think this was Uday's plan to be caught.
Whilst Adhi was engineering this whole plan of finishing off Uday ... something UNEXPECTED HAPPENED😲. Manyata was called in to see Jai ... and Jai gave her the true story.
When Manyata came to the place Uday was being held ... she goes to Adhi and slaps him , telling him she knows the truth that HE is the rapist! Adhi is angered and after commanding his men to finish Uday , he takes Manyata away to do the same thing , he did to Jai😡 , afterall , he did refer to Manyata as "the star of his fantasies" (chap36) .
Uday fights the men and comes to Manyata's aide. After a scuffle between Adhi and Uday , it's the rapist that goes down ... ie - Adhi!
Manyata tells Uday to kill Adhi , but Uday hesitates - because that murderous chapter of his life has closed for a long time now. Then Manyata begs him and Uday does the deed ... maybe because he remembered what happened to his sister , and now the same thing has happened to Manyata's sister - that he took such a decision.
I won't say that he became Mr Shark again (because Mr Shark was killing for fun) , but here it was more of revenge , so NOT EXACTLY MR SHARK , but using a SHARK-LIKE idea of killing.
I think the tomb-stone was made by Adhi ... we know that he wanted Uday dead , without the authorities knowing anything ; he probably had it made and was going to bury Uday after killing him ... so that IF THERE'S NO BODY , THERE'LL BE NO INVESTIGATION.
What else😕?? Oh yeah right ... THE MAIN PART :
Uday and Manyata married and she is pregnant😳. The text message was from Mr Shark and he's right when he says IT'S A YEAR SINCE THEY MET, because a year ago was Mr Shark's LAST APPEARANCE when Adhi was killed😃. Uday had a knife in his hand at the end😉 ... of-course he did STUPID , how else would he cut a 1-year , marriage-anniversary cake😉😉😉😆!!!!!!
There comment all done 😛.
Are u still alive Andy😕?
Or did u die out of boredom😆??
This is my LONGEST COMMENT to date🥱 ... never thought I was capable of writing so much😲. I think this is longer than an update of Journey of A Wife😳.
It was an extraordinary update Andy👏.
I wanted to say that it was MIGRAINE-GIVING (which IT WAS😡) ...
... but then u must be tired hearing that😆.
I hope my theory is right (at least 50% MUST BE RIGHT😡).
OK - I'll shut-up now😆!!!!
I'll be going now ... fingers about to fall off.
Do continue soon - I WANT ANOTHER UPDATE (WITH ANSWERS)😳.
Thanks for the PM ,
... sorry that the comment took ages to make an appearance.
Bye , see you 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
@navi:
i thought andy updated.den realized dat it ur cmnt.anyways i really enjoyed reading ur cmnt.it was really funny.especially ur story.
@andy:
y cant u just write straight way without any complication. i mean simple stories .y u always makeuv a crimal.thank god there is one exception.usualy ur stories demands thinking rather than just enjoying.hmm usage of brain.

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