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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

aww this was lovely😳

really enjoyed reading it

superb👍🏼

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Soni

@-Enigmatic-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Kudos u harsha 👏👏👏
U brilliently stated raghav's inner tourmoil 😳😳
Raghav's pov loved to the core 😳
RagNa's nokzok was funny 😆 😆 they r so cute even while fighting..awww😳
Raghav grabs her from waist ☺️☺️ ye scene kab mile hume show me yar😭😡😡..
Overall terrific write up👏👏👏
Keep up👍🏼

Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago

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blackdollphin

@blackdollphin

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mehr05
Harshana! thats wonderful!👏👏👏
i loved every line you wrote.
you captured Raghav's emotional turmoil so well and its refreshing to read from Raghav's POV.
the void you described Raghav felt and the feeling of finally coming to shore with Kalpi..is just fantastic.
hats off to you dear.👏👏

Shukriya :)) Mehr my aim was to present Raghav's emotional struggle that how much lonely he was feeling.. how much influence Kalpi has on his mind body and soul... And since you like my attempt of writing in Raghav's POV, I think m successful :)))

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beginner46

@beginner46

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Harshana really love your OS every line was just perfect 😳

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Mehr

@mehr05

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: blackdollphin

Shukriya :)) Mehr my aim was to present Raghav's emotional struggle that how much lonely he was feeling.. how much influence Kalpi has on his mind body and soul... And since you like my attempt of writing in Raghav's POV, I think m successful :)))

and you did it brilliantly! 👏

Really Harshana, you should write more OS. i'm hooked to your FF and now you've given us a taste of your OS, you should definitely do so more. 😊

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MGYlove

@MGYlove

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I love the way you write dear.. love this OS 👏👏👏👏👏 i m also fan of your fanfic ...😉😉😉 you are doing gr8 job👍🏼

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blackdollphin

@blackdollphin

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: SoniLuvsRT
Kudos u harsha 👏👏👏
U brilliently stated raghav's inner tourmoil 😳😳
Raghav's pov loved to the core 😳
RagNa's nokzok was funny 😆 😆 they r so cute even while fighting..awww😳
Raghav grabs her from waist ☺️☺️ ye scene kab mile hume show me yar😭😡😡..
Overall terrific write up👏👏👏
Keep up👍🏼

Thnx soni :))) yaar show ka to sirf treadmill wala scene tha baki to mere hi dimag ki upaj hai 😉