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aww this was lovely😳

Kudos u harsha 👏👏👏
U brilliently stated raghav's inner tourmoil 😳😳
Raghav's pov loved to the core 😳
RagNa's nokzok was funny 😆 😆 they r so cute even while fighting..awww😳
Raghav grabs her from waist ☺️☺️ ye scene kab mile hume show me yar😭😡😡..
Overall terrific write up👏👏👏
Keep up👍🏼

Originally posted by: mehr05

Harshana! thats wonderful!👏👏👏

i loved every line you wrote.

you captured Raghav's emotional turmoil so well and its refreshing to read from Raghav's POV.

the void you described Raghav felt and the feeling of finally coming to shore with Kalpi..is just fantastic.

hats off to you dear.👏👏

Shukriya :)) Mehr my aim was to present Raghav's emotional struggle that how much lonely he was feeling.. how much influence Kalpi has on his mind body and soul... And since you like my attempt of writing in Raghav's POV, I think m successful :)))

Harshana really love your OS every line was just perfect 😳

Originally posted by: blackdollphin

Shukriya :)) Mehr my aim was to present Raghav's emotional struggle that how much lonely he was feeling.. how much influence Kalpi has on his mind body and soul... And since you like my attempt of writing in Raghav's POV, I think m successful :)))

I love the way you write dear.. love this OS 👏👏👏👏👏 i m also fan of your fanfic ...😉😉😉 you are doing gr8 job👍🏼

Originally posted by: SoniLuvsRT

Kudos u harsha 👏👏👏
U brilliently stated raghav's inner tourmoil 😳😳
Raghav's pov loved to the core 😳
RagNa's nokzok was funny 😆 😆 they r so cute even while fighting..awww😳
Raghav grabs her from waist ☺️☺️ ye scene kab mile hume show me yar😭😡😡..
Overall terrific write up👏👏👏
Keep up👍🏼

Thnx soni :))) yaar show ka to sirf treadmill wala scene tha baki to mere hi dimag ki upaj hai 😉

Originally posted by: blackdollphin

Thnx soni :))) yaar show ka to sirf treadmill wala scene tha baki to mere hi dimag ki upaj hai 😉

waha se bhag ke yaha agaiye. Not fare

Originally posted by: Wj.mad

waha see bhag ke yaha agaiye. Not fare

Kya ho gya kaun bhaga kahan se kab bhaga ??