ragna os-KAISA YEH PYAR HAI completed LAST PART 3 PG 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dunno how this comes out but still wanna give it a try...plz do read and comment...good or bad..but I wanna try..
PART 1 PG 1

PART 2 PG 2

FINAL PART PG 2...COMPLETED

PART 1
Kalpi is still searching ways to tell her ayi that she's got a job as a waitress...but is scared of hurting her. So she decides she would first no the details of her job in the hotel , how her day at work goes and then she would be clearly able to tell what's he job about. After all she has to start somewhere before her result is rechecked..She just want to see her aayi happy...the way she was with paakhi. She becomes a bit sad remembering how ayi hugged paakhi and how she was silently furious and ignored her. She didn't even console her. Why had her ayi to be like that?
The night passed away bringing in a new light. Kalpana jaadhav was about to take her first step to become what her ayi wanted her to be. She took blessings of her parents and left for the hotel.
Kalpna along with few other trainees were given their uniforms. It was a black mini tights with transparent stockings along with a figure hugging white shirt with a tie. Kalpi had never worn this kinda dress before...she was feeling very uncomfortable but she couldn't help it. One of the girl trainees looked at her confusion. She asked her the reason. Kalpana started crying and couldn't stop sharing her feelings about this job. She and that girl Shilpa instantly hit it off. Shilpa told her..look Kalpana . No job is small..I know u r hurting but u need to start somewhere. And its the truth that when big MBA grads don't get good jobs how can we failures get them. So we need to step ahead and except what we get alongside waiting for a good opportunity. Don't feel guilty. U r smartest of us all and ur ayi will surely understand y u did this. So smile, don't loose hope and begin ur day and work with enthu. May be this day may lead u where u never tht.. It might pave way for a good future.so change and let's go.
Kalpi feels received and happy. She changes and comes and Shilpa is awestruck. My god Kalpana u r looking stunning. Don't feel uncomfy. Let's go.
Kalpi is sent towards pool side to serve customers out there. She's feeling very conscious in that uniform and working as a waitress. But soon she gets into the role and is happily attending to the customers. Seeing her dedication and work the manager decides to send her to the conference banquet where a meeting of multinations companies is being held.
Kalpi is happy with managers encouragement..she takes the starters and goes into the conference hall.
Raghav is busy with the presentation. He needs to get this project anyhow coz even prem Kapoor is competing for it. Right now he's hearing prem presentation. After the presentation the members order for starers at their tables. Prem is smirking looking at Raghav while Raghav just tries to ignore the urge to wipe that smirk ...suddenly something hit his senses. A strange feeling an awareness he couldn't point out. It was strange...what has happened suddenly. He felt someone's presence in conference hall...it couldn't be...how can she be here. Impossible ble..he turns and watches the waiters and waitresses enter with starters...He notices everyone...but doesn't see her. Omg..hell ..I have started daydreaming about her..Kalpana jaadhav..y can't u just let me live. Y do u keep barging in my that's. How can she be here. Dammit...y does she even bother me. Nope I allow no one to cone near me ..he's still battling his mind but his heart is racing...it always does when she is near...hell but I can't see her...so stop dreaming..he closes his eyes to get his concentration when he hears someone asking him what he would like..." Sir, what do I serve u? Raghav was shocked at the voice. It was kalpi voice. He could recognize this voice anywhere ...he pushes up his face to clear his doubt's and is dumbstruck seeing Kalpana there...darn it and what the hell is she wearing...what is this shit...he closes his fist in fury and sees prem too watching kalpi dumbstruck... His blood was boiling in anger st seeing prem oogling her...is this girl so stupid...how dare she wear something like this. Doesn't she no she's calling all make attention in this room. Doesn't she know what she's doing to me. Raghavis UST staring at her in anger seeing strange expressions crossing her face. At least she's recognized me...hell she shld fear from me..OK I told her to get a job but waitress how dare she and wearing such short clothes..nope she can't work here not at all...

TO BE CONTINUED ONLY IF I GET COMENTS FROM ALL READERS...CRITCS TOO...I JUST HOPE U LIKE THIS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg Excellent start dear...jus mindblowing indeed👏👏👏
Ohh my god raghav's protective side..awww😳 i njoyed this alot😃
Lol his reaction on her dressing was jus like typical lover & hubby😳
I guess in ur next update prem ki khoob dhulai honewali hai raghav ke hatho😆😆😆
I njoyed this OS to the CORE😳..
U r an amazing writer dear..keep up👍🏼.& give us ur more writings would love to read indeed ⭐️... THanxx a ton buddy 🤗
Looking forward for next update...plz do countinue soon
Edited by SoniLuvsRT - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing. Mind blowing.
Plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it... :)))) very well described and situational... Plz wrute more... And ur effort is more than appreciatable dear<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start 👏go ahead👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kalpi is an awesome daughter
She is willing to do any job to fulfill her mother dreams
Omg!!! Raghav is too cute
I like how he can feel Kalpi present in the room without seeing her
And him fighting his feelings was hilarious ;)
"sir " when Kalpi said that awake Raghav lol
The way he look at her and thinking why the hell she is wearing that kind of cloth is simply amazing
Possessive and jealous much ;)
Superb starting, i can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jennice, Continue soon... Its very awesum.. Aww ... Raghav is posessive about Kalpi 😳. Update soon dear... Waiting to read wht happens next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start...continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG tht was awesome...loved Raghav's pov...I hope he takes her in a seperate room nd lash out at her where she'll answer him back...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mindblowing os
Every thoughts of raghav were expressed too good

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