AsYa OS: Cascading Love - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

nice story...how does such ideas come into ur mind??

Originally posted by: atif4ever

It was amazing...!
Super awesome and sweet...!
It was written very well...!
Please keep writing stories on Asya...!

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Simi, that was beautiful! 😃 I liked Zoya's way of coping. Her sarcasm was amusing and I loved the cheery Asad. 😳 And I adored how he carried her to the fountain! I love fountains. *Sigh*

I really admired the way you did the flashbacks - from Asad bringing Zoya to the fountain to them bringing their little baby girl. ❤️ So adorable! 😳

And, if I may add, I love the title! 👍🏼 I like how it relates to the fountain, "cascading" love like the "cascading water" of the fountain. Awesome job! 😉

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: --Radhika--

This was a total different concept. And I love it a lot!

It was a very unique story, with its own touch. Superb Saida! 😆😆😆

You are a brilliant writer, no joke. 🤗 Your ideas are fantastic and I just loved this story! 🤗

Asad and Zoya fall in love at the most randomest situation! 😃 It was great!

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Beautifully written
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: manognasai

Its awesome...Very well written!Loved the way u wrote abt Zoya's feelings,AsYa's encounters and finally the noises of the splashes of water turning into music to her ears...her daughter is playing at the same place where she had many memories wid her father!😃