AsYa OS: Cascading Love

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Loved it!!!
Asad made zoya live a life with new memories!!!

thanks 4 pm

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Gauri

@Gauri...

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awww that was so cute!!😳

Luvd it!!👏

Ty fr d PM!!

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Aweee...Simmi this was beautiful👍🏼

I loved it...❤️

It was inspirational...It was poetic...You have left me speechless...

Brilliant👏

Keep writing😃

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome update simi

this was really a sad n emotional update...

loved how u depicted zoya's life👏

wow zoya got married asad at last and their have kid 😳

zoya saw same thing which she saw as dream a father running behind her child😳😆

update ur other stories soon😃

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Tanya

@OceanicHeart.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

I love emotional OS !

And this OS was just Perfect

Loved AsYa as always

And story was so sweet :)

Amazing

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

It was beautifully penned. Very different to your normal style of writing, but thoroughly enjoyable..

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice story...how does such ideas come into ur mind??

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Hey this was a beautiful OS.

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Bhawna

@Bhawnasr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

It was amazing...!
Super awesome and sweet...!
It was written very well...!
Please keep writing stories on Asya...!

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Simi, that was beautiful! 😃 I liked Zoya's way of coping. Her sarcasm was amusing and I loved the cheery Asad. 😳 And I adored how he carried her to the fountain! I love fountains. *Sigh*

I really admired the way you did the flashbacks - from Asad bringing Zoya to the fountain to them bringing their little baby girl. ❤️ So adorable! 😳

And, if I may add, I love the title! 👍🏼 I like how it relates to the fountain, "cascading" love like the "cascading water" of the fountain. Awesome job! 😉

-Fari. 😳 ❤️