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Well this my new FANFICTION its going to be a supernatural one combined with the concept of Dekha ek khwab and many new and old character are going to clash with each other.
Her Legacy
Prologue

In A richly posh huge room.

A news reporter broadcasting news :

Ek dil dehla dene wali soochna humme mili hai .kaha jata hai ki yuvrani manyata of devghad ka accident ho gaya hai gadi buri tarike se blast hui hai aur unka koi pata nahi chal paya hai.

Yuvrani manyata jo ki apne devghad ki zameen ke liye court mei lad rahi thi ,

un lakho logo ki ghar bachanei ki akhri ummed thi.shayad aaj unhone apni yuvrani ko kho diya .

sawal uth rahei hai ke kya is accident ka us case se koi lena dena hai.

kunki rajkumari manyata ek bhot hi badi multinational company ke khilaf ye case lad rahi thi kaha jata hai ki unka haath is mei ho sakta hai .

Aaj lakho devghad vasiyo ki umeed aj shayad bhuj si gayi hai.

Someone off the tv with remote and throws the remote on sofa .

A bald man with a whisky filled glass hand spoke:"jung mei kurbaniya to dene hi padti hai ,

kayi puraney kissei hai rajvanshiyo kei ki riyasato kei liye bhai-bhai ko marta hai,"

a smirk plasterd his ageing face .

"shayad yahi saza hai rajvanshi honei ki tabhi hum lakho logo par raj kartei hai unhei dara kei .

daar ka business is the best business ."

He puts the hand on shoulders of another man and sat across him on big sofa.

He handed him a glass of whisky .

A built man around the same age of the other man took the glass replied to him

Hum sirf devghad ko bahcha rahe hai .

Other man:"bilkul maharaj bilkul... "an evil smile plasterd on his face looking at the other man struggle to reason himself out as guilt is surfacing inside him.

Index chapter 1 and 2 on page 1 chapter 3 and 4 ,4.a. on page 2 Chapter 5 and chapter 6 on page 2. Chapter 7 and chapter 8 on page 3 Chapter 9 on page 4 Chapter 9.a on page 5 Chapter 10 on page 5 Chapter 11 on page 6 Chapter 12,13,14,15 on page 8
Chapter 16 ,17 on page 9
Chapter 18 on page 10
Chapter 19 on page 13
Chapter 20 on page 14
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whtsthis a ss/ff/os??????if its thn u have to continue😉so confusing yaar..whts this ...????
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Prologue ( this is prologue right ?) is catching
seems a lot of rajneeti is involved
eager for de supernatural part to unfold
continue soon
thanks for de PM
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Its interesting Urvashi!..👏...Liked the prologue..Plz continue
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Character sketch

Yuvrani manyata of devghad:

Character is same as that of serial .her disappearance is mystery some say she died in an accident some say say she just disappeared after that accident and some say she has been victim of foreigners and corrupt polticians.

She was fighting the case where devghad land where devghad village people reside that belong to ancestors was sold to a multinational company Umbrella Corp.

Whom his father had made a deal with Mr.Richard to make a nuclear power plant on that land which will lead the lakhs of villagers to lose there homes and environment will get polluted due to chemical wastes.

Yuvraj UdayVeer OF Jaighad:

Same as that of serial he is constantly pressuring Manyata to marry him and leaving no stones for her to become damsel in distress.

Jai Nandini:

Same as that of serial here she is constantly desperate to make manyata stoop low in eyes of family and to become yuvrani of devghad an her love interst is uday .

Maharaj Giriraj of Jaighad:

He is the king of Jaighad and father of uday and unnati.

He has expectation from his son and daughter and can go any length to fulfill them.

Mahrani Gayatri of Jaighad:

She is the late queen of jaighad who died due to illness when unnati was 5yrs old.

Maharaj BrijRaj of devghad:

King of devghad having impeccable manners and etiquates of royal .he is not able to go against his mother and deep down hides his anger and frustration and wishes to have full control over devghad empire .he had made a deal and took huge amount from UmbrellaCorp.But dadisahab had refused the proposal and now is in coma .he is hell bent on pressuring manyata to make the deal successful and marry udayveer as they are under enquiry as he already spent the money.

Maharani komal:

Same character.She is quite she is supportive to her mother-in-law and is under the shade of protection when her husband tries to cross his limits.

Rajkumar Vijayendra Singh.

Sama character.he is afraid of udayveer and does not want to be in his bad side as he already has huge crush on his sister and afraid that his secret crush will be relived.he has studied business law and management from London.and right now guiding manyata with pros and cons of the deal with Umbrella Corp.as well as with poltics that is being played around .

Rajkumari Menka

She is smaller sister of BrijRaj and mother of VijendraSingh .here she is constantly nagging his son to be called a rajwada and accepted by her family as she often faces comments on getting married to non-royal and his son is blue -blooded royal and can't compete in competition when hier to the throne of devghad was to be choosen .She hides grudges against her family and often manipulates her family members.

Surya

He is orphan and is currently living in slums of Mumbai with his friend he had come to Mumbai to rule Mumbai and bring mafia raj back.His family background is mysterious and " I believes in war not in morality" is his theory.

Dr.Sahab his character is same.
Rajmata Mrinali Devi of devghad her character is same .she had refused the proposal of Nuclear power plant.and right now she is in coma .
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Few weeks before her accident.
Chapter One

The salty winds swaying the curtains up and down right and left beating it harshly "reflecting my life the same way" she spoke in her mind by seeing them .

adjusting the glasses that has move down to her nose tips ."even my glasses is leaving my eyes so that I cannot have clear vision,I have done so much mess that everyone left me am I that bad that even my things, my glasses wants to leave me, if you left me I won't be able to see anything its gets blurred I am going to bang my head with doors and furnitures I am going to hurt myself please don't .. please don't leave me.. atleast you stay with me help me to have clear vision. " her face look like any moment she will break down in tears.

"If someone sees me talking to non living things talking to winds ,curtains in my room my glasses they might think I am mad ,but you know what I have crossed my sanity these are things that wants back answer me humiliate me I am on the fine between a living and non living "

Tears filled her eyes she wiped the tears before it slides down her cheeks , standing for a long time her feet started aching her but she mindlessly watched how the wind is beating the curtains and the curtains bear the harshness reflecting her pain,

"she is this curtains and the wind is him ".she spoke the word "him" in a lethal manner as if him is the word relating to a culprit.

soon her legs gave the answer the pain made her awake of her surrounding how long she had been standing and was lost in her thoughts.

The beep from clock began to ring flashing 7 a.m she moved towards the sound of clock make it off .seeing the digits flashing the time 7 a.m . she haven't slpet all night waiting for the sun to rise and darknees to fade just like she wanted in her life a miracle of nature day after night naight after day but the night is too long and seems never fading with rays of sun.

"it's time" she whisper with a new determination in her voice .she follow the daily routine task she was supposed to do.

"It's time for change , it's time to move away ,it's time to stop the pain and to do it stop them who are the reasons for it."

"I am going to stop the pain in my legs for standing so long . "

"Sorry my feet I didn't realize for how much I ignored you."

She moved towards the windows.

She closed the windows that made the curtains stop battling the wind and rest in peace.

"Sorry curtains instead of watching you getting beaten by wind I should have stop wind she laughed a little instead of watching I should do something."

"Nobody can go back and start a new beginning , but anybody can start today and make a new end. ". "Yes, I am going to make end ,atleast if I can't hold on something then I should let it go ."

"Like a bird,I will leave behind what I don't need to carry pain, sorrow,grudges,tears, the birds always fly light without any burdens . " seeing the birds flying from one bark of tree to another

She took out the black diary.

Today is the last day I am complaining about everything happened in my life .

You know what I have learned

1)world is not bad because bad people have power but because good people have forgot how to unite and use their own power.

2)I am not going to regret having choosen or met wrong people in life..

Because...

No one can teach you the right lessons better than wrong people :)

3)If you want to live happy life ,tie it your goal not to people or things.

Do you know diary ,why maharaj giriraj and udayveer were sucessful because

4)"the difference between a successful person and others is not lack of strength, not lack of knowledge,but rather a lack of will."

Yes, diary I was mourning over Dadi sahib condition, I was mourning how J created chaos , how vijaybhai is defenceless against udayveer, his name itself is enough to make him to spread a red carpet and allow udayveer to walk on it and invite him to run his evil plan's. how could he help me to stand against him and be my chanakya and me chandragupt .How my father or should I call Mahraj Brijraj was more a proud and class showy king disgraced my efforts .i was a disgrace to him because I did not have upbringing of a princess manners etiquettes is all that matters, princess are just like to be used as spawn or like a show piece .

They say I am too stubborn that In my stubbornness I destroyed devghad prestige . I was not worthy of being yuvrani ,not a princess ,not their daughter , not their sister ,not grand-daughter,even below the servant working in this palace.

Maharaj Brijraj and JaiNandini has joined their forces to dump me from this palace their insults, tantrums their manipulating schemes ,they are players and play games like never ending.

What to say about maharani Komal yes , I am going to cut all my relations because in this palace the only thing that remains forever is lifeless statues she is quite as ever playing the role of a queen of maharaj brijraj , daughter-in law of dadisahab performing her duties not loving them.

You know diary , my marriage ,I was sacrificing myself .i was fed up of udayveer and maharaj giriraj politics .like an evil poisonous serpent they have coiled around the Devghad suffocating ,biting spreading the venom .

Soon everyone gone against me.

The completion of the contract that yuvrani of devghad will be married to yuvraj of jaighar was like a death certificate I have to sign on my own death.

One day...

I was informed by servant that Maharaj giriraj had called me ,I went to him.

"You know her highness manyata kumari what has let you to agree or the correct word I must use is submit yourself to my son is that he is the yuvraj and my son" he spoke the word yuvraj and son in proud tone "that we never let anyone stand against us."

" And the reason I have called you is I want you to sign this paper."

Manyata:"What is it about ?"

"It's the contract papers her highness." Maharaj giriraj spoke in an informing manner.

She took the paper from him and started reading the contract.

Her face from attentive was shifted by shock.

All the time studying her emotion which was clearly reflected on her face and body language which she obviously never pay attention was used against her to read her mind by predators whom she always fall prey looking at her change expression.

Giriraj spoke with a thin mysterious smile as he is playing the game of riddles of words : "I hope you are well aware of your position and power and behave like civilized princess ."he spoke like a teacher is going to announce the result of the student to their parents.

It didn't go unnotice by her ,his tone his words, analyzing him as well as absorbing the legal matters of the contract both side by side .By reading the contract first thing she marked in her list that the contract he made as well as Maharj Giriraj was like a phase changing riddle confusing and always favouring him even if court case happened against the contract he made it in such a way that it was always favoured him more than anyother. He makes his opponent a hell lot to pay.

Seeing the changing expression a smirk appeared in his face.

"What a lamb?" He thought .

Manyata:"Are you serious about this."

Giriraj :" well I am always serious about my riyasat ,my yuvraj s life particulary about his marriage to a yuvrani who has jailed my son , disgraced him and more than that you make him fall in love and you are marrying him for his riyasat,power and you have nothing to give him as anyother yuvrani would have given him . what do you think of yourself ? you are nothing and you have nothing to give my yuvraj."

The calm regality and the code of conduct of a royal was replaced by the tone and words were dripping venom by him.

His expression suddenly changed like a calmness before a storm .

"Her highness you should look at your hands" he pointed towards her hand " what do you have after small sigh he spoke" nothing... nothing to give ,your hands are bare ."

"Even if you asked forgiveness still I won't be able to give you." After a little while he spoke

"I neither forgive nor forget ." he spoke like it is one of the seven commandments he follow.

"Well I am pretty sure that if this marriage happens you will also tarnish the reputation of jaighad and we will also be bare hands like you have done to yourself and devghad."

Tears filled her eyes .She was suffering the blames of his father and jainandini but now it has pushed her sanity that it became insufferable.

Satisfied that he got what he want tears are proofs that you can't bear the pain anymore and very close to breaking her.

"Oh no don't think that I am affected by that water from your eyes, you are just a common girl who has been made a yuvrani and you will become an incompetent maharani.

"Enough I had enough .. I am quiet that does not mean you can speak to me like this ",she roared her outburst was loud enough to be heard outside the room.

A smirk appeared across his face ,burst out my little lamb and do a mistake in the heat of moment that I have created he thought in his mind.

"If I am such incompetent then why did you get it signed by dadisahab the marriage contract of yuvraj and yuvrani of devghad."

"Oh.. that you did not know how old relations the jaighad and devghad through generations we have.

How can we let devghad fall her highness ." he spoke like he is the best friend anyone would want.

Manyata:"If we have friends like you there is no need of enemy."

"Now.. now... watch your tongue what did I say about behaving like a civilzed ."

"Hmm." he poke like that she is amusement for him .

"Well I think you did not understood the contract well its obvious . no one is friend and no one is enemy we all have our own goals for which we live it's the purpose of life."

"well let me help you as you always required ."he offerd his help.

manyata:"wait whatever you want to explain about this new contract you will be explaining in presence of another rajwada. As I know you will be hiding your agenda behind this contract."

Gir:"as you wish .. I was going to do another favour on you ." he spoke like he was just giving favours.

"Well whom would you like to call your drunken father who is loosing himself in gambling and drinking with his mistress."

"Or would you like to call your quite as a statute your mother."

Manya:" no maharaj giriraj they are not the one who made a princess but he is the one who has taught me to be one of rajwada ."

She dialed the no. in her phone and called him.

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Chapter 2

After some time ...

Manyata was sitting on the chair of dadisahab in her devghad office room and was looking at ther person in attentive manner analyzing his every move as he is reading each and every line .

He read through the contract understanding the cons and pros of the contract.

Analyzing it with all his knowledge of studying business and laws of it .

"Vijay bhai what s the hidden agenda of this contract." Manyata asked a little excited as she was curious and wants to know what other bomb is going to be exploded.

"Manyata bhai this is the contract that you will not be having any wealth or claims of the property of jaighad and you will be divorced within six months after your marriage with yuvraj udayveer singh."

A shock of wave passed through her face.even marriage has not happened & he has planned the divorce also this only means he has e very long detailed plan she thought .

"And it states that till that time period maharaj of jaighad will use any property of devghad and you will not be able to stop him."

"Signing this contract you are going to give the entire devghad property for any use for six months till you are married and he will have the power of attorney till that period and if you die within this time he will overtake this kingdom."

Manyata: "why is he after devghad , he wants devghad riyasat that greedy man" she spoke with anger.

"This is a trap I knew it ,this a way of capturing devghad."

"But I don't understand devghad treasure is not in a good condition we have AryanRai chowdhary and his father Mr. chowdhary has won elections and they are hot on our tail . they are harassing us legally they had put us on inquiry we cannot have any tenders anymore how can we earn our wealth again.even this palace belongs to udayveer and now he wants our entire devghad property ." not able to find the missing leads throught all the happening of the incidents and now one more puzzle to solve.

Vijay: manyata bhai , we are under inquiry by minister Chowdhary till we do not get clean chit we will not able to get any tenders , we will be not be able to fill our treasure. Devghad will be not able to rise in power this is the time when other kingdoms try to exploit it.

He informed her .

"soon in mahasabha elections will be held. In previous election status reports devghad was bit ahead from jaighad because of dadi sahib ."showing the bar graph of the results of previous election on his laptop.

"And the election was won by raighad riyasat but more than that devghad has grown to special power in mahasabh although they did not won the election." His voice changed as something important is going to come.

"And because of that special power jaighad is still sticking with us. That is why maharaj giriraj is desperate to marry the yuvrani of devghad with yuvraj of jaighad."

"It is not the wealth or the property of devghad or the yuvrani of devghad he wants that special power which dadi shab has earned because dadisahab is in coma this power is transferred to yuvrani."

"What is this power vijaybhai " enquired manyata as she was curious and wants to know more about this power .

Vijay:" it can be used only twice it has been used once by dadisahab but there is one last time it can be used again .its vote in the favour to a decision which is equivalent that whover has it in his favour they almost wins it.

The first time it was taken on the rule that on getting divorced the yuvrani will be getting her entire throne back without any claims of her husband on it.because at that time the bride's kingdom was misused by the groom s kindom ."

"Due to male dominant socities they were not ready to accept that a queen can rule without a king ."

"But due to this special power was used this rule was implemented."

Manyata bhai I think through this contract maharaj giriraj wants to use this power through you in favour of him.

But in the situation in which dadisahab has signed the contract with jaighad to remain a part of mahasabh if we do not remain a part of mahasabha we would have lose this power.so she did what was necessary at that moment ." he reasoned out and joined the links of incident towards which were leading to one another.

Hearing this information manyata now understood why dadisahab signed the contract.

"Think manyata bhai do you want devghad to destroyed by your ex-lover Aryan rai chowdhary whose love for you has died and thirsty for revenge.or the yuvraj udayveer singh because of whom a little bit of repuatation is still there.because devghad's yuvrani is on the blame game ."

"Blame game." She shrieked out as if vijay bahi isgoing to added new in the list of family members where jainadni and second Maharj Brijraj is on the postion who are cursing her even to be born in this family.

"Yes , her highness,blame game blaming for being a princess , blaming for being fiance, blaming for being daughter, blaming for being sister, blaming for being the ex-lover ." sweet ,hilarious and devghad's personal human search engine is just going to added in the list of abusive.

"You just blames other for all your problem you are not finding solutions " scolding her for her mistakes and quikly calmed down .

"the spider has webbed his trap." He spoke in a very serious tone using the codewords for enemy .

"You are caught in it by struggling you are getting yourself tangled in it more and more." He spoke imagining manyata as a fly who has been caught in the spider web.

Manyata was also imagining herself like a fly with face of manyata and body of fly.she clutched her neck like the ropes of web was suffocating her,her hands and legs are struggling but they are getting more and more tangeled and the spider with the face of Giriraj and body of spider having eight legs was moving and grining towards her his grin is becoming wider and wider he shows his fangs .she is going to be the lunch. She increased her struggle more she was getting tangeled more due to her panic and chances of survival was decreasing, tears sliding down her cheeks make the rope more stronger .

Sweat appeared on her face . vijay was seeing her expression understanding the imagination that he himself has visioned he made her seat on the sofa and gave her a glass of water that was already placed on the table.

Manyata drank the whole glass and even sprinkled some water on her face to wake up from the horror fantasy she had just witnessed she looked at vijay bhai as a child would have looked at his parents when there parents has just told not to watch that horror movie and the child has watched trying to be brave or just too stubborn to not to listen his parents and is hell scared now even to go to bathroom in night.

"I know being in your place , in one side there is well and the other side cliff." Vijay spoke again imagining and also making her imagine.

"You are in between standing on the narrow path on one side there is deep dangerous cliff and on the other side there is a dark deep well ."

"Well if you jump from the cliff you gonna die."

"But if you jump in the well there is a possibility of surviving again."

"First you jump in the well by tying yourself with a rope and stay there for some time so that your enemy think he is the winner and then by using the rope you can come up giving shock to your enemy that he has been bluffed ."

Manyata :"I tell you ... vijay bhai ." a relief passed through her face and she felt safe as there is no knew addition in the list .finally she found that the other horror fantasy came with a happy ending.

But more than a horror fantasy it was the key component principle of their plan that will soon be designed and implemented .

Both smiled looking each other as they had relief ,faith and most newly founded hope that this war will soon going to witness another battle but not with her alone but also with his sweet caring ,hilarious and human search engine of devghad her vijaydinanath chauhan. Who has really became a supportive father figure to her that line was so true "rishtey me to hum tumhare baap lagte hai aur naam hai vijaydeenanath chauhan."may not be a real father but yes he truly fits in the figure of father scolding as well as guiding and nurturing their children and doing same thing here for his sister.Sometimes she wondered why he did not became the heir of devghad there would be no such problem. Udayveer will not marry vijaybhai but if I woluld be in his place I would have married my Unnati with him manyata thought as she hugged him tightly.

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RES
will read in detail both the chaps n comment😊
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so nyc stry...
is uday a evil here..isnt he going to support manyata????
giriraj is sooo evil hate him sooo much
and vijay bhai is sooo sweet

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Chapter 3

The Blue Nile

The blue Nile being the most well known pool-side lounge and bar was brimming with rich men and women like any other perfectly ordinary night.Everbody there was lost in their own world ,a world where there is no marriage chains ,no family restrictions enjoying a freedom that has no morality,no Indian ethics they don't care whose wife they are dancing ,flirting or going to spend night with ,entertaining each other whoever they like , intoxicated with drugs ,gambling and high on alchol.

Located in Outskirt from the city of Mumbai and between lonavla special securities measures were taken for no media intervention and not every rich person being allowed without their security checks and routines to maintain the privacy of their customers and clients .

A tall built man dressed in expensive suite with a glittering diamond "B"letter on his left side of his coat sitting on a plush sofa across 7.with a glass of expensive whisky in one hand and holding cards in one hand .he has already lost the rounds but still playing .

A women in black net designer sari dressed in a way showing the curves of her body walked towards him seductively and sat on the arm of the sofa beside him.he handed him a new glass of drink and smiled assuring him that she is with him.

The man took a sip of his drink and spoke:"Maya ,you know my needs and me so well."

Maya:"Brij why wouldn't I , whatever I am doing for you it's not a duty that has been assigned to me it's out of love and care that I have for you."

Brij:"that's why I am grateful to you."

Maya:"you are just grateful that's the only thing you can do"

She stood up and walked to a corner of the room.

Brij followed her excusing himself from the game .He placed his both hands on her shoulder and turned her facing towards him

"Maya please at least you understand me what will I do without you whenever I feel low only name that comes to my mind is you " cupping her hands he spoke.

"Brij why me... why were you not able to marry me at that time why were you weak at that moment when I needed you the most why I have to sacrifice my happiness at that moment why why "she started to shake him .

"Maya I was scared masaheb would have banished me from the property she would have played her games to hurt you and only by being king of devghad I could save you ,being a common man I would never be able to fight with masaheb."

" and now she is in coma paying for her bad deeds she had done to us."

"what about komal Brij I thought she would take my place she would keep you happy "

"komal will never able to give me that happiness as she does not understand me"

"Maya let just not discuss this... now smile and wish me luck "

"you will win this Brij you will never lose as I will not let you ever lose after all I am your ladyluck".she smiled to him.

They both join the game and Brij won in the last round.

They both celebrated their victory and slept in hotel room.

At night

A mobile phone rings maya woke up hearing the ring of her phone she goes in a corner of the room alarmed by the presence of Brij sleeping on the bed.

"hello "

Man: "you still have the effect on him"

Maya: "I am doing what you want me to do"

Man:"I exactly know what are you doing I am watching you "

Maya:"what .." scared that he might see both of them in room.

Man:"drown him in gambling and alchol spend as much time with him he really needs poor man" he laughed .

Maya: "please i can't do this anymore I have a daughter."

Man:"Oh yes yes you have to do this for your daughter and for your other business if these are reveled you will lose so much that I will personally take care of that " he threatened her.

Man:"Better make him lose ".

He cut the call .

She deleted his number from the call list following strict instruction given by that man .

She looked apologetically at the sleeping Brij.

"I am sorry its better you Lose than me."

And slept beside him.

Edited by urvashihiran - 11 years ago

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