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Posted: 11 years ago
ADRIFT: Epilogue

The commotion at the door was proof enough that somebody important had arrived. It wasn't unexpected though, in a Bollywood celebrity party such as this one, for flashlights and footsteps to randomly start moving around in all directions every now and then. But for once, the air seemed more buzzed than usual. Bittuji turned towards the door, and he wasn't surprised. It was RK and Madhu, making a grand public entrance after a long hiatus. This was the launch party of their latest movie together, and Bittuji was in charge. He smiled, this movie was the funnest projects he had ever worked on. It took a long time to get started, because even though RK loved the story, he didn't want to act any more and just produce it. Madhu tried to convince him to go back to acting because it was his true passion, but he only agreed when Madhu agreed to act in the movies again. RK insisted that Madhu was talented and it was his fault that she had quit. Madhu insisted that the last movie she did had cost her too much and she did not want to act again. For days they bickered like only his Chief and his biwi could, and eventually they compromised. Then they bickered about getting plastic surgery, which also ended in a compromise as they both went through it on the same day.

Then came the media storm, who were stunned by the twin news of Madhu being alive as well as RK-Madhu acting together again after all this while. They had spent weeks hiding from the media who were dying to know the story, and Bittuji smiled remembering all the pranks and disguises Madhu and RK had resorted to, to steal some privacy for themselves. The best moment however was when, on the last day of their shooting, they had all discovered Madhu was two months pregnant. Chief was over the moon, and once that news eventually leaked out, they had to spend no effort on promoting the movie at all over the last three months as the editing etc was being completed. This movie was a superhit even before release, Bittu knew. And so did the star couple, who were now entering the party. Madhu, now showing a small five month belly, was glowing on RK's protective arm, who himself looked happier than Bittuji ever remembered him seeing. Bittuji's eyes turned wet as he prayed God to preserve this joy and keep them all blessed. RK and Madhu were totally lost without each other, and he had seen them both very closely when they were each lost in their darkness, surviving from one moment to the next, floating aimlessly adrift. That was all wrong. Thankfully they had both emerged through the darkness and found each other again.

The only place that Rishabh and Madhubala could ever be and should ever be was with each other, hand in hand, just like right now, Bittuji thought.

RK seemed to read Bittuji's thoughts and agree, as he smiled, then bent slightly to his right and kissed his biwi.


The End

Edited by teekay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
me first! 🥳

such a mind blowing and apt end to the story! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
i love the way u write! 👏
pls pls pls rite more stories 😳 pls pls...pretty pls 😊
awesome epilogue! i loved how u showed them entering the launch party inspite of madhu being pregnant 👏 👏

just luv it!
thank u! thank u so much for writing this FF 😊
i will be waiting for more stories from u

-love
Hiya
Edited by war_is_peace - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Authors' Note

So, here we are, finally at the end of this story. I just thought I would quickly write a few lines to thank you all one more time for reading and encouraging me. I started writing this story on a whim, breaking my usual silence on the forum for a bit, and I have to say I really enjoyed it. In some ways, it was cathartic, but mostly, it gave me the chance to imagine one world where RK and Madhu lived and loved. I know this story was mostly painful, and I apologize to those of you who felt pained, angry or just frustrated at where I took the story. I did get around to the happy ending, so hopefully I am little bit redeemed in some of your eyes... (please? pretty please?) I am also a bit thankful that many of you who thought RK should die/be punished severely etc etc in the first few chapters, desperately wanted me to save him and reunite RM by the end - which makes me believe I wasn't all wrong in taking the redemption route I took.

Anyway, I am glad I finished this just in time before the show leaps painfully ahead. I do not think if I will follow the show/forum any more, but it was fun while it lasted. Thank you again for reading, and please please share feedback on the overall story, on my twisted imagination, on the writing style, things that can be improved to make it a better reading experience and anything else. Love you all.

Cheers and adios
Taru
Edited by teekay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story 👏..Thanks for the happy ending...
Waiting for your next story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Outstanding...this story deserves a humongous appreciation...👏👏👏👏👏

I would be waiting for more stories coming from you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic end
Glad that u saved rk n even got him redeemed
Superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sigh (happywala hehe) .. So beautifully captured moments of RK's final fight to live on just for his Madhu. RK-Madhu are true fighters and though they drifted off due to circumstances and fate...am glad that they learned to let go of their things like ego, pride, insecurities, past, pain, hurt so that they can start afresh !! They even proved that death can't be answer to all the miseries and cliff isn't the best spot to one's life (lol) !!
I loved they way they recarved their lives in the film industry to become the talented star couple and parents !! Well in other words, they reestablished that they truly are soulmates who are complete only when are with each other period.
Uff.. Bittuji being the witness to their bumpy life-ride feeling those emotions and supporting both of them always and is like the brother they never had !! He is the true asset and that string support system when it comes to rishbala and their love story hehe !! Guess without Bittuji Rishbala love story is incomplete !

Taru, you are truly one awesome and talented writer with a beautiful knack of storytelling !! Hope you return soon with one more enthralling fic on Rishbala... May not be in the show, but through such works we can cherish rishbala forever. Please come back soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear
i m going to miss dis ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful ending loved it ,but please write more stories on rishbala please dear ,if not in this forum please write in fan fiction forum ,please you are a awesome writer ,please write a,hot dark love story
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow! what an ending! marvelous! superb! out of this world! thanks a lot for finishing the story.

you truely are a very talented and brilliant writer, and if you are planning on sticking around in the forum, I would love to read more of your story. I prefer if you don't leave, actually I insist to all the writers including you not to leave. your amazing writing skills will keep Rishbala alive in our heart and mind.

God Bless You.


Edited by SVK1234 - 11 years ago

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