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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was their anniversary, and panchi was waiting for her husband Ranveer to show up. Things had changed since their marriage, the once cute couple couldn't-live-without-each-other had turned bitter.

Fighting over every little things, both didn't like the way things had changed.

Panchi was waiting to see if Ranveer remembered it was their anniversary!

Just as the door bell rang she ran to find her husband wet and smiling with a bunch of flowers in his hand.


The two started re-living the old days. Making up for fights, then was d plan for champagne, light music And it was raining outside! It was perfect.

But the moment paused when the phone in the bedroom rang.

Panchi went to pick it up and it was a man. "Hello ma'am I'm calling from the police station. Is this Mr Ranveer Shergil's number?"
"Yes it is!"

"I'm sorry ma'am; but there was an accident and a man died.

We got this number from his wallet; we need you to come and identify his body."

Panchi's heart sank.!!! She was shocked!

But my husband is here with me?"

"Sorry ma'am, but the incident took place at 2 pm, when he was boarding the train."

Panchi was about to lose her conscience.

How could this happen?!

She had heard about the soul of the person coming to meet a loved one before it leaves!

She ran into the other room.

He was not there. It was true! He had left her for good!!

Oh God she would have died for another chance to mend every little fight! She rolled on the floor in pain. She lost her chance! Forever!

Suddenly there was a noise from the bathroom, the door opened and Ranveer came out and said "Darling, I forgot to tell you my wallet got stolen today".

LIFE MIGHT NOT GIVE YOU A SECOND CHANCE. SO NEVER WASTE A MOMENT WHEN YOU CAN STILL MAKE UP FOR YOUR WRONGS!!!



No one is promised tomorrow. Have a wonderful Life with no regrets!


I hope uh guys did not waste ur time reading it 😉
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niya_ss thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one 😊👏
keep writing more on RaHi😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow this is so beautiful
really loved it
Keep writing


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Posted: 11 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭
Dis really made me Cry...😭😭
Very Touchy...
Tooo Goooddd 👏👏👏
Although, I'm a Kisha fan, but I really enjoyed dis 1...
Really a fabulous job ⭐️
Plzzz write smthin 4 Kisha tooo... 😳 & Do write more...
PM me whnevr U do sooo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY u scared me first😲
panchi ke sath mere jan me bhi jan ayi ranveer ko dekh kar😆
this is awesome keep writing more👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! What a writing i just loved it,please can you write for kisha also.

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