KriYaansh OS- That Kiss. (Based on Precap)

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OS- That Kiss..Of Love.
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"Rey Mom nahi rahi..."


She wasn't crying because of the cruel truth which she just blurted. No, she is not weak. No, No, No. Her mind chided but nothing happened. Still tears were making their way out, making her a mess. No, Kriya was never a mess. She rarely cried. She is a fighter, a true fighter. Fight- This is what she have been doing, fighting from herself, from others, from everyone. But today, there was no end, no stopping, no emotional restrictions. And she let it go, finally... Crying with whatever strength she was left with after speaking the truth. She cried her heart out, which was locked in a small prison from the day she lost her mom. And today, she finally let it go.



He was left numb, and this surely wasn't the effect of that spiked paan. No, this was much more, much more painful, heart-wrenchingly painful. He just couldn't think of anything else, all his senses gave up. And then came the moment when he was left blank. He was no longer hearing her words, no longer hearing himself. This was not what he ever imagined. Staggering in his state he reached out to her, placing his one hand on her shoulder. He just couldn't see her cry. He never could see her cry. His heart was filled with gloom and pain mirroring her's.

"Kriyaa..."

He managed to speak in his drunken yet shocked voice.
And she hugged him, for her life. Yes, this was what she dreamed of, ever since she lost her mom, to be in embrace of his loving arms. She no longer resisted those tears, rather having him near was the best thing, even if she loses herself in this emotional pool because she knew he was there to pull her back to reality. She cried more, probably for the first time after that gloomy day when she lost her mother.

"I am so sorry kriya.." This was all he could utter and he hugged her back, comforting her. He was hurt, just like her. Why didn't she ever tell him about this?

He cupped her face, looking at her broken figure. More than her, his insides were broken, just few minutes before. Why Kriya...Why? Why you couldn't tell me? Why you wanted to bear it all alone when once we decided to share all our pains? Why kriya...
"Ek baar to trust karti...Ek baar vishwaas karti mujhpar..."

He spoke his heart out immediately; maybe this was another effect of being drunk.

"Mujhe aap par poora vishwaas hai Rey..."

She managed to speak from her throat that has refused to do anything than cry. And what followed next in this moment so weak was something which they never imagined happening like this.

He pressed his thumb on her cheek, closing his eyes as he could feel her breath on his lips. They were close, vulnerable, drunk, emotional and what not? And most importantly, They were broken, their hearts having scars of their past.
He could feel her increased heart beat, matching the pace of his own. Her body melted under his touch and proximity. No, this wasn't just one weak moment; it was far more than that. This was what they required, to mend the open holes of past.
And soon his lips meshed with hers, gently, sucking all her pains away, mending her broken form. And their senses gave up soon. Only thing they could feel was- that kiss. It seemed like having no end, no boundaries, no restrictions, just out and out love and longing to have each other, longing to fulfill the promises which once they took, longing to mend each other's broken hearts.
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[A/N= *Blush* I don't know mene kya likha... Kyu likha.. Bas likh diya.. ☺️ PS: Title pe gaaliyan mat dena. I was B-L-A-N-K. I just didn't knew ki kya title rakhu... So i wrote whatever came into my mind in last second. :P


Please do leave your reviews! :D ]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res😳
i unresd it soon 😳

upiii🤗 *big tight hugs*

i was kinda expecting an os frm u and here u r wit this amazing piece of work👍🏼

jus loveedd ittt🤗

d way u described kriya's and rey's feelings wer totallyy awesomeee⭐️

and the hug

lovedd these lines :

She no longer resisted those tears, rather having him near was the best thing, even if she loses herself in this emotional pool and she knew he was there to pull her back.

finally finally d kiss☺️☺️

again quoting d lines u used❤️

It seemed like having no end, no boundaries, no restrictions, just out and out love and longing to have each other, longing to fulfill the promises which once they took, longing to mend each other's broken hearts.


fabulous write-up upi u made mee moree happy by writing this🤗

and this for uuu


Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh upi dii dis was so beautiful khushi ke aansu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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When my writter didu writes..
Me : yayyyaaayyy... Jumps.. Dreams.. Ufff.. Itte saare reactions ek saath :p
awssmmm os di..
Haiyeee aisa lag raha tha me visually dekhing KR k KISS SCENE KO ^_^
Kria n Rey k emotions BEAUTIFULLY DESCRIBED :*
Beautiful it ijjj...
Loved it :* <3
Edited by Madhu_ArSha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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upi.. this was fab...superb yaar..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww dii... Superb 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss


unresss...


Saali i sooo knew u will use this collage... meko poora yakeen tha... 🤣



coming to this...


oohhh mannn...uppuuu... m all numb right now???


now??? no... i'm numb since yestrday whn clock striked 7.30 😛


I loved the title waise...coz when u asked us... I was sooo... BLANK...


I loved how u emoted there emotions... This was just... uff.. ab samaj jaa kya tha...


I think this moment is something which we used to read in Fanfics...and wish to see it happening in real... Now i guess all our wishes one by one r coming true... 😳



All i can say is...i loved it..!!!


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome...
Really lovely...

and beautiful...

It was just amazing... I loved how you associated the feelings with it...

Beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful os...
it was kinda a magical...
really loved it...the way u hv penned down...gosh dam beautifully👍🏼...
this os made me more eager for today's episode😳..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! Kya likha hai yaar!! I m so touched!! D emotions u have described seems lyk kriyansh came to u n told u op dis!! 😉 😛 😃

Awesome!!!

Aur kya likhu???!!!! Pata nahi! Bt ye pata hai ki ye bahut zyada a6a vala os hai!!!

Thnx a lot!! Pm ke liye! N os likhne ke liye!!! 😆 😛 😊

Aur likhna zarur! N muje pm bhi karna!!!

Kk lemme confess i m a huge fan of ur writings!!

I m waiting for one more!!

Hope its on d way!!! 😉 😃

K nw waiting for another one! Bbye!

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