ll The Revenge Of Love ll Chapter 14 Updated at pg 93 on 31st May...

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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

UDAYVEER SINGH:He belongs to a rich family ...His mother deid whn he was only 5 years old...So he is bit cruel and a playboy...Beside this he loves his father so much and can do anything for him...~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

MANYATA KAPOOR:A girl with lot of miseries in her life...She has noone to live for...But still she is leaving...She has a very best frnd...Manyata lives in village... Priyal Gor

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Jairaj Singh:UV's father.A business tycon.He has a lot of money but its earned dishonest way...
Amit Behl

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Karan:UV's best frnd Karan Wahi as the host of Nach Baliye 5

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Tamanna:Manyatas frnd...
Chhavi Pandey

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(If any character enters in stry thn i will definetly introduce wid u guyzzz )
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CHAPTERS
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
CHAPTER 10
CHAPTER 11
CHAPTER 12
CHAPTER 13
CHAPTER 14

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Radhika

@perfection

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Posted: 11 years ago

A blow of wind hitted her face .The sun ray fell on her face and enhanced her beauty..She was walking independently...But suddently she collided with a guy
GUY:ANDHI HO KYA ??DEKHKE NHI CHAL SKTI ???AGLI BAAR SE DEKHKE CHAL NA ...
(R U BLIND ??CANT SEE WHILE WALKING..NEXT WATCH WHILE WALKING)
after saying it he turned and watched her and was totally mesmerized wid her beauty...
MANYATA:IF I COULD..(in her mind)
at tht time tamanna appears and
TAMANNA:MANYATA ...MAINE TUMHE MANA KIYA NA MERE BINA BAHAR NHI NIKALNE KE LIYE{TO MANYATA}...AND TU DEKHKE NHI CHAL SAKTA KYA..EK TO GALTI KHUD KARTA HAIN UPAR SAI MERE DOST PE INJAM DAL RAHA HAI..{TO KARAN} (MANYATA I HAD FORBID U NOT TO GO OUTSIDE WITHOUT ME AND CANT U SEE WHILE WALKING.FIRST DOING MISTAKE AND THN BLAMING IT ON MY FRND)
MANYATA:PLZZ TAMANNA LETS GO FRM HERE..
TAMANNA:NO,MANNU HE..(CUTS HER BETWEEN)
MANYATA:AM SORRY MR.AS I AM BLIND I COULDNT SEE U..PLEASE FORGIVE ME..
the guy felt sorry for her
GUY:OH CRAP,AM REALLY SORRY ..I WOULDNT HAVE TOLD U SOO MUCH..ACTUALLY AM IN HURRY..MY FRND IS COMING TO INDIA SO I HAVE TO RECIEVE HIM ...BTW WHTS UR NAME???
MANYATA:(WITH A SMILE IN HER FACE)AM MANYATA..AND Y U HAVE CAME HERE IN THIS VILLAGE ???
GUY:MANYATA NYC NAME ..MYSELF KARAN..I HAVE CAME HERE TO SPEND MY VACATION WITH MY AUNT...
TAMANNA:AB YAHI REHNE KA IRADA HAI YA APNE DOST KO RECEIVE KARNE JAYEGA??(NOW U WANT TO STAY HERE OR WILL GO TO RECEIVE UR FRND)
KARAN:(ROLLING HIS EYES)OK AM LEAVING..WILL MEET U SOON MANYATA..
KARAN LEFT THE PLACE
TAMANNA:OMG MANNU MUJHE LAGTA HAI VO TUJHPE LATTU HO GAYA (OMG MANYATA I THINK HE HAS GONE FLAT ON U )
MANYATA:PLZZ STP IT YAAR...
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The house was being decorated as a new bride...Everywhere of the house is happy about the arrival of HIM..ya he is coming back home after 6 years...Every one was happy..
JAIRAJ:WHT THE HELL ARE U DOING...ITNA BURA DECORATION MAIN APNI PURI JINDAGI MAIN NHI DEKHI ( I HAVE NEVER SAW A WORST DECORATION LIKE THIS IN MY WHOLE LIFE)
RAGHU UR FIRED..
RAGHU:SIR,PLZ FORGIVE ME..MAIN YE DECORATION JITNA JALDI HO SAKE CHANGE KARTA HOON (I WILL CHANGE THE DECORATION AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...)
JAIRAJ:TUM NHI JANTE KI MAIN JO BOLTA HOON WOHI HOTA HAIN . MAINE BOLA NA UR FIRED THN UR FIRED (U DONT KNW WHT I SAY THT HAVE OCCURE...I TOLD U UR FIRED THN UR FIRED)
RAGHU:PLZ SIR MERE CHOTE CHOTE DO BACHE HAIN (I HAVE TWO SMALL LIL CHILDREN)..
JAIRAJ:TO HELL WITH UR CHILDS..
he fired the sevent mecilessly...
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AT THE AIRPORT
KARAN:OH!YE FLIGHT ITNA DAIR KYU KAR RHA HAIN??(WHY THE FLIGHT IS DELAYING SO MUCH?)
thn a flight comes down,,,from tht flight a guy comes down...He was wearing a black sunglass...7 bodyguards came down wid him..Karan ran towards him and hugged him..
KARAN:AREY YAAR ITNA DAIR KYU LAGAYA..TU JANTA NHI MAINE TUJHE KITNA MISS KIYA..TU TOH MUJHE BHOOL GAYA ...HAYE YAAR KITNA BADAL GAYA TU... BADA HOT SHOT BAN GAYA.. LADKIYA TOH TUJHPE MARTI HOGI...(HEY FRND,Y U CAME LATE..U DONT KNW HOW MUCH I MISSED U ..U FORGOT ME NA...OMG UR TOTALLY CHANGED..U BECAME HOT...GIRLS ARE DROOLING FOR U NA)
he puts down his sunglass ..with his usual smirk he says..
: OH COME OMN AM NOT UR GIRLFRND THT U HAVE TO MISS ME OR I HAVE TO...AUR LADKIYA TO HUMPE KABSE MAR RHI HAI..(AND GIRLS ARE DYING FOR ME FRM BEFORE)
KARAN:OH! CHAL UDAY AB GHAR CHAL UNCLE TERA INTEZAR KAR RHA HOGA (LETS GO HOME UNCLE IS WATING FOR U)
UDAY:YA LETS GO...
PRECAP:::UDAY IN MANYATAS VILLAGE...
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I WONT HAVE CONTINUED THE STRY..BUT SOME OF MY FRNDS APPRECIATED MY WORK SO FOR THM AM CONTINUING THE STRY...
I WILL PM ONLY THE GUYZZ WHO WILL LIKE THE CHAP...
IF U HAVE QUESTION CAN ASK ME...
SOME INFORMATION OF STRY
1.MANYATA LIVES IN VILLAGE
2.MANYATA IS BLIND NOT THT BLIND THT SHE HAVE NO EYES..SHE HAS HER EYES PERFECT BUT SHE CANT SEE WID IT..
3.AS TAMANNA IS A PURE VILLAGE GIRL THTS Y SHE TALKS WID EVERYONE WID MANNERLESS WAY
4.MANYATA BELONGS TO CITY SO SHE KNWS ENGLISH AND HAVE MANNERS...
5.as manyata is frm village so she wears kumud /paro types dresses..

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

this is nice concept ... its new but i love it ... as manyta was blind so i m feel ver bad for her ... but nice jod do continue soon ... n pm me for sure 😉😉😉 great charector sketch n i love it 😃😃

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Radhika

@perfection

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kritika-
this is nice concept ... its new but i love it ... as manyta was blind so i m feel ver bad for her ... but nice jod do continue soon ... n pm me for sure 😉😉😉 great charector sketch n i love it 😃😃

thnx my jaan am getting emotional...ya i will ...agr pm nhi karungi toh reader kaha se milegi 😆