Arshi ff- 'FALLING IN LOVE WITH Ex-FIANCE * Part (6) up* Pg 65 *5

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ZakiZ
Khushi is in love with Shyam?

This will be cleared till part(2).

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: adhu11
can't wait.who is going to fall first?😉is it khushi or arnav?😕

Well, let's see.. 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Sanz.
ArHi Will See Each Other I Guess ; D

Will come along.. 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I can imagine what ll be the next chap like... but I ll see how u ll write thn I ll tell u what actully I thought n what twists u made thn... It ll be fun to read... well y tht creepwa in the story... I cant stand his name only...😡

Anyways hw khushi ll be the ex fiance of ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... m thinking on that... lets c how story ll unfold...

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Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
I can imagine what ll be the next chap like... but I ll see how u ll write thn I ll tell u what actully I thought n what twists u made thn... It ll be fun to read... well y tht creepwa in the story... I cant stand his name only...😡
Anyways hw khushi ll be the ex fiance of ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA... m thinking on that... lets c how story ll unfold...

Would love to hear from u that how u thought it'd be like?
And how it will be?? Do tell me whether u like it or not?!
About Shyam, u will find him mysterious!!
I'll reveal only some portion that how are ARSHI ex-fiance of each other in initial parts!!
Thnx for liking this concept..
I was worried Initially that how Would readers take this!?

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: 22Neha

Would love to hear from u that how u thought it'd be like?
And how it will be?? Do tell me whether u like it or not?!
About Shyam, u will find him mysterious!!
I'll reveal only some portion that how are ARSHI ex-fiance of each other in initial parts!!
Thnx for liking this concept..
I was worried Initially that how Would readers take this!?

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aree u just keep writing ree readers ll surely like it...
dont worry abt them...

Edited by marium-zamamii - 11 years ago

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Mehreen Bushra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Amazing concept dear...

Just read d teaser...

Its very interesting...

Update soon... :)

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sindhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

found different,,,,

continue soon

update soon and do pm me😊

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

HELLO GUYS!! 😃
Thnk u so much for ur amazing support...
I'm grateful to all the buddies who commented or liked...
This ff got the most response from the other two on-going ARSHI ffs..
IT RECEIVED 50+ LIKES!!
So, I planned something..
As Valentines Day is approaching, I thought to post something on its line...
Have a look -> V-DAY SPECIAL

CONTINUE GIVING UR FEEDBACK...
If there's any confusion, u r free to ask me in comment or pm me...
I've started writing with mystery for the first time..
Do let me know whether its good/not..

Okay, so, now I stop my bak-bak & Continue further WITH FIRST PART of this ff->

PART (1)

"Lavanya beta, aaj ki puja aap aur Arnav hi karenge." Said Subhadra in a strict tone.

ASR's head snapped up at this. First, this dadi makes Di cancel all my appointments, so I remain at home & now this. Enough is enough. He has to control the situation now. He can't let them ORDER him.

Before ASR could say something, La held his hand under the table & said to Dadi politely, "Dadi, I understand ur concern for our traditions, but they are not more important than happiness of ur grandson, is it? Pls, if he is not interested, let him be.. Afterall, I love the way he is." La said last line looking at him.
ASR smiled at this.

"I knew you'll support him like always. But I don't care. He has to come & u both have to swing Kanhaji(childhood form of Lord Krishna) together at 12. This is Mallik Tradition. And I won't let him break it." Subhadra said eyeing Arnav.

"Ummm, Dadi, ASR will follow everything one day. I'm sure of it. Till then, let's keep aside the argument at such an auspicious day." La tried to calm the argument.

"I'm lucky to have u as our daughter-in-law, though our son is devoid of religious feelings.." Subhadra's voice clearly showed her discontent.

ASR acknowledged the discontent in Subhadra's statement & said calmly, "I believe in things done from HEART❤️"

Subhadra was enraged at this. "Stop preaching that Shashi's daughter's sentiments. U broke up with her, but still following her values."

Silence. Yes, utter silence spread on dining table. ASR didn't made sn attempt to hide his anger & replied in an angry Voice," Dadi, we both parted mutually & it'll be good for u to stop dragging her name. AND BY THE WAY THE TRADITION U JUST NOW MENTIONED IS "RAIZADA TRADITION"... MALIKS HAVE ONLY ONE TRADITION "TO BREAK OTHERS HEART""

Subhadra, too, sensed the storm. So, she too changed the topic, "Lavanya beta, you're going to be Mrs. Lavanya Mallik in a week, right? Arnav, call a press Conference & announce ur mrg by urself before the D-day, i.e., Sunday."

ASR stiffened at the comment. This was not unnoticed by Lavanya. Hence, she intervened, "Dadi, u know right, ASR never makes public appearane. No one knows his looks. As every meeting in London is handled by Aman & Akash."

Anjali smiled widely & commented, "U know chhote, had Nani been present here, she Would have been so happy.. None of us knew this will happen to chhoti. But I'm glad you're fulfilling Nani's promise."

Subhadra shouted loudly, scaring the hell out of Anjali," Shut up, Anjali. Don't u know her name is prohibited in this House, in MALLIK MANSION, SHEESHMAHAL?" Subhadra said last three words looking at ASR.

ASR was furious. "Why the hell she's referring to SheeshMahal as Mallik Mansion? That bloody will.."
Cursing under his breathe, ASR pushed the chair on which he was sitting with full force. Everyone shivered looking at his furious form.
He shouted at Subhadra, "For the last time I'm saying this, this is sheeshMahal, not Mallik Mansion."
Without waiting for any reply, he moved out taking his car keys...
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"Haye re Nandkishore, Shashi babua, call titaliya. Shyam babua will be reaching here soon." Madhumati exclaimed coming into living room with her hands on her head.

Shashi motioned the maid to call Khushi while asking his jiji to have a seat beside her.
"Put ur newspaper aside. At least today. U know Shyam babua will be arriving soon." Saying this Madhumati snatched the newspaper from his hand & put it aside.

"Buaji, I'm over here." Saying this, Shyam took blessings from buaji & Shashi. Then he sat beside them when Buaji spoke up.
"Haye re Nandkishore. Where's this Payaliya? I've to call sankadevi's PA, Shruti, & myself inform her to cancel all of her appointments."

Shyam knew what will happen when Khushi comes to know of this. So, he immediately said, "Arey Buaji. What's need to cancel all appointments when puja will be held in evening. In fact, I came here to ask u if it will be okay if I take Khushi ji to Chandni Chowk Mandir? Its our family tradition to celebrate Janmashtmi there.

Madhumati hesitated a little & Shyam immediately knew the reason. He assured her, "Don't worry Buaji. ASR won't come there. And even if he's present, then what? They broke up a yr ago."

Madhumati said, smiling lightly, "Okay, babua, if u don't have any problem with her meeting her Ex-FIANCE, then w also have no problem, Nandkishore!"

Just then, the maid came & said, "Mam told to return this sari to u as its too traditional for her to wear."

Madhumati immediately hit her forehead with her hand, while saying, "Haye re Nandkishore! Arey o parmeshwari, kam se kam aaj ke din to sari pehen leti. Ee to laal bhi nahi hai. Har pati apni patni ko laal sari mein sabse pehle dekhna chahat hai..."

But Shyam cut Buaji, "Pls Buaji. I fell in love with western Khushi only & I adore anything she wear from her heart.."

MADHUMATI: U know Khushi is lucky to have u as her husband, Shyam babua.. U always agree to that sankadevi's every demand.. May be this is the reason she chose u as her husband. But u should not fulfill her every stupid wish. So, even if she denies, u r going to ORDER her to fast today, hence she WILL have to come to puja today."

"Buaji," Shyam tried to make her understand, "She has her own wish. Just like, u didn't celebrated Valentine's Day with her, she's not celebrating Janmashtami. U know Buaji, she has spent her complete childhood in LONDON. Hence, she's following their tradition. At least try to make her understand uncle Shashi. Pls, allow her to follow HER TRADITION."

Khushi heard the last line & immediately ran to Shyam & hugged him. "Thank u so much, Shyam. That means we can have Christian wedding.!"

Madhmati immediately slapped her forehead & exclaimed loudly, "Sankadevi, not a word more. Also, wear YOUR type sari, but pls be at home during nandkishore's celebrations. And that's an order. Also, U r marrying shyam babua next week on Sunday. I think u should call a press conference. Payal, who was going out secretly heard her buaji's statement & immediately butted in, "Don't worry, Khushi, I'll attend the press conference." Looking at her Buaji's irritated expressions, she continued, "U know right Buaji. She doesn't attend press conferences.. Don't worry, I'll handle it..
Anyways, no one has yet seen Khushi Gupta 'Jha' yet. Except Indian clients."

Payal giggles In an attempt to lighten the situation but Buaji lashes out on her... Khushi got angry at this.

KHUSHI: U know Buaji that I won't break Ninni's promise. So, stop bashing jiji..
It isn't her fault..
I thought to stay at home for a while but now, I'm better off to office.."
Saying this Khushi went out of the house completely irritated with her buaji..
Whereas Payal tried to calm down the fussing buaji & then started helping in puja preparations not before messaging to someone that she isn't coming..
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After driving rashly, Arnav reached a deserted road. He came out of the car & sit on the ground. Then he shouts, "Why? Why it is always ME? Why NANI? Why u left us Nani? First of all, I had to lose u, then my 'Kukku'. Now, I've fallen for Lavanya. She's perfect. U know, she cares for me so much. She always try to diffuse my fights with Subhadra MALLIK. U know, right? ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA belongs to Raizada only.. I'm changing my name back to Mallik. I've promised u Nani I'll take care of Kukku as her husband. But I failed. I failed, Nani. But, u know, I'll never ever go in front of media. It was ur wish that whole world see Kukku besides me. But I lost it.
But I'm still fulfilling the statement I promised u; though I broke the meaning of my sentence..
"I promise Nani, I'll hold Kukku's hand in front of the world.."
Arnav Mallik is neither seen in business world or media & nor will be, in future. I lost everything.
But, I won't lose RAIZADA HEIRITAGE, SHEESHMAHAL at any cost. For that, I already killed Arnav Singh RAIZADA. I'm ready to pay more price for it..
Here I'm. A loser. A BLOODY LOSER. May be this is the price for not taking care of ur Choti Nani.."
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Here, our Dear Khushi zoomed off to her office. She was still angry. "Urghhh!! 😡 why the hell Buaji brings up the same topic again & again? I've told her so many times not to discuss this. As I'm never going to break My Ninni's promise.. Its better I leave the house. Ohh! Anyway I'm leaving the house next week after my marriage with Shyam. He's soo understanding. I love him so much."
She recalled the morning argument where Shyam supported her.
Just then, her mobile beeped.
"1 new message
From Shyam..."

She opened the msg & frowned. Then a slight smile appeared on her face. She called her assistant, Shruti, & showed her a sari's design & instructed her to bring it till eve.
Seeing the design her mam was pointing, Shruti's eyes popped out.. She thought KKG might have opened wrong file as ummm... it was too different from what she usually wears!

SHRUTI(highly stammers): Ummm... mam...woo...actually...

KKG(shouts): Shruti, spit it out😡

SHRUTI(spoke in a single breathe): Mam, this design is Indian!! Are u sure, I give YOUR measurements for THIS blouse...

KKG: Any doubt?
Shruti nodded her head in no, but stood there.

KKG: Now go! (Almost shouted)
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Anjali came to her room. She was feeling low for what happened at the breakfast table.
"Why is Dadi behaving like this? What shhe thinks? That Chhote will forget his Kukku? He may not love her; but she will always remain his best friend." Her thought process was broken by Lavanya.

"Are Lavanya ji, aap? Come inside. Why standing there?"

Lavanya come inside & sat beside Anjali on her bed, "Di, forget whatever happened down. U know such things happens every now & then in this House. U should not take stress. Agree, dadi should not have pulled out that drama, but pls Di. U don't feel low, which I know u r feeling at the monent.." By the time Lavanya completed, Anjali was again smiling.

ANJALI: Lavanya, I'm fine now. Let's go. We have to do preparations for eve pooja of Kanha ji(Lord Krishna).

At this, Lavanya's face sadden, & Anjali knew the reason. Who else than her thick-headed brother? As soon as Lavanya goes out, Anjali took her phone & dialled her Chhote's number..
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"Shyam has done so much for me. He supported me when I ridiculed Indian traditions. He even made Buaji understand my beliefs. Can't I do this much for him. I'll surely visit Temple wearing this Red Sari in Traditional Style for the first time in life." Saying this, Khushi giggled to herself. Then, she again read the msg sent by Shyam few minutes ago,

"Wear anything u like, but pls come to Temple. We will swing Krishna ji together. Its said if u complete thus ritual at exact 12, then u will be together with each other no matter what may be the circumstances.."

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Arnav was drving his car back to office when his mobile rang.
"Di calling"

He quickly picked up the phone & on the bluetooth..
"Yes di. You ok? Is La fine?"

ANJALI: Lavanya is not fine..

ASR: What! Ok, relax di. I'm reaching SheeshMahal in 15 min..

ANJALI: No need of it Chhote. If u want her happy, then swing Kanhaji at midnight. You're going to marry her. And its a fact that if u swing Kanhaji at 12, then you will remain together no matter what.. pls Chhote... pls.. pls...

ASR: but di, u know I don't believe...

But Anjali didn't let him complete his sentence, " "Chhote, pls." Anjali said with fake angry Voice,
"I don't want to hear anything. Today is Janmashtami & though Lavanya don't speak anything in front of u does not mean she doesn't have expectations. All I'm asking u to do is to go to the temple & swing BalGopal Krishna with her at exact 12 at night. Is it too much to ask from u Chhote?"
Anjali asked the question getting emotional deliberately so that he agrees.

As expected, Arnav agreed to his Di's emotional blackmailing.
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In a temple near outskirts of Delhi..

An old lady was praying in front of Krishna ji's idol..
"Hey Bhagwan Krishna, u snatched my both bachcha's from me. My 'laddoo' & 'jalebi'..
Don't know why u kept me alive. Why u kept me alive in that fire? I don't have any aim in my life now. Either give me some aim or take me with u.."
Whilst praying, she drifted on her memory lane, How she lost her 'Laddu' & 'Jalebi'...

Flashback

The same old lady was running helter-skelter on the lonely roads of Lucknow..
Tears were pouring from her eyes. Pebbles were piercing in her feet.. But seems like the lady didn't care...
She ran as fast as she could & reached at her house which looked more like a Palace. But, true to what she heard, the outhouse was on fire..
She just hoped that 'They' r not inside..
Slowly, she moved towards the outhouse. The fire-extinguishers brought two completely burned bodies; one girl & one boy.
A loud, painful cry escaped the lady's mouth, "Laddu" & "Jalebi". The lady fainted on the spot...
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Here, I completed first part...
I'll post the next part on Sunday...
Or if this gets 55+ likes, I'll post it right away or else on Sunday...
Do give ur feedback...
Criticizm is also welcome..

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update update.. finally... was waiting... oh yeaahh...😉

Edited by marium-zamamii - 11 years ago