SS broken soul chapter 5 at11 4 feb - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Awesome SS 👏 Please continue😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi naddiya 😃
Its an awesome start truly 👍🏼 👍🏼
The way Raman unwrapped the towel just to help ishita was soo soo nice..i never imagined the towel scene could be portrayed is such an awesome way 👏 👏
And then ishita concern for raman health was soo sooo nice...love it 😛 😛
Raman emotional downpor and ishita trying to console him by letting him hold her hands was also very sweet and very well portrayed
You should definitely continue this beautiful story of yours..will wait eagerly for it 😳 😳
Thank you heaps for the pm and for starting a new story..send ya a buddy request to facilitate the sending of pm's 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Omg loved it plz plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this was something i luv abt u dear
thx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
naddiya di plzzz continue this.
plzzz write more na.
i have missed ur work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
yet another wonderful story from u. continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏🤗first thanks for the PM. sure plz continue,awesome story. i am waiting for next part.👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The candle had faded out it was all dark in room , Ishita was sitting next to his bedside helplessly as he was holding her hand tightly in his , he was in deep sleep off & on murmuring & moving his head

" i hate this person so much but today i can't hold myself "she placed her hand on his forehead & started running her fingers in his hairs,her gentle touch has soothing his ache.

"Ruhi " he cried

"Raman would you like to talk to Ruhi" she caress his face " should i call her?" she whisper ,he slowly open his eyes & tries to see her in the dim street light

" i want to tell her i love her " he sobbed

"you can tell her , wait i am calling her amma , if she is awake you can talk to her"she weeped his tears & dialed her number from other end no one attended the call " i guess she is asleep " she tries to calm him ,

"hmmm she must be busy like i use to be for her" he took a deep breath


There was pin drop silence in the room she very well knew he was awake ,just lying still pretending as if he was sleeping .

Her cell starting ringing she quickly picked it up "Ruhi" she became excite

"what happen to her ?" Raman tries to get up Ishita placed her other hand on his chest to stop him

"it is Our's Ruhi story time ,she is fine" she caress him "hello Ruhi" she panic as she could not hear anyone from other end

Raman sat grab the cell & put it on speaker "Ruhi " both called her together "Ishita Aunty Papa i am scared " she sobbed

"Ruhi baba we are here " she panic

" i am alone & it is all dark in here" she cried

"Ruhi where is your mama " Ishita asked her

"Ahh" Ruhi screamed & the call was disconnected

"Raman Ruhi " Ishita shakes him with full force she was dead scared ,he jump out of bed pulled her with him, with in no time both reached down stairs

"Ishita relax"he tries to calm her while driving , how he was driving he didn't knew as his sight was getting blur

He covered the 30 min distance in 10 mins ,both ran in the home , there was no one around

"Ruhi " Ishita screamed as she saw her lying near staircase in pool of blood

Raman rushed & picked her up " Ishita we have to take her to hospital " he drag her to car laid Ruhi in her lap

"Raman all my fault " she whisper ,he look at her she was all pale "you are Dr check her" he shakes her with full force

"ha"she came to life & started checking her he drives to near hospital


"Raman tell me she will be fine na" she asked him as he came & stand with her outside OP ,he look at her she was frighten ,turn all white as if someone had sucked out all her blood ,He wrap his arm around her shoulder to stop her shiver " you pray she will be fine" his heart was sinking itself but he consoled her

" all is my fault , because of me she was all alone today " she clutched his shirt & weeped he pull her more close to him



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Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏lovely yaar. continue...
Edited by AJIKUMAR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Lovely update di
Hope ruhi will be fine
Cont soon

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