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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Painful part...
Loved it...
Geet n meher both critical...hope everything gets well soon...
Maan so broken...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
part 12
nice part...
OMG poor them...
Geet and Mehar too...
how is Maan gonna cope up with Armaan?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
awesome update...feeling sad 4 maneet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
very painful..both geet n meher in hospital n maan is breaking down n feeling helpless..amy didnt know the seriousness in air..poor baby searching for mom n sis
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
oh gosh yeah kya hogaya 😭😭
one side geet and one side meher, whats happening to the small family of Maan 😭😭 its so painful hope the family is united again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

am shocked and shattered beyond words
i can feel my tears sliding down my cheeks while i write this
waiting for more
please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heart wrenching update ,... 😭

now what ????

me waiting for more

thnx for pm dear

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
superb update
mehar is suffering from heart disease n now her situation is critical
geet condition is no less...
maan is so broken
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Part 13



Mom Maan called the moment he entered the KM. His voice echoed giving new life to the dying mother and her eyes twinkled in happiness seeing Maan standing near her bed with tears in his eyes. Why he asked as he fell on his knees making Naina cry with regret. She knew that it would hurt her Maan as she had hidden her disease from him. She never wanted to tell him. Few months after he left for London for his studies she was diagnosed with Cancer and she did not even let Dadima know about it but when it worsen she was forced to tell. She even asked Dadima not to tell Maan but she could not hide anything and here right now Maan was standing in front of her.



Why did not you let me know Mom he cried as he slipped next to Naina on her bed. She was so pale and fragile that he did not even feel the Naina who was not less than an angel for him. M sorry baby... par Mom did not want her baby to be tensed. He cried hearing her words and you feel now I won't cry.. You know Mom you are my life phir kyu.


Sshh Maan.. don't be a cry baby.. You are Maan Singh Khuranna and you are not to be weak at any cost.. Remember if you fall weak Geet will too be weaker. He wiped his tears as he heard her does she know about you. Naina shook her head for a no. and just caressed his hair. There was a complete silence but after few minutes she spoke again. I want you to get married with Geet, Maan. He was shocked and tried to deny but she asked him to be quite. Its my dream baby... I want to see my Maan and Geet getting married.. I have dreamt of a big wedding for you both.. I want to enjoy every ceremony of your marriage and this is my last wish... maine Handa's se baat karli hain and nor they or your Dadima has problem.. sirf ab Geet ko sach batana hain and I know its only you who can tell her. He was not ready for it as he knew that his Geet had just turned 18 but it was his mother's wish and he could not say no.


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Jaan he tried to make her understand. He was scared the way she was denying wat he was saying. You are telling me a lie.. I know Mom is fine.. maine abhi tho baat ki hain Mom se... aap sach mein pagal ho Maan.. London jaake aapka dhimag karab hua hain... I will tell Mom and everyone tat you speaking lie.. I will and she ran towards Naina's room where her own parents and Dadima was waiting for them. Geet... She heard Naina calling her with her frail voice when she reached her door.


Mom.. yeh Maan jhoot bol raha hain.. I told you na don't send him to London ab dekhiye yeh keh raha hain tat you are having cancer and going to die.. aapko tho thoda sa fever hain na Mom.. you only told me na she ran and pushed everyone and sat next to Naina. Tell me na Mom.. Maan is lying na.. please.


Its true Geet... your Naina Mom is Naina could not continue as she felt choked seeing the pale expressions on Geet. She always feared this day when Geet would know about her cancer. Geet just sat looking and next she tried to run but stopped hearing Naina. You cant turn your back to me Geet.. you and Maan have to fulfill my last wish.. I want to see you both married.. I want to see my Geet as my Maan's wife.. I want to see Geet being a Khuranna.


Maan who was standing at the door looked at Geet with tears and nodded for a yes but Geet could not. She just ran and hugged Maan crying her heart out for the pain she was going. Everyone told lies... Mom ne jhoot kaha tha Maan.. she was not having fever... she is dying and I don't want her to die.. yaad hain she had told us that she will look after our babies and I can enjoy with you.. she is breaking her promise Maan... she is breaking. Maan just held her tight knowing how she was breaking. He assured the rest saying you can start with the preparations for the wedding and he took Geet along with him but stopped and looked when he Mom called him again Maan... Remember you are Maan Singh Khuranna and you are not to be weak at any cost.


You are Maan Singh Khuranna and you are not to be weak at any cost he remembered wat his Mom said while taking her last breadth the very next day of their marriage. He smiled a bit remembering how his Geet eased him on their first night and tat very act had proved fatal for her now. But now he won't be weak now and he can't as he would never let his mother down and the belief she had on him wat if there was no improvement even after a day.


Maan he heard Yash call him and he instantly wiped his tears and turned to look at him. There is still no improvement Maan...and it's scaring me. Yash did not want to hide anything from Maan. Kuch nahi hoga Yash.. She have to be back.. her brain may have forgotten that her Mehar needs her but her heart did not and I know wat I need to do. Yash looked at his eyes and somewhere it was scaring him more as a single mistake from them it would be very fatal for Geet. Wat are you upto Maan he questioned with authority and I warn you for whatever it is.. I will not let you risk her life.


She is my wife Yash and you can't stop me from doing anything saying this he walked away from Yash but Yash was fast to pull him back she is my patient and m responsible for her. Maan just stared and jerked Yash's hand and walked with a determination towards Geet. He knew he was risking and he would be emotionally weakening her but he had to. There was no other way for getting her back and even after losing her memory she was more affected by Mehar only and he would use Mehar as the way to get her back now.


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You wanted to be their Mom na... par dekho na you are not Maan held her hand and threw it back on the bed as if she was dead. You can never be their MOM, Geet.. tum tho unhse pyar bhi nahi karti.. dekho how you let your fear overpower you.. mere bacho ko jhooti umeed di thi na tumne and I swear Geet I hate you for it.. I hate you coz you were the one who made my Mehar carve for your love.. wasn't she the one who called you MOM first and today you proved tat you are just another women who felt pity for my kids. He looked at Geet for some reactions but there was none. His heart was slitting and bleeding with each word he spoke but he knew that her heart and soul could feel him and his words.


Why did you promise Mehar that you would fulfill her wish... do you even know wat she wanted.. kuch nahi jaanthi ho.. and now when she needs you.. tum yaha so rahi ho.. wah Geet wah.. Wat a big player you are... Just to get close to me you used my Mehar and Ammy.. but trust me Geet.. if you die I would be happier as my kids would be saved from you...and m happy tat your shadow would never reach Mehar who s dying right now.. Do you get.. it's all coz of you.. tumse pyar karne ki saaza mil rahi hain meri Mehar ko and I will never forgive you for it.. I will kill you if anything happens to my Mehar.. I will never let you see Ammy and Mehar again in your life I will never Geet. He said it loud but still there was no response from her. Yash cried hearing him and Rano who held Ammy tight just stood still as this was the first time Maan used to harsh words to Geet. She had just reached hospital and was shocked to hear Maan.


Maan Yash called him as his placed his hand on his shoulder but he only jerked it away looking at Geet with anger. Do you get.. you are responsible for death.. you are the cause tat my Mehar is dying each second and he walked pushing Yash away from him.


Dad.. Dad Ammy cried seeing Maan not even looking at him while Rano tried to calm him down. Sshhh Ammy.. Dad will come. He shook his head saying No Nanima.. Dad angry.. he wont come.. Dad is angry with Mom... and you know when Dad is angry he does not come back Nanima. He struggled to get down but Rano held him tight fearing that he may run after Maan. She looked back at Yash who was staring at them but her eyes widen seeing something else. She could not believe it and blinked her eyes and wiped her tears trying to confirm wat she saw


Yash.. woh Geet she pointed and Yash immediately turned only to witness Geet getting wild with closed eyes. He was shocked as he saw her trying to speak up something and next she screamed loud scaring the hell out of Rano and Yash along with Armaan. Nooo.. Nooo Maan.. you can't and she opened her eyes calling out for Maan. She just kept calling him but he was not there. She tried to move out of the bed but Yash held her tight calling out for a nurse.


Leave me... Leave me she tried to push Yash. Geet sunno meri baat suno please.. calm down Geet calm down and she instantly stopped hearing her name. She turned and saw Yash looking at her but her eyes soon turned towards the small figure that was calling and crying for her. Mom.. Mom.. her heart cried seeing her baby crying as if he was hurt and she just pushed Yash and pulled out the wires and tubes that she saw on her body and ran to Armaan. She grabbed Armaan and hugged him tight even pushing Rano whom she did not even see. Mera baby... Sssh... Don't cry.. Mom hain na... Don't cry baby. She caressed him trying to calm him down totally forgetting that she is in the hospital and is a patient.


Geet Yash called her again but she just moved out of the room trying to soothe and calm her crying and shivering baby who was hugging her tight. Yash and Rano followed fearing that she would fall down as she was very weak but to their surprise she was walking as if she was fit and fine. Geet walked straight speaking sweet nothings to Armaan how wasn't ready to even stop crying. Her heart was aching with his cries and she felt as if she would die with the pain tat she was feeling but suddenly she heard something tat shook her from beneath. She turned towards the source of voice and took slow steps trying to concentrate again wat she was hearing Where is Maan Singh Khuranna... kaha hain woh.. his daughter condition.. where the hell is he. She heard one of the nurse shout at a ward boy asking about Maan. Her heart while her hand tightened their grip on Armaan. She repeated the same words wat she heard while her legs followed the path of the nurse.


Mehar her soft voice reached his ears and his heart stopped for the moment to face her. Meri bachi ko kya hua hain she asked softly as she walked towards the room. Ammy meri Mehar theek hain na she asked the sobbing child who was so scared right now tat he did not even hear wat his mother said. Bolo na kya hua meri bachi ko she repeated again with her eyes still looking straight trying to locate the nurse who disappeared. Maan slowly turned and her legs froze as she saw those eyes with tears. Mehar she asked more of taking her name and next moment she almost collapsed hearing wat the nurse was saying to Maan if not Yash. Mr. Khuranna.. Your daughter needs you... she is sinking.


Precap: ??????

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NEXT : PART 14

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
the way maaneet got married!! everything was so much emotional bt cant tell you how much i loved it di 😳

but meher ke liye Maan is trying himself to make geet normal bt no reaction from her!!

why do i feel geet ki memory wapas aagayi thi 😲 meher is sinking mujhe bohut kuch gadbad lag raha hai di u left the update at a cliff hanger jaldi next part chahiye tha mujhe
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago

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