SADDA HAQ:THE STRANGE GIRL

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Posted: 11 years ago
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THE STRANGE GIRL
(OR THE NORMAL GIRL WHO MAKES ME FEEL STRANGE)
Randhir was standing still...no motion...lifeless...on the verge of breaking down or better to say comletely broken.She was gone...gone from his life.He wont be able to see her,fight with her or catch her😉...not anymore.He felt like he was all alone...😭😭😭
Was history repeating itself...why was that whosoever he liked or was comfortable with just walked out from his life...now he will never forgive her...never
'WAIT!!!! Was it her fault??? Was it not me who made her leave?' said Randhir to himself.But why am I sad...no...I should be happy...my best enemy is gone😡





HEY GUYS I TRIED TO CREATE AN INTERESTING Suspense...HOPE I DID
PLEASE DO HIT LIKE IF U LIKE THE START ND IF U FEEL THAT I SHOULD CONTINUE FURTHER THEN DO INFORM ME PLEASE...THANKS😊
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kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome yaar...I can feel his pain in it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awsome
.u shld continue nd plz pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good beginning
Update nxt part very sooon
Waiting to read 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this a nyc start continue yaar i cnt wait for the story to actually begin..!!
will be fun!!
continue soon!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER-1
IT WAS ANOTHER NORMAL DAY IN FITE. SANYUKTA HAD WON YSA AND SHE WAS VERY HAPPY. SHE WAS INSPIRED BY RENUKA SANYAL{SHE SURE IS IMPRESSIVE}😃😃
SANYUKTA AND KAUSTUKI WERE SITTING IN THE CANTEN AND TALKING . AS RANDHIR CAME OUR DEAR SANYU SHOWED HIM A THUMBS DOWNBUT RANDHIR IGNORED HER.😲
S: LOSER...HAAR GAYA TO KAISE IGNORE KAR RAHA HAI. OYE RANDHIR!!!!
RANDHIR IS SURPRISED BY THE WAY SHE CALLED HIM. SANYUKTA COMES AND STANDS IN FRONT OF HIM
S:INTERVIEW MEIN MAZA AAYA??{giggles} KAISA LAGA EK LADY KO ITNI SUERIOR POST PAR DEKH KAR
R:JUST SHUTUP!!!!!
HE HELD HER FROM THE SHOULDER AND SQUEEZED THEM...HIS EYES TELLING SANYUKTA TO STOP AS HE JUST CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE😭. BUT SANYKTA WAS SO HAPPY AND MOREOVER SHE HATED RANDHIR{atleast thats what she thought} SHE DIDN'T BOTHER TO LOOK INTO THOSE CHOCLATE BROWN EYES...SHE PUSHED RANDHIR AND CALLED HIM A LOSER...AGAIN!!!!OUR MR INTELLIGENT'S BLOOD WAS BOILING😡😡. HE WAS ABOUT TO PUNCH AT A WALL NEAR SANYUKTA WHEN THE PEON CAME.{thank god}
PEON:AAP DONO KO VARDHAN SIR NE BULAYA HAI
AT VARDHAN'S OFFICE
V:MAINE TUM DONO KO IS LIYE BULAYA HAI COZ I WANTED TO TELL U THAT HAMARA COLLEGE EK INTER COLLEGE FEST MEIN PART LE RAHA HAI AND I WANT YOU TWO TO REPRESENT OUR COLLEGE...BUT PEHLE HUMEIN KOI PROJECT SUBMIT KARNA HAI.SO GO ND THINK OF SOMETHING.
R:SURE SIR MAIN SAMBHAAL LUNGA
V:U ND SANYUKTA ARE A TEAM...DON'T FORGET
S:DONT WORRY SIR WE WILL HANDLE IT{stares randhir}
OUTSIDE VARDHAN'S OFFICE
S:WHAT ABOUT A SOLAR MICROWAVE?
R:TUM LADKIYON KI YEHI PROB HAI...CHOTI SOCH...TUMHE KITCHEN KE BAHAR NIKALNA HI NAHI CHAHIYE...MAIN KUCH AUR SOCH RAHA HOON BUT NOT GONNA TELL U...TUM LADKIYON KO SAMJHANA MATLAB DEEWAR PAR SAR MAARNA😆
S:DEKHO RANDHIR DONT CROSS UR LIMITS😡.LAGTA HAI YSA MEIN HARKAR BHI TUMHARI IS BADI EGO KA KUCH NHI HUA. TO HELL WITH U ND UR IDEAS. MAIN APNA KUCH SOCHUNGI ND IT WILL BE BETTER THAN URS
R:LETS SEE FARZI ENGINEER. AND YSA BHI TUM MERI VAJAH SE JEETI HO COZ MAINE INTERVIEW DIYA HI NHI
S:WHAT DO YOU MEAN????😲
R:TUM LADKIYON KO SIMPLE BAAT BHI SAMAJH NHI AATI
S:OH JUST SHUTUP RANDHIR!!!! WHY DONT U ACCEPT UR DEFEAT. AB TO MAAN LO KI RENUKA SANYAL DIDN'T CHOOSE U. TUM EK MCP HO JO LADKIYON KI SUCCESS NHI DEKH SAKTA. U R NOTHING BUT A JEALOUS FREAK!!!!
R:I HATE U SANYUKTA AGGARWAL😡
S:SAME HERE😡
THOSE WORDS PIERCED INTO RANDHIR'S HEART...SANYUKTA WAS RIGHT...RENUKA SANYAL NEVER CHOSE RANDHIR...SHE GAVE MORE IMPORTANCE TO HER WORK...HE HATED HER...NO LOATHED HER...
DO READ AUTHOR'S NOTE😊




Edited by riyasenak - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AUTHOR'S NOTE
HEY GUYS THIS WAS MY FIRST ATTEMPT.HOPE U LIKED IT. I KNOW MANY OF U WANT SANDHIR ROMANTIC MOMENTS BUT BELIEVE ME THIS TRACK WILL DEFINITELY BE INTERESTING. PLEASE DO GIVE IT A CHANCE. FOR A FEW PARTS I WILL FOCUS ON SANDHIR FIGHTS ONLY...YOU KNOW HATRED AT THE PEAK...
ALL CRITICISM AND SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOME
PRECAP:SANYUKTA WANTS TO TEACH RANDHIR A LESSON BUT COMES TO KNOW A SECRET RELATED TO RANDHIR😲 RNDHIR ABOUT TO GET HIT BY A TRUCK...😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awesome update dear...

Sandhir is team but randhir don't want sanyukta with him

And she also want the same...but this feeling hurt randhir...


Precap is scary I hope nothing bad will happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay i loved it... ...plllzzz write more!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting start ... 👏 👏 👏

good going ...

Precap : Randhir gonna be hit by a truck 😲 😲

Looking forward to read more

Update soon 😃

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