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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

At night... Aradhya is in her room ...the lightning is dull... Not much light... And the light isslightly coming on jer face ...

Shes rememberering the msll incident ... The almost fall... The eayhe heldher ...

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

shamsher is standing on the bar of Bhavri devis room , hes holdinhg a drink in his hand ... and looking at the glass...

Haal-e-dil mera puchho na sanam
Haal-e-dil mera puchho na sanam

Aapke ishq ki madhosi mein
dooba hai ye aalam..

remembering all their meeting... still doesnt believing thast soon,,,,,,, she will marry him...

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Priya

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Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

hey amaraah.. thank you so much. n thank you so much mini... chalo we guys r der na to encourage each other, this forum looks deserted but hope more ppl will come, like u said silent readers must break their silence :D :D

and nyc name for the thread... :) love it! and that trip n fall,, awww as much as I dont like cliches.. I'd love to see such stuff in the show! yar kab dikhayenge shara ko... :'( chalo glad we r having our stories :D

now I continue...

Shamsher smiles recollecting how he held her... and then snaps back

S- nahi... ye hum fir se muskuraarahe hai! ye londiya kya kya kar rahi hai humare saat! pata nhi kaise karleti hai...

Ara thinks at her place...

A- hum kyu soch rahe hai uss gunde k bare mei.. wo tho itna badtameez aur sarfira hai! lekin... *smiles remembering how he held her* uss waqt alag sa laga woh, jaise uske andar bhi thodi si insaniyat aur narm dil bacha hai...

she then shakes her head...

Just then Tilak comes... he informs her that he has fixed her marriage, and that she has to agree for his sake.. its his last wish to see her marriage before dying... he cries n does emo drama.. Ara melts but doesnt say yes...

continue guys...

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

@pree
Yaar what a part !!!

Beautiful !

Lovely

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Loved it to the core !

Love the beautiful dialogues !

When cvs show shara more people will cone for sure i thunk

I just hope cvs show them fast and without interrumtiin or disturbanckes like veer !

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Yes pree love your writings and this thread whrre everyone can write the continuation

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Story continues...

Shamsher is lost in his thoughts... Whther hes doing the right or wrong... When someines knos his door...

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Shamsher tirns around and sees munmun standing there...
M. Bhai... Undar a sakte hain ?

Sm . Haan a na munmun... Bol... Kya baat hhi ?

M. Woh... Mujhe pata chala... Apki shaadi ho rahi hain aradhya se...

S. Hum..

A. Toh... Bhai... Toh apko usse pya...

S. Dekh munmun... Mujhe usse pyaar nahi hsi... Aur na kabhi ho sakta hai... Kabhi bhi nshi... Never !

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sketie

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Saying this he storms out of the room ... Munmun is standing there ...
M. ( to hersrlf ) bhai kyun humse jhoot bol rahe hain ? ... Agar woh unse pyaar na karte... Toh unhe itna fikar kyun hoti sursuri ki ? Kyun woh soch rahe itna uss surauri ke bare mein ?