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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BabbaR_SheR

give hit to Sher's POV Kashmi...thn something else can go...yeah??...just a request...😎


Aapka hukum sar aankhon pe sarkar.. 😉😆

Posted it already give it a shot and gimme your feedback on it.. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love you Kashmi! It was beautifully written. Perfect insight into Sher's feelings..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wild-wanderer


Love you Kashmi! It was beautifully written. Perfect insight into Sher's feelings..


Thank you so much.. 😃

Love you for making me smile so wide with your lovely comment.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue


Aapka hukum sar aankhon pe sarkar.. 😉😆

Posted it already give it a shot and gimme your feedback on it.. 😃

Aa ji kahan..hukum dene k kabil kahan hain hm...hm to bs guzaarish kr skte hain😳
Anywayz...Kashmi...i think i loved Shradha's POV much...but if i get into it..then i loved the last part of Sher's POV...first few lines din't touched my heart that much...but recalled a FB..Sher kissing her hand on their first night...and telling her...apko nai pta apne hmein kitni khushi di hai...that focus on word..."KITNI"...that can make any one crazy...like really...how much happy he was😳

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P.S...you are the lucky one to know my name🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BabbaR_SheR

Aa ji kahan..hukum dene k kabil kahan hain hm...hm to bs guzaarish kr skte hain😳

Anywayz...Kashmi...i think i loved Shradha's POV much...but if i get into it..then i loved the last part of Sher's POV...first few lines din't touched my heart that much...but recalled a FB..Sher kissing her hand on their first night...and telling her...apko nai pta apne hmein kitni khushi di hai...that focus on word..."KITNI"...that can make any one crazy...like really...how much happy he was😳

-Reet😊

P.S...you are the lucky one to know my name🤣


Aap guzarish karein ya hukum hum kabhi mana nahi karenge.. 😃

Ahh that was a legendary scene in my opinion too, the beauty of it is indescribable.. 😳😳

Sorry for not being able to match your expectations wrote this one in a hurry without proof reading or anything.. 😊

Will try to write better the next time for sure..

Arrey wahhh ye limited offer sirf mere liy the tha as a gift for my drabble my dearest Reet?? 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue


Aap guzarish karein ya hukum hum kabhi mana nahi karenge.. 😃

Ahh that was a legendary scene in my opinion too, the beauty of it is indescribable.. 😳😳

Sorry for not being able to match your expectations wrote this one in a hurry without proof reading or anything.. 😊

Will try to write better the next time for sure..

Arrey wahhh ye limited offer sirf mere liy the tha as a gift for my drabble my dearest Reet?? 🤗

are wah...thankiu so much for those lovely words😳
actually i missed that epi..and watched that in today's epi as a flashback.. Shradha getting while packing her luggage😆...awww...that touched my heart...thats the reason i told u my name...felt so much loved for that scene..that it just came out of my tongue🤣.and before i cud go to edit it..coz again...i got a fit..u quoted that pretty soonish🤣
are no...it was awesome..but kinda read much better just now..so ...otheriwse...feeling were awesome..from his heart too...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kashmi you might find me weird..but that's what i am🤣...so don't mind me plz😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BabbaR_SheR

are wah...thankiu so much for those lovely words😳

actually i missed that epi..and watched that in today's epi as a flashback.. Shradha getting while packing her luggage😆...awww...that touched my heart...thats the reason i told u my name...felt so much loved for that scene..that it just came out of my tongue🤣.and before i cud go to edit it..coz again...i got a fit..u quoted that pretty soonish🤣
are no...it was awesome..but kinda read much better just now..so ...otheriwse...feeling were awesome..from his heart too...😃


Hahahaha I ditched you there quoted it faster than you could edit but I'm glad to have gotten this golden and limited offer.. 😆

That scene was too good what with Gaurav's expression when he said it.. 😳

Haha dil rakhne ke liye bol rahi ho madamji?? 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BabbaR_SheR

Kashmi you might find me weird..but that's what i am🤣...so don't mind me plz😆


I find you the opposite of weird rather you're cool mhan..

And everyone's their own kind of weird so yea quit being worried I'm equally weird.. 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

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Hahahaha I ditched you there quoted it faster than you could edit but I'm glad to have gotten this golden and limited offer.. 😆

That scene was too good what with Gaurav's expression when he said it.. 😳

Haha dil rakhne ke liye bol rahi ho madamji?? 😛

🤣...Shradha ditched Sher..and you ditched Babbar Sher..not fair😆
Ah...ain't that give some certain kind of relief...kinda sigh of relief☺️

I call other girls madamji here..and u are calling me the one😆
Nah...dil rakhna nai ata hmein...yhi buri baat hai.😛
..that was nice..but not that perfect as i found the initial one😛

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