Sherdha Drabble - If Only (updated Sher's version page 2)

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello people I'm new to this forum and to the people here but an ardent follower of this show and I'm pretty fond of it so just thought I'd share a piece of my imagination with you'll hope you guys like it as its my first attempt at writing a drabble.. Here I go

Sherdha Drabble - If Only

If only he'd know the respect i held for him in my heart.

If only he'd know how much i valued my relationship with him.

If only he'd know that promising to break me down was only strengthening my resolve to fight for us.

If only he'd know that he'd unknowingly struck a chord in my heart.

If only he'd know i desired to be with him just as much as he did to be with me.

If only he'd know the extent of affection stored in my heart for him.

If only he'd know he affected me.

If only he'd know i now loved him just as he loved me.

Yeaaa I'm done with the rubbish now, you'll can dump all those rotten tomatoes on me if you'll din like it but definitely leave back your comments for me I love reading it and yes constructive criticism definitely accepted..

Love,

Kashmi 😊

Edited by Autumn_Hue - 10 years ago

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CatcherInTheRye

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dear Kashmi...i have never and ever read anything like this before...m dying to read more...plz write something more like this or even gorgeous then this❤️

Btw...welcome to the forum...u r a😳mazing

-Babbar Sher

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wild-wanderer

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Posted: 10 years ago

Good work Kashmi! Keep writing more of these. 😊

And ya, welcome to the forum. :))

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Brenysana

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Posted: 10 years ago

I love it Kashmi! keep up the good work

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sukhee

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very well written!! Keep writing more...👍🏼

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you so much for your unexpected appreciation and such a warm welcome to this forum guys thank you.. 🤗

I was planning to write this drabble from Sher's point of view or a new one shot altogether what do you guys wish to read?? 😊

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Divya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesomme work kashmi... ⭐️ ...Keep writing..
& welcome to the forum... 😛

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-RadzLuvShakti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Love it ...do write more!!

welcome to the forum😳😉

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CatcherInTheRye

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Posted: 10 years ago

give hit to Sher's POV Kashmi...thn something else can go...yeah??...just a request...😎

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Okay I know this is fast and maybe not needed but I had to just write it for the sake of my sanity had to get it outta my system not so very happy with it but hope it passes your expectations give it a read please?? 😛

Sher's POV

If only she'd know how her face was imprinted on my heart.

If only she'd know our first meet was etched in my mind like an unerasable memory.

If only she'd know how i worshipped her.

If only she'd know the extents to which i could go for her.

If only she'd get an insight into my mad passionate feelings for her.

If only she'd get a glimpse of my intensity for her.

If only she'd know how i craved for her gentle touch driving me close to nirvana.

If only she'd know i was yet there around the wings waiting to be loved.

If only she'd know i yet loved her with every shard of my broken heart.

If only she'd know there was life in me with her around.

If only she'd know without her around there was no life at all.