I don't how much of help will this be of but however my two cents :
Firstly, i seriously do not get why..WHY is another female vamp character needed to make things work between the lead characters in terms of their relationship. Cause by the time the leads progress the audience would have gone through enough torture.
I seriously hate these 3rd person eyeing a married man in front of his wife tracks. puts me off big time. I hope, i really really hope it wraps up like ASAP, i am sure there are several other ways in which Shraddha's feelings and sincerity can be put across to Sher's heart (and there is where the creativity of CVs lie right?)
I found Sher Singh very fascinating from the beginning. I think the human behind that Spoilt Son of a matriarch is what got everyone attracted to him. There is not doubt that he loves Shaddha with all his heart. But somehow i feel the character we loved is losing its sheen. He's lost some spunk, his feelings and emotions towards Shraddha is hardly conveyed these days. I know he is hurt, and a lot of things lead to this which is justified, may be the fear of Shraddha's feelings being a lie also contributed and maybe that is what is stopping him to take a step ahead. But yaar the story is going so slow. please show SOMETHING that show progress... Sher's heart melting. Please show some conversations, these two hardly had any meaningful ones. Initially, there were loads of scenes where he showed care, compassion for her maybe not in front of her but behind her. How i miss those scenes. I hoped for some growth in his character, cause hell yeah he is flawed (some of which i love). but changing for good is always welcomed. I wanted that rudeness (the extreme kinds), the ordering, treating her like some servant sometimes (sometimes only ok, cause i initially i found eating her haath ka khaana cute, since he didn't experience those with his mother)... At some later stage, i wanted him to realize what she has lost out on getting married with him. i know he was hurt and did not want to get married to her without her razamandi and stuff, he even apologised for the same, but still he seemed to make it all about him self. i wanted him to know about her dreams and aspirations and maybe support her in those after standing up to his mother?
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