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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

@creative head- Oh that's a great compliment really.😳
But if the PH could happen, we would just about make it successful. First thing we do, is put Colors out of business,ok?😆
Oh yes we will!! colors will beg us to give one of our shows to them but we wont ever! Rot colors. :|
LOL, same here. You can imagine, i try to put myself in Phulwa's place while i'm writing and🤣 bahut saari effects hotey hai!!
UFFF! No wonder the scenes come out so well, can feel the emotions. 😉
But thoda dheyan rakhna yeh na ho itna affect ho that you forget what you were planning to do. 🤣
Haye Anu!!!☺️ I should be asking how many times your mind go there!🤣
Ssshhh! Yeh bhi koi pochne wali baat hai? But..Abhay se thoda kaam times because woh tu superhero hai na! 🤣

Ofcourse disappointed.😉 If i follow your focus, usne kuch bahut soft and...☺️ chua tha. No no, im ruining my own SS now. Aisa kuch nahin hua...yet🤣
Bahut soft and what!! You are totally ruining my thodi bahut left innocence here. 🤣
Haye not yet? And I believe hamare saath saath even Abhay cant wait for that time to come. 🤣

😆Tum se hi seekha hai how to generate besharam thoughts out of nothing but yes yahan dot dot was meant to make your besharam mind turning🤣
And you are being successful. How evil of you! Bachon ki innocence le li! 😳🤣

No, right now he's super angry so he's not exactly thinking in that line. next meeting ka intezaar karo😉
Waiting besaabri se! 😛
*sigh* me too. Love him when he's all angry and bad boy☺️
Oh YESSS! Temperatures are rising. Ufff I luuurve the bad boy act with that wicked grin. *melts*

Thanks Anu. That means a lot. Now, hoping will get some great ideas for the next part also. Don't know when will start on it😊
Ah no problemo I can understand because even I'm quite busy and havent written much for the next parts. Take your time we know the wait will be worth it. :))

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi_s

He could not ask to check her. This time he had the uncanny feeling she might hit him. He felt the corners of his mouth twitch but he controlled the need to smile. From what he could see, she wasn't hiding anything in her kurta. The cloth was hugging a little to her form and'there his mind went again. He coughed.OMG cant help thinking if our Abhay /shatru also ever felt tht her clothes were hugging a little to her form😉...having a uncanny feeling she might hit him...U r spot on Abhay...like u r hitting on her she is also hitting on u😃


LOL, mimi. I loved it when Phulwa wore her kurtas and things. It fit her perfectly. N guess what, thought just like you😆 I think shatru must have loved watching her like that.😉 Yup, both are hitting on each other. I wonder who's feeling the pain more though🤣 Still a mystery to myself really.
HAI HAi...ek mulaqat and already Abhay is having wet dreams😆😆...sorry sorry i mean dreams causing him to feel sweaty and wet in his dreams😊...ACP is gone fr sure

I wrote that bit with you in mind😆 Thought let's give mimi some of ACP's vest image😉
And phulwa...actually feeling sorry that she was unable to hit him...thats soo like her😊
And not only aarti u also had those 3 gauris checking out our Hero.😛..nt fair,,,once phulwa comes to know ...she will nt leave them
And I agree with Athira...DONT make Abhay fall fr Aarti...i know he cant fall fr her ...cause he hsa already fallen fr ...some one else😉...i dont care if aarti falls fr him ...i am sure all the village girls would fall fr him...jst like us...and i am in no hurry fr them to fall fr one another...they will fall in love and will fight the feeling Abhay obviously being tooproud to acknowledge that he is in love ...etc etc...that will b super fun reading

yes yes, do not fret my dear. Aarti will be taken care of. In this story our Abhay has eyes only for Phulwa from the start😉 N you are right, let them fight a bit before they fall in love completely😳

Honestly u have done such a grt job ...that I can comment on each line ...really...i plan to say soo much and then i loose track...bt lovely work ...love u ...a big hug🤗

A big hug back🤗If you guys were not here, for whom would i have written? So thank you😊
i jst have a feeling the next meeting bet these two is going to b super duper hot...dont gt me wrong Ami...even i found their first meeting hot and i mean in that respect the hotness will increase

Mimi, was honestly not going to put too much hotness but now that you have said it, i'changed my mind 😆 You can read it and tell me if the degree of hotness is right tomorrow because guess what? Next part is ready!!!😳


@displaypic- Yup changed it😳 Guess they were looking too cute in that pose. N really have become a fan of Abhay's besharam staring for will keep it for some time😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Ameres

Oh yes we will!! colors will beg us to give one of our shows to them but we wont ever! Rot colors. :|

Yeah😡 We will make them wait outside our office a whole day then coolly tell them no, your channel is too down-market for our show🤣

UFFF! No wonder the scenes come out so well, can feel the emotions. 😉
But thoda dheyan rakhna yeh na ho itna affect ho that you forget what you were planning to do. 🤣

Yes yes, im having to control myself really. Many times have strayed from writing and went into PhAb coma🤣

Ssshhh! Yeh bhi koi pochne wali baat hai? But..Abhay se thoda kaam times because woh tu superhero hai na! 🤣

LOL, sorry. Really what kind of question was that? Silly me!! 😆Par i think Ajay ke saat hum bhi superheroines ban rahe hai🤣 to i will not be surprised if you happen to think as many times as him soon. Practice kar te raho🤣

Bahut soft and what!! You are totally ruining my thodi bahut left innocence here. 🤣
Haye not yet? And I believe hamare saath saath even Abhay cant wait for that time to come. 🤣

And you are being successful. How evil of you! Bachon ki innocence le li! 😳🤣
Oh sorry, I did not know ke thodi innocence baaki thi tum mein warna pakka will have helped you keep it🤣 Waise hi, yahan innocence ki bahut kami hai🤣

@Abhay - He is waiting for this moment besabri se but im wondering who is more impatient to see this, you or him🤣

Waiting besaabri se! 😛

Oh YESSS! Temperatures are rising. Ufff I luuurve the bad boy act with that wicked grin. *melts*

@wicked grin *swoon*

Ah no problemo I can understand because even I'm quite busy and havent written much for the next parts. Take your time we know the wait will be worth it. :))

I got a bit overboard. Now running late in my work but...next part ready😆😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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next part is ready...wow Ami...u r the best ...i already have a BIG smile on my face...jst anticipating u know😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow wow wow...sachhi mein it's mindblowing, your piece.👏👏

This idea of an alternate reality, is truly fantastic. I've always felt that they had a lot of potential with a hate-on-hate track, the little moments of tension dissolving and reforming on a daily basis. I thought they should've dragged out post explosion track, without the kidnapping but showing the confusion in his mind and some reservation on her end if she saw him still siding with the Thakur.

I read both your parts at one go and it was simply amazing. I really had to bold and underline it to show you I really truly absolutely meant that. And I'm loving how you've kept elements of their characters preserved in the best possible way, the dacoit Phulwa in her top form and ACP sahab with all this hot+sexy+authoritative forms.

My spologies for being as detailed as the others, but I just going on and on with the readings so I'm just not sure how to pick up on any few lines to talk about because the whole thing just went so well.

Please please keep on writing - I'm seriously loving this really a whole deal. And I'd love to see how you plan on bringing their characters in front of each other for a full-on dhamaka:DD
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vita93

Wow wow wow...sachhi mein it's mindblowing, your piece.👏👏


This idea of an alternate reality, is truly fantastic. I've always felt that they had a lot of potential with a hate-on-hate track, the little moments of tension dissolving and reforming on a daily basis. I thought they should've dragged out post explosion track, without the kidnapping but showing the confusion in his mind and some reservation on her end if she saw him still siding with the Thakur.

I read both your parts at one go and it was simply amazing. I really had to bold and underline it to show you I really truly absolutely meant that. And I'm loving how you've kept elements of their characters preserved in the best possible way, the dacoit Phulwa in her top form and ACP sahab with all this hot+sexy+authoritative forms.

My spologies for being as detailed as the others, but I just going on and on with the readings so I'm just not sure how to pick up on any few lines to talk about because the whole thing just went so well.

Please please keep on writing - I'm seriously loving this really a whole deal. And I'd love to see how you plan on bringing their characters in front of each other for a full-on dhamaka:DD


Vitooo🤗Thank you for liking it. LOL, was waiting for you to read it actually😳 Now feeling good😉 was actually scared i might be changing the characters as we remember it and thought it would not go down well but really seems like it isnt the case too much, so *sigh of relief*.

@picking lines. LOL, it's ok. Next part you can pick the lines😉😆

So glad you are back. Missed you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Third part😊 Umm, i don't know if you guys will like it. Just one thing...ahem..when i'm imagining PhAb face to face, ORP is constantly playing in my head so...feel free to think of it too if you want😛😳 It's kind of long so those reading, bear with me!😆

Phulwa handed the jewellery and money to Irawati.

"I know it's not the papers of your land. But I could not find it. This money will help for your children's future." She smiled at the woman.

Phulwa could not read therefore finding the papers and recognizing it had been impossible for her but either way, Thakur would never have left the woman in peace even if she got the land back. As it is, Irawati had been selling the land when Thakur offered to buy it with no mind of giving her its worth.

"How can I ever repay you, Phulwa?"

The woman grabbed Phulwa's hands and smiled at her, tears of gratitude shining in her eyes.

"Please do not say that. You are one of my people and helping you was my duty. But you can repay me in one way." She paused and Irawati looked at her waiting for her next words. "Give your children an education especially your daughters."

Phulwa pressed the woman's between her own then turned to go leaving Irawati looking at her. She was the villagers' strength. Whenever there would be injustice done to them, Phulwa would be there to correct it.

***

Phulwa shook Babu. Her brother was sleeping like the dead. He stirred groaning in protest.

"Come on, Babu. We need to go get the ammunitions."

Babu sat on the bed reluctantly, rubbing his eyes.

"Jijia, I was dreaming about something so nice right now." He complained and ran a hand through his hair making it stick up even more.

Phulwa affectionately ruffled it.

"Yes, I am sure Gauri must have been somewhere in there." She grinned at him.

Babu laughed and quickly got down from the bed.

"No there was nothing like that," he said mischieviously, "But I forgot to ask. How did yesterday's plan go? You purposefully left me here Jijia." He looked a little annoyed and hurt at that.

His sister was all he had and he hated it when she put herself in danger. She had not told him anything yesterday also. Just went and broke into thakur's house by herself.

Phulwa hugged him briefly then tried to end the conversation. She did not want to say exactly what had happened there. Babu would have a fit if he knew she had been face to face with a police man. Literally face to face. She pushed that quickly away from her mind.

"There was no danger. It was easy really, so stop fretting, will you? Get ready quickly now."

She gave him a little push and he obeyed, but not before he noticed the strange expression in his sister's eye as she had replied. It was almost as if she did not want to meet his eyes.

***

Abhay was pacing around his office like a caged tiger. He banged his fist on the desk making the things on it rattle. Nobody made a fool out of ACP Abhay Rai Singh. He was seething. How could he have felt attraction towards her? He was now angry and confused. The latter was a feeling he was not used to. He glanced at the map on his desk. He was sure Phulwa must live in Chambal's jungle, somewhere she could observe the village yet stay out of sight. He would send a search party to scan the area. Then he got an idea which made him smile. He called Aarti in his cabin.

"Inspector Aarti, has there been cases of guns being transferred here in the village recently?" he asked her without even glancing at her. He was deep in thought.

Aarti thought for a second then nodded.

"Yes Sir. Actually a month ago, some officers had caught a suspicious van getting out of the village. According to our sources, the van was carrying ammunition but when we checked, it was empty so we had to let the driver go. "

Abhay nodded frowning little. The van had been empty. What did that mean? Had the information been incorrect or had he already delivered when the police had stopped him?

"Can you tell me the exact date and around what time this happened?" he turned his attention back to Aarti.

"I'll check and get back to you, Sir."

Abhay signalled that she could go and went to sit behing his desk. If he was thinking right, then Phulwa would be needing regular supplies of bullets and guns. Either she went to get them or they came to her. But he was betting on the last. If they were not too late, they could catch her at it. Aarti came back holding and opened file.

"Sir, they were spotted on the seventeenth, it was around noon."

Abhay looked at the calendar on his desk and a wide grin spread on his face. Aarti watched this feeling a little lost. What was he planning to do? ACP Abhay was one handsome man. She had never seen him grin before. It was quite a sight. Aarti brought her mind back from her reverie blushing a little.

"Sir, if I may ask. What are you planning to do?"

Abhay focused on her, his smile still in place.

"Noon is when the shift occurs, right? Sometimes no officers are there for the checking. There is about half an hour when the road is completely clear for anybody to cross."

Aarti still could not see where he was heading. He sighed and explained further.

"Phulwa must be getting regular deliveries of ammunitions. There is a great chance she might get one today. We need to be there when that happens. Tell all the officers no one will block the road today. Just assign two of them to stay around the area and tell them to call as soon as they notice any van crossing into the village."

Aarti nodded and turned to go. But Abhay was not finished.

"And yes Inspector Aarti, tell them to dress as civilians". He ordered.

As Aarti left the room, Abhay got up, took his gun and smiled to himself again. It seemed like fate will continue to bring us together until I catch you, Phulwa.

****

Babu drove the jeep, hiding it among the bushes. Jagan was coming to deliver the guns but this time they had changed from their usual place. After the police incident last month, they had to do it. The new meeting place was in a shed which belonged to a villager. Phulwa and Babu walked the rest of the way. Light streamed through the trees on them as they waited.

***

Abhay was in the jeep, hidden on the side of the road. He was waiting for the call before making his next move. He waited impatiently wanting to get his hands on Phulwa as soon as possible. Then he paused in mid thinking. His body burning up as his mind conjured the image of him touching Phulwa. He was now seeing hidden meanings in his own sentences. He slapped the steering wheel in frustration. This was not the Abhay he knew. He was not affected by beautiful angry eyes, soft creamy skin, hair dark as night….. Abhay opened the door violently and got down. He breathed in deeply trying to tone down his thoughts. His phone rang and he looked at it gratefully.

"Sir, the van just drove into the village. It's heading north." Jitendra's voice came through.

Abhay smirked, self-satisfied. He had been right then. She was getting a gun consignment today.

"Ok, I'll take it up from here. Stay behind but don't make your presence known until I tell you to, ok?"

He wanted to see to this matter himself. After all, Phulwa had crossed ACP Abhay's way. Nobody would take her down but him.

*****

Jagan waved to Phulwa and Babu as he got down. He looked around out of precaution then pulled the wooden box out from the back of his van. Babu came to help him, grunting with the effort. They put it in the shed and Phulwa told Babu to go in with him.

"I'll stay here and keep guard. You go inside and deal with him."

Babu glanced back at her and reluctantly went in. Phulwa shifted from one foot to the other while scanning the area. What would he be doing right now? He must know there had been a robbery at Balwant Thakur's place last night. Would he put two and two together and discover she was Phulwa? She had the strange feeling he knew already.

****

Abhay looked from his hiding place behind the bushes. There had been two men with her earlier but now she was alone. He sent Jitendra a text message telling him to send some men at the shed but to approach from the other side and make no sound at all. He himself was having trouble figuring out how to catch Phulwa from where he stood. She had a gun and was continuously scanning the area. Then the perfect opportunity came. Abhay could have thumped his fist into his hand with satisfaction. Phulwa was bending down to tie up the lace of her boots. Her gun lay on the ground near her but her concentration was no longer on her surroundings. He moved fast avoiding crunching fallen branches under him. It was only when he was almost to her side, that Phulwa jerked her head up grabbing the gun out of reflex. Abhay was faster and knocked the gun down. Phulwa uttered a cry of surprise and tried to kick him in the shins but he dodged and clamped his hand on her mouth pressing her close so she could not move.

Abhay yelled out for Jitendra who was further back. Phulwa sunk her teeth in his palm hard making him release her mouth. Abhay had a flitting thought: How many times would he get bitten by this woman?

"Babu, run!" Phulwa shouted.

She twisted from his grip bringing her knee up to hit a very specific area of his body but he moved just in time. Her knee collided with his thigh making grunt and curse under his breath. Phulwa used the opportunity to free herself and ran towards the shed but police officers now surrounded it. She wanted to go to Babu but she knew that would be a foolish move. Getting both of them arrested would end all hopes. She continued running into the woods, Abhay close at her heels.

Abhay was surprised at how fast Phulwa was running. The blow to his thigh would have prevented him from running himself if it had not been for the anger he was feeling. It fuelled him making him forget the pain and concentrate on the running figure in front of him. He had to catch her.

Phulwa glanced back at him as she barely avoided tripping over a rock. The wretched man! He really was not going to give up, was he? She increased her speed using her knowledge of the place to trap Abhay. But she had not counted on getting trapped herself. She failed to notice the cavity in the ground in front of her. It was too late to stop her momentum now and she started falling, her arms flailing out….

***

Abhay saw Phulwa falling. His arm involuntarily shot out to grab her. Instead of pulling her to safety as he had counted on, he felt himself lose balance.

Phulwa fell with a thud in the hole and Abhay fell down on top of her. They were both shocked at the sudden impact of the fall. Phulwa felt small rocks pressing painfully against her back but most disturbing was the body of the man currently on her. She groaned with the weight of it, trying to push him aside.

Abhay was transfixed. He suddenly felt as if someone had grabbed his heart and was squeezing it. This time his eyes were level with her lips and it was impossible not to notice their fullness. Like a flower bud, he thought. But those lips were now pressed together in anger.

"Get off me," Phulwa pushed against his shoulders.

He ignored her and kept pining her to the ground but shifted just a little so his full weight was no longer on her.

"I said get off me!" Phulwa was now growling, struggling to get up. "otherwise, I'll kill you."

She kept muttering protests but Abhay was no longer hearing any of them. In fact, all sounds died down around him. Everything fell silent. Against his will, he inched forward and pressed his lips to Phulwa's shutting her up instantly.

Phulwa's eyes open wide. Her mind was totally clogged. It was as if hundreds of lights were exploding in her head. The feel of his lips on her was troubling and made her heart beat faster. She felt weak at the knees and was almost grateful she was not standing. His eyes were closed. He increased the pressure and it was only then that Phulwa realised what was happening. A man was kissing her!!! How dare he? She should be killing him right now, what was she doing lying still? She tried to twist her face away to break the kiss, but Abhay's mouth refused to leave hers.

Her hand moved on the ground searching for something, anything which could stop what was happening right now. She touched a rock, seizing it then brought it down hard on his head. Abhay jerked up and growled in pain.

Phulwa quickly sat up and grabbed his gun from its holster. She inched away, putting as much distance as she could between Abhay and her in that hole. Abhay held one hand to his forehead, bringing it down to see it covered with blood. He scowled at Phulwa who was now pointing the gun directly at her.

Her mouth looked fuller and more flushed than before. Phulwa noticed his eyes straying there again.

"How dare you kiss me? I'll kill you for this," she was yelling but her breathing was still irregular making her voice sound unsteady. She had that fierce wild look in her eyes again.

Abhay just looked at her silently. Thankfully, his eyes returned to her face and not to the part at which he had been staring a while ago. Abhay was shocked at himself. What exactly had happened there? One moment he was pining her down thinking of catching her only, then the next he was kissing her??? This was crazy. But he had more serious matters at hand right now. Phulwa was aiming his own gun at him. He thought of how to grab it back.

"Don't even think about it!" her carefully controlled voice was filled with anger. "I won't hesitate to pull the trigger."

She got up, keeping him at gunpoint and put a hand on the edge of the cavity.

"Get back to the other end and do not move."

Abhay looked almost shamelessly back at her. He had a defiant look in his eyes which told you he did not like to be ordered around. Phulwa wanted to bash his thick head with a rock again. Why was he so stubborn? She was scared he might make a grab for her if she inched herself up. But she had to take the risk.

She pressed her hand on the edge and hauled herself out of the hollow. But Abhay moved lightning fast and was already up and standing in front of her when she straightened up. She was just in time to do so and lifted the gun again as he made to move towards her. The gun was now between his eyes but there was not an ounce of fear in them. In fact, he look amused which infuriated Phulwa further. His eyes seemed to taunt her, challenging her to pull the trigger.

He looked the ultimate bad boy with blood slowly dripping down his temple, fearless eyes looking into hers. At any other time, if a man had dared to touch her let alone kiss her, she would have killed him on the spot without the slightest remorse. Here this man had touched her God knew how many times already and kissed her. He should be lying dead on the ground right now but she was unable to pull the trigger. Something prevented her from doing that. While her mind told her to shoot, her heart protested vehemently. Finally she did the only thing she could think of. Without warning, she slammed down the handle of the gun on his wound. Abhay could not help it, he doubled over in pain closing his eyes with the force of it. He felt faint suddenly. When some moments later, he could muster enough strength to open his eyes, Phulwa was gone.

***

Phulwa ran all the way home darting through the thick vegetation. Her mind was in turmoil. She had felt a painful pang when she had hit him. Why was that for goodness sake? Because of him, her brother might be behind bars right now. She tried to divert her mind from it but it cropped up again. He had kissed her. She cursed under her breath.

She had to think of how to save Babu. As much as she did not like it, there was only one way . And that was………….going to the police station.


Your criticisms, comments..anything actually, are welcome😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ami too good dear, you defined all simple details that it was like seeing one scene fr a show and the grief of not get to see phulwa today really vanished frm the mind just because of ur Post. good work, good narration, u have got a very good ability to narrate the incidents very nicely... I am observing that frm ur very first story of kabile meeting. The way u described how Abhay met with Kabile people and all It was simply one of the best way to describe people's emotions and after that u just improved even more in that direction and this one was the master. 👏 🤗
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The feel of his lips on her was troubling and made her heart beat faster. She felt weak at the knees and was almost grateful she was not standing.


Simply beautiful.

She kept muttering protests but Abhay was no longer hearing any of them. In fact, all sounds died down around him. Everything fell silent. Against his will, he inched forward and pressed his lips to Phulwa's shutting her up instantly.

Abhay how dare u to kiss a girl who is not belonging to u? in the future she will be, but now? Very bad boy, cannot control urself. 😆😉

Without warning, she slammed down the handle of the gun on his wound. Abhay could not help it, he doubled over in pain closing his eyes with the force of it. He felt faint suddenly. When some moments later, he could muster enough strength to open his eyes, Phulwa was gone.

How do u do that phulwa? you slammed abay and went away too cruel...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Athira, thank you🤗🤗It's really great to hear encouraging words😊

I increased the degree of hotness for mimi really 😆 Didnt know if you would like it. I'm so glad you do😃

But poor Abhay, he could not control!😆 But since he dared to kiss a girl who doesnt belong to him yet, like you said, toh phir our dacait has to hit him na?😆 Then he'll want to make her his own so she doesn't hit him when he does it again😉
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Ami...👏👏👏👏
As long as we dont gt jaygun on tv promise me that u will b writing one epi and posting so that hum apne gum ko thora bhool paye😊
"Give your children an education especially your daughters."
This part was sooo good...she realises what she is missing...this is the USP of your writing ...u jst bring soo many angles so many emotion to it😊
Babu would have a fit if he knew she had been face to face with a police man. Literally face to face
Poor girl😛 ...she had no idea that their next meeting would would actually go beyond ...face to face😳
He waited impatiently wanting to get his hands on Phulwa as soon as possible. Then he paused in mid thinking. His body burning up as his mind conjured the image of him touching Phulwa. He was now seeing hidden meanings in his own sentences. He slapped the steering wheel in frustration. This was not the Abhay he knew. He was not affected by beautiful angry eyes, soft creamy skin, hair dark as night….. Abhay opened the door violently and got down. He breathed in deeply trying to tone down his thoughts
OHHH thats soo Abhay...I wish they had shown Shatru going through such turmoil while in kabila...say after the shelter scene...he is trying to sleep bt is kept awake by the moments spent with phulwa and he is getting super irritated bt doesnt know how to gt hr off his head😛
Abhay had a flitting thought: How many times would he get bitten by this woman?
I couldnt help thinkng abt the cake feeding scene...how she had bit him..and the look on her facewas like...yummy😉😉...probably the fingers were tastier than the cake😊
She kept muttering protests but Abhay was no longer hearing any of them. In fact, all sounds died down around him. Everything fell silent. Against his will, he inched forward and pressed his lips to Phulwa's shutting her up instantly.
Abhay kissing Phulwa ...that to against her wish...😳😳😳...U have jst killed me Ami...this is jst too hot and if I may say...soo unexpected😉 ...gosh I was totally taken by surprise while reading it😊...sooo loved it Ami...I sooo much wanted Abhay to kiss her in the serial...thanks fr making my dream come true😊
Phulwa's eyes open wide. Her mind was totally clogged. It was as if hundreds of lights were exploding in her head. The feel of his lips on her was troubling and made her heart beat faster. She felt weak at the knees and was almost grateful she was not standing. His eyes were closed. He increased the pressure and it was only then that Phulwa realised what was happening.
Loved this part...loved the way u wrote it...gosh I think he increased the pressure and woke her up from the sweet dream she was having...😳
He looked the ultimate bad boy with blood slowly dripping down his temple, fearless eyes looking into hers
I sooo miss this bad boy😭...bt thanks to u Ami wont miss him any more...I jst need to come back and read this again😊

She had to think of how to save Babu. As much as she did not like it, there was only one way . And that was………….going to the police station.


Thanks fr ending with this line...jst makes me sooo happy that the next part will again have them in a confrontation😊

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