Originally posted by: vita93
So let's say Phulwa's back and all, and the comm uncle happens to throw some party. Theme: Western again lol. Abhay asks Phulwa to go along but she doesn't feel like going and tells him to go enjoy himself. He reluctantly leaves anyways.
At the party, he's feeling quite lonely so he heads to the bar and orders a drink. Just then, comm uncle appears and congratulates him on finding Phulwa and asking where she is. Abhay's about to reply that she didn't come, when a voice behind him says "Hum yahan". As he turns around, he is blown away at seeing her in a full-length, well-fitted, one-shoulder rose-red gown. She apologises for her delay and explains to Abhay that she felt bad for letting him go alone, so he called the auntyjee for a dress (I'm pretty sure nobody in the haveli owns) which she sent over with the car. Abhay's obviously too busy admiring her to say anything😆
Right now im too dumb struck! Woaha! What a transformation it will be! Trying to imagine and...I like what i see. 😉
And then they dance!:D -insert nice slow dancing song- At first Phulwa refuses, saying she can't, but Abhay puts her hand on his shoulder and grabs her waist, telling her with a smile "Meri saat saat chalo". And you have all the nice twirls and everything yay!
😍 And time stood still...
Haha kk so anyways, song ends and they're talking to some people. Abhay introduces her to some random dude who looks at her and extends a handshake, commenting on how beautiful she is. When Phulwa takes his hand, he holds on and Phulwa gets uncomfy, snatching her hand away. Abhay notices but doesn't say anything. Sometime later she's standing near the bar alone when the dude reappears and starts harassing her. She's trying to move away when Abhay notices, goes over to the guy and starts a verbal fight with him. He's about to punch the dude, when Phulwa stops him and takes him away, saying that he shouldn't make such a scene at comm uncleji's house. Abhay's visibly angry and tells her in a huffed tone "Hum ghar chal rahan hain, abhi, issi waqt!".
Kahani mein twist! Me Likes. ;)
The whole ride home he's super angry and they don't talk. As they enter, Phulwa keeps asking him what's wrong and why he's so angry, but he rebuffs her, telling her to leave him alone and storms off to his room. Thakur watching from the side feels really happy that they seem to be breaking apart (LOL YEA RIGGGHHHTT) ROFL!!! You are too good. 😆
Phulwa enters Abhay's room (which is mysteriously dark hint hint) and asks him why he behaved in such a violent manner at the party. Abhay replies angrily "Mujhe nahin pata, mujhe kuch nahin pata!". She turns him around and realises that beneath his unkempt hair that's covering his eyes, there're tear streaks on his face. She's surprised, but more so pained that he's hurt. Abhay continues, "In kuch dino mein, mujhe achanak kya hogya mujhe nahin pata. Kyun aisa kya, woh bhi nahin pata. Par sirf yeh janti hoon, tumhare samne musibaat mujhe aab bardaash nahin hota..." Phulwa breaks down when she hears what he says, and embraces him in a tight hug. As she wipes away his tears, he holds onto her hands and time stops as ORP keeps playing in the background...
*whistles* WOW! I mean like...If this happens in the show i would be actually speechless.
I really like your idea of bringing them closer and showing the regret and all the underlying emotions together. Very nicely put!
Whatever happens next is entirely your own imagination:) Teehee, but I've only one thing to say, which is that it would be quite nice if they join hands, fingers interlocked. Their love story began pretty nicely in that manner so it'd be nice that she's actually conscious now:D
True it would be wonderful if they take it through all the levels i mean slowly making them realize what the feelings actually mean...
Teehee. So...what'd you think of it?:) It's just something that I thought of while I was desperately trying to sleep😆
Now i know why you get so less sleep. 🤣