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jeharshu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Heart touching Di

loved it to the core

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Lucky

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Posted: 9 years ago

So Beautifully written.

Amazing OS.

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Eden

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was so awesome!! It got me 😭 😭
Beautifully written naina 👏

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Rumki

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome os
loved it very much
you have wrote it well

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Ravina

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Posted: 9 years ago

naina...

it was amezing!!

u wrote so beautifull...

i loved it!!

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Anushka

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was brilliant !!

You described Meher's emotions perfectly, wanting to leave him but still unable to leave him. 😭

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Nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aww...it was so emotional yr...

U penned it down brilliantly...

Loved ur writings...

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YaSha0512

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Posted: 9 years ago

so sad

but so well written

they spent one last night together

b4 she snuck away

both not wanting it to end

but Meher took the decision to leave b4 he woke

maybe afraid he wouldn't let her go ????

wonder what happened when he woke?????

did he remember everything did he try to find her ???

was he angry sad indifferent????

would be gr8 if u could write OS to continue this

get Abeer POV

anyways thanks for pmn plz keep em comin

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Nidhi54321

@Nidhi54321

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great work Naina!

This was really deep.

Meher's emotions were so well-portrayed!👏

I could literally feel how hurt she must have been😭

Both of them know how much they love each other but still cant give in to their feelings.

i wished abeer had apologised to her atleast once that time .

Really good work baby!

Love you

P.S: Merii ek chhoti si request hai😃 if you have time or you feel like, please write this story from Abeer's POV too. I would love to read it

Edited by ria54321 - 9 years ago

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blackheart489

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Posted: 9 years ago

You are an amazing writer

It was beautifully written

Keep doing😉

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