MehBeer OS || Would You Have Believed Me?

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Would You Have Believed Me?

"Bullshit!" Meher said in a matter of fact tone. "If you honestly think that she didn't have a clue who she was kissing in the middle of the night, then you're an even bigger idiot than I had thought you were."


"Meher, she said she didn't know na." Abeer tried defending.

"How did she not know? Does she not know how you look? Does she not know what cologne you use? Or how you feel or how you taste?" Meher questioned.

Abeer hung his head low as he took in her words. He didn't want to believe her but when she questioned him like that, he couldn't help but think otherwise.

"Abeer, she's just using you okay. She wants to use you for your money, your status, your image and your reputation. She has got you wrapped around her fingers so badly that you can't even see straight." Meher said.

"And you knew?" He asked with a heavy heart.

Meher clenched her teeth.

"This was your personal matter and I didn't want to get involved." She said softly. "Besides, even if I had said otherwise, would you have believed me?"

"Yeah." Abeer whispered. "I'm believing you now aren't I?"

He gave her a broken smile with his arms spread wide.

Meher clenched her fingers as she attempted to stop herself from crying herself.

From the way Abeer walked away, Meher knew he was crying.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My personal fav out of all the OSs you just posted :)
I loved this one it conveyed a lot in a few words.

The way Abeer was cheated on, the way she helped him come to terms with reality, it was all just beautiful.

The ending did break my heart, I imagined (in my crazy head) Meher and him in each others arms <3

Keep writing xoxo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Small os but depicted all

Emotions
Superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really cool...
Wanted to read more...
But its finished as soon as I started...
Aur dikhao aur dikhao

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ishana-

My personal fav out of all the OSs you just posted :)

I loved this one it conveyed a lot in a few words.

The way Abeer was cheated on, the way she helped him come to terms with reality, it was all just beautiful.

The ending did break my heart, I imagined (in my crazy head) Meher and him in each others arms <3

Keep writing xoxo


Thank you so much Ishu. <3

You probably liked this more since it did depict a lot more feelings than the other ones that were more detached. :)

I could have ended it like that but the stage that their relationship was in, it didn't really fit in.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --fero--

Small os but depicted all

Emotions
Superb


Thank you Fero. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: babydolll

Really cool...

Wanted to read more...
But its finished as soon as I started...
Aur dikhao aur dikhao


Haha, one shot hai meri jaan. Isse aage aur kuch ni mile ga. 😆

But I will be writing more pieces in the future. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Who kissed Abeer 😲😭
I am feeling jealousy 😆

Ending u Made me churn , I even pictured our Devdas Abeer in that red shirt , with broken smile , out stretching his arms

It was beautiful .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Who kissed Abeer 😲😭

I am feeling jealousy 😆

Ending u Made me churn , I even pictured our Devdas Abeer in that red shirt , with broken smile , out stretching his arms

It was beautiful .


Uski girlfriend ne 😆

It's funny I pictured the same thing while writing it 🤔😆

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this was beautiful, I loved it...the depth, the way you penned it down...perfection!

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