Not meant to be || Mehbeer SS || ch 16 & epilogue updated. - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: VJDIPA

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!

Pm me once done..


Sure 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Fantastic os

meher crossed her limits
poor abeer is so hurt


Thank you heema... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: jeharshu

i was just speechless

it was awesome di
nd i left with loss of words
it was rocking as like as
ur before works
eagerly waiting to read more
plz do continue soon
nd thanks for the pm di



Thank u dear..!!!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
awesome update
but omg talk about a doosie
Meher heard him defending her to his father
still she accuses him n talks s**t
is she N**S
honestly where did that come from
he was just trying to help
as for u continuing plz do
kinda scared about title though was hoping she could make it upto him n win him back
after a lot of him ignoring etc of course
but then again some hearts cant survive after two heartbrakes
just need to wait n see what uve got in mind
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awsome
N
Mindblowing
Defo cont
Sorry for being late but I m from gujrat nd you know na dange hue the so net bndh tha
Ty for p m me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
AWESOME SS NAINA.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB UPDATE.
STARTING PART WAS BLASTING DEAR.
SO MUCH FIRE IN IT.
IF STARTING IS LIKE THIS WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN STORY PROCEEDS FURTHER.
REALLY ABEER IS TRU LOVER WHO HELPED INDIRECTLY MEHER.
KUBER IS VILLION BEHIND THEIR SEPERATION.
HOW CAN MEHER THINKS LIKE THAT ABEER HELPED HER TO MAKE HIMSELF FEEL INFERIOR. HOW SHE CAN STOOP SO LOW THAT SHE SPOKE HE WANTS TO SLEEP WITH HER.
LOVES THE DARING ANSWER GIVEN BY ABEER. REALLY FANTASTIC.
STARTING IS JUST AWESOME.
INTERESTING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AS STORY PROCEEDS.
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊


Edited by sandhYA_123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
So finally I read this...
I slept yesterday so couldent read when I read your comment and I came here to read this...
So coming to the update
It was great as usual
I liked when Abeer said he still considered Mehers family as his... so his heroic act was for his family...
Kuber he is again in for seperation
Meher's words were not so good Abeer baby felt heartbroken
And now finally its over...
Abeer could not take the the blame Meher put on him but why should him anyways... he is right at his place...

But I couldent digest when Meher told him that last time it was 2.5 crores given to her and asked her to leave... how come Abeer missed this I thought he will ask her what happened eight years back... but he just caught few words of Meher and then it started not meant to be...

Hope in the coming updates it will become meant to be...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Naina 🤗 I just loved the starting line of this story, Will take some time to read and unres, hope you won't mind.

Res!

**Un res***

That was such an interesting start. Your take on this current track was really very nice.
You pulled it off well in portraying Abeer's and Meher's plight.

Abeer stood by Meher's side when Kuber blamed him..aww that was so sweet of him.

I loved it where this update ended. Abeer's reaction for Meher's words was so interesting and made me exited to read more. You should continue this. Lookin' forward to read more :)

Since my exams are ongoing, I might not be regular, but I'll try to catch up the updates of this story at my own pace. Keep up the good work, baby!.

With Love,
Sapna.

Edited by .SSSS. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

awesome update

but omg talk about a doosie
Meher heard him defending her to his father
still she accuses him n talks s**t
is she N**S
honestly where did that come from
he was just trying to help
as for u continuing plz do
kinda scared about title though was hoping she could make it upto him n win him back
after a lot of him ignoring etc of course
but then again some hearts cant survive after two heartbrakes
just need to wait n see what uve got in mind
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin



Thank u for your comment dear...!!!! 😃
Will surely pm u...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

AWESOME SS NAINA.

LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SUPERB UPDATE. Thank u soo much...!!!! 😃
STARTING PART WAS BLASTING DEAR.
SO MUCH FIRE IN IT. Ohh yeahhh 😉
IF STARTING IS LIKE THIS WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN STORY PROCEEDS FURTHER. Wahi hoga ho naina chahegi... 😆 Bad joke... 😆
REALLY ABEER IS TRU LOVER WHO HELPED INDIRECTLY MEHER.
KUBER IS VILLION BEHIND THEIR SEPERATION.
HOW CAN MEHER THINKS LIKE THAT ABEER HELPED HER TO MAKE HIMSELF FEEL INFERIOR. HOW SHE CAN STOOP SO LOW THAT SHE SPOKE HE WANTS TO SLEEP WITH HER. Sometimes we say stuff we don't mean a bit... Meher got carried away in anger and ended up uttering that shit...
LOVES THE DARING ANSWER GIVEN BY ABEER. REALLY FANTASTIC.
STARTING IS JUST AWESOME.
INTERESTING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AS STORY PROCEEDS.
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. Yeah... Sure
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊



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