Not meant to be || Mehbeer SS || ch 16 & epilogue updated. - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
nice start...
do continue...
so mher wil know hw abeer saved her house... but her emotions overtake her & she hurts abeer badly...
so meher was given money to divorce abeer & his dad is badmouthing meher infront of abeer but abeer argues with his dad...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Amazing start of a story. Would love to read more.

Please continue. It was so well written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
I liked it very much
Plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Fantastic os
meher crossed her limits
poor abeer is so hurt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all today I am on a mission to complete ur updates 😆 Today. Wish me all the best .

Can I hug u babes 🤗🤗

This is awesome, really enjoyed reading it . I wish something like this happen in our show , but no ... We are not lucky , we are getting accident track .

Now I want to see a complete Wooing Meher 😆
And I am not sure ki even our Abeer could stand on his words 🤣

But seriously that was totally emotional. Loved it to core . Meher needs some Akal , she witnessed his conversation with his dad , felt bad but again her ego won against her love , she said cruel words to him . I am liking this rebel Abeer , tired of Sankaari Abeer 😆

Continue soon
Thank you so much for pm. Babes and yeah very biggg sorry for not replying soon .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome update...love it...meher ego won against her feeling...this was emotional update...continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--

res :P


writing something so dont wanna mix up yours and mine. but the start seems interesting. loved the initial quote. definitely continue. will un-res in a while or so 😆

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I am back 😆 Naina what a theme you have picked.! Meher finally realising her mistakes and abeer putting her in place. me super likey. her attitude was getting too much by the day 😭 there is a difference between self-respect. pride and ego 😡 thank you ari... 😃 Glad u are liking it... And I agree... There is a big difference between the two...

Meher over-hearing kuber and abeers convo was 😭 I know...

Despite everything kuber really loves abeer and i dont really think he has anything major to do with their break up. he just cant express it like madhavi. I feel bad for him at times ditto... I also sometimes feel that kuber might not have separated mehbeer... He really loves abeer... Just that he doesn't show it...

You put abeer's feeling really well in this...his restlessness on not seeing her...his calling just to irritate her...and how he immediately agreed to meet. So so abeer. 👏 Thank you...!!! I ❤️ Abeer...

the hotel scene was heart breakingly sadistically beautiful 😆 my fav part ❤️ i knew it... That part would appeal to you the most... 😛finally abeer confesses and then realises he should stop running after her and meher realises she should start running after him. Very well said...!!! me likey 🤣 looking forward to see what happens next 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: namrak

Awsome update...love it...meher ego won against her feeling...this was emotional update...continue soon...!!!


Thank you namra... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...

First of all today I am on a mission to complete ur updates 😆 Today. Wish me all the best . all the best madhu...!!! 👍🏼 You have a lot to catch up I guess... 😆


Can I hug u babes 🤗🤗 yes yes... Hugging you back honey... 🤗

This is awesome, really enjoyed reading it . I wish something like this happen in our show , but no ... We are not lucky , we are getting accident track . yes... We aren't that lucky and the cvs aren't that creative... Fair enough 🤣

Now I want to see a complete Wooing Meher 😆 Ok... 😛
And I am not sure ki even our Abeer could stand on his words 🤣 let's see... 😳

But seriously that was totally emotional. Loved it to core . Meher needs some Akal , she witnessed his conversation with his dad , felt bad but again her ego won against her love , she said cruel words to him . I am liking this rebel Abeer , tired of Sankaari Abeer 😆 thank you darling...!!! Glad u liked it... Oh I'm also loving this new rebellious abeer...

Continue soon
Thank you so much for pm. Babes and yeah very biggg sorry for not replying soon . your w elcome babe and its okk... Better late than never 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Pm me once done..

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